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Uma

@adi2512

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: GoldenDew
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Sou...🤗

Pls don't do that...

I'am so sorry...got u into this mood...b4 u go to sleep...😕

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MercurialMedusa

@MercurialMedusa

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: adi2512

Sou...🤗

Pls don't do that...
I'am so sorry...got u into this mood...b4 u go to sleep...😕

Nah its not glum.. I am just overwhelmed.. can't point out what it is.. but there was something in this OS which touched the corner which I didn't even knew existed in my heart.. thank u for this Uma 🤗

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roberoi

@roberoi

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Ah as thoughtful and kind as ever... You pass and rise above the benchmark I set for u in my mind always... How u do it baffles me... Salute to u dear

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melliflous

@melliflous

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Uma 🤗

This was fantastic. So inspiring ... So deep! The pond scene was something different... Something unusual about it... Something too deep. This was splendid writing.. Well, after a horrid day if I get to read this at the end then it just me feel hopeful and good again!! Thank u!

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itsRitzi

@itsRitzi

Achiever

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

wow wat a unique and beautiful story !!!

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kaash mere pass bhi aise ideas aate

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umam

@umam

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Uma 😊-- your interpretation and take on the characters is wow-- two souls journeying together time and space and eternally bound -- i never thought that telly characters could inspire such thoughts 😳

Made me watch the pond scene again and again.. and one thing I noticed now, which stuck me as so meaningful.. When Shiv says that A can take on all the taanav and bear the pain, the camera focused on the pond behind for sometime...A looks calm like the still pond to others bearing all the pain so silently, but Shiv can see the ripples and the agitating currents below the calm surface, which he understands and only he can soothe and has the haq...

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Uma

@adi2512

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: umam
Uma 😊-- your interpretation and take on the characters is wow-- two souls journeying together time and space and eternally bound -- i never thought that telly characters could inspire such thoughts 😳

Made me watch the pond scene again and again.. and one thing I noticed now, which stuck me as so meaningful.. When Shiv says that A can take on all the taanav and bear the pain, the camera focused on the pond behind for sometime...A looks calm like the still pond to others bearing all the pain so silently, but Shiv can see the ripples and the agitating currents below the calm surface, which he understands and only he can soothe and has the haq...

umam.,

You got the analogy absolutely right...!

This lake scene is my favourite b'coz., it is a perfect suffix to the scene., where Anandi asks Shiv to marry her.

That day., they were sitting near a stream...Anandi's mind depicted that stream...agitated even on the exterior...Shiv was there to contain it even then...

Do u think any Man would agree to a proposal like that., where in she is clearly saying that she has no emotions whatsoever towards the marriage...But still, he oblized.

Now., her mind is that lake...calm on the exterior but with ripples deep inside...with respect to her past. Do we expect Shiv to step back in such a scenario...absolutely NO...

He is confident he can soothe away those ripples for sure...

Anandi has indeed come a long way...

A stream ( water fall ) joins a Lake., a Lake ., a River., and a River...joins The Sea...!

😃

Edited by adi2512 - 12 years ago

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Vishakha_Sakhi

@Vishakha_Sakhi

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Beautiful and touching Uma!! I have no words!

Thank you for writing! 🤗

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Uma

@adi2512

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: roberoi
Ah as thoughtful and kind as ever... You pass and rise above the benchmark I set for u in my mind always... How u do it baffles me... Salute to u dear

Sangeeta.,

Thank U for your sweet words...😳

Its just a small attempt from me to focus a ray of sunshine...in these times of thundering cyclone...😃

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malika

@_symphony

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Uma - Its so very insightful and pure - Loved the way you described AnSH's current state without even mentioning their names once.Its not a scenario bit the cvs can surely take a deeper insight into the story from this piece...its beautifully written.

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