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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: serialwatcher16


India becoming a military dictatorship, my worst nightmare, god forbid.



I would like to know what could possibly go wrong which already hasn't? Take the situation of the country in an observer perspective and check how changes can be imbibed into the system.
Question is, are we, the people, open for a change? We are used to getting away with little things that we do when in a government office, driving on road etc. Will we welcome a stricter regime?

I am not very sure anymore.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Kalyaani

The whole discussion gave me goose bumps, the attention to detail and the ability to think about every aspect and alter plans to ensure results. I am beyond admiring the two, I fear them now.



Yes, they are to be feared. Anyone who is capable of messing around with Samaajik Vyavastha are to be feared. Arnav and Khushi has their agenda - it doesn't matter how unequivocal they are with their perspective of solution but in a room full of power mongering zealots, it becomes hard to differentiate the two from the rest.

So what makes them different from other politicians?
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Surya.Ravi

very interesting update..😊



Thank you..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: boyznaka

There's so much catching up left to do! Can't wait to read the new-er chapters. Apologies for lagging behind RB. =]



Yeah, still no sound of you...Hope everything is alright with you...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 1chilly

Loved chapter 23. I am taking my time reading as sometimes I read a chapter twice or even thrice to understand it. It is such an engrossing story and I am thoroughly enjoying it. I try to read all the comments and your replies to the comments to get an insight on what's happening in this ff.



Thank you. The comments on this FF are great and they provide a different perspective than what I tried to convey. I am glad that you are reading those too.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: SS88

This is not fan fiction, it's a political thriller. You really should look into getting it published. I think I suffered whiplash from the sudden twists in the last two chapters. Sampat, Saini, Gupta and Rathore knew SMJ? And they were present in his cell when he passed away? And the flashback is actually not a flashback? It's a plan, a ploy to fool Akaash into believing they were on the same team as him. Or is it really? You astound me with your writing. You really do.



Thank you. I cannot guarantee that there won't be twists anymore but they are going to be very small in number. Its now time to start wrapping things up.
Yes, Arnav and Khushi just played along while in reality they knew exactly what they were getting to. They have been planning to get out of Akash's house for a while and have been improvising on their words ever since. About the three lawyers - more to come...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: hegdemedha

WOW! Brilliant. So, Arnav and Khushi truly do believe in "We, the people". I have to re-read some of the earlier chapters.

Do we get an update today considering its significance for "We, the people ..."?:-)

PS: Will edit this post to add comments on the last few chapters.



Thank you...Yes, they truly do believe in the concept. I apologize for not writing till date. Way too hectic with work and now I have fallen sick. But since I have nothing but time, I decided to write today :-)

Still waiting for your comment :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: girlz-rule

@RockBarbie: Nyc story!!!!😊



Thanks..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kvarsha

well its really interesting reading both updatess...

akash is following his dad wishes means dinkar , and he is planning on changeing the course of our country policitics and already started it by formimg a law firm man thts gr88...
and our arhii they r also in plan to change the same poilitics but got to the know the reality
of the situation here so theyr playing along it... w8ng for a chance to play their plan..
and another thing is its all abt politics its very diffcult to comment on chapters they r far ma understanding bt still trying itt... while reading chapters am getting answers but finding new
questions and answers are really complcated to get them ...
hmm seriously how much do u work to a one update according to concept maintaing the charcaters thts really gr88...
i have another doubt wt will be age of arhii now 😕
update soon , thnx 4 pm 😊



Everyone wants to change and everyone means sort-of good but their methodologies are different. There are no good paths there are no bad paths. The story is about confrontation of these people in achieving things for themselves in a way they deem fit.

Arnav and Khushi are somewhere in their mid-thirties.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter 29:

"One cannot organize a coup in this day and age Malvika especially in a country like ours. However with enough chaos, it becomes impertinent for military to come in and take control of governance. Head of the state will still remain a representative from the government but will be working under the directives of a board constituting of personnel from military and diplomats. If everything goes according to plan, that's what will happen." Arnav said nonchalantly.

"Every time there was a military rule in a country they have had history of social unrest with the government for a considerable length of time. Sure there is dissatisfaction here and there have been protests in country…"

"Is it just dissatisfaction here and there, Malvika?" Khushi asked before Malvika could finish. "Almost every state has a group of people protesting against government for not getting their voices heard. Be it tribal or ordinary civilians who have been flummoxed because of underdog treatment they have been receiving for decades. North eastern states want a complete out from this democracy all thanks to the government turning a blind eye towards them for decades." Khushi replied.

"Khushi, please don't talk about those states as if you have been there; at least not when an ex-cop from ITBP is sitting right in front of you. There is already enough military presence in those areas and people are unhappy with it as it is. If there is a strong military influence at the center, these states will start an open rebellion provoking other groups in the country which have been dormant till now. States which are looking for separation, group of people concentrated on a specific geography elbowing an out from their state. There won't be time for central government to sit and chat with these people so they will react. If there weren't any social unrest before, then there will be one during this induced chaos of yours." Malvika replied harshly.

"Alright that's enough." Shukla said seeing Arnav ready with a response. "This is not a time for debate." He said looking pointedly at the three. "Tell us what are your plans and we will see what we can do," he said nodding at Malvika. She replied him with a hesitant shrug.

After several moments of silence, Khushi said, "First we have to find people. Well we have to find two sets of people – the ones who have left the country and the ones who are running the second part of the show."

"Are you going to bring the ones who have left the country back?" Shukla asked.

"I don't think they will come back Shukla but we will have to try to get them back. They have been priced according to their ability and must be offered job that offered both security and monetary gains. All we can do is finding out who contacted them and try to persuade them to reconsider their decision." Khushi said bleakly.

"You sound as if you blame them for the choices they made," Malvika noted sardonically. Khushi looked at the woman and locked eyes with her.

"I don't blame them. They were just ordinary people trying to survive," she replied. Malvika couldn't help but chuckle mirthlessly at the honesty of the statement. The days of men and women fighting for their country, for their children's future was long gone. Now it was a time of self-fulfillment and keeping the legacy alive in most plausible safe ways. No one cared what happened to governance anymore. Malvika had seen various instances of detachment from reality. Young people getting lost in fake world of entertainment and partying without knowing the kind of tribulations people were going through on the other side of the road. She couldn't blame them. She couldn't blame the kids' parents' either. It was how life was; bitchy at best.

"During hung parliament, president will be under tremendous pressure from both the houses. The upper house cannot make a decision without lower housing passing it but in cases like these, they can come up with a temporary solution like they did back in Emergency," Khushi said.

"What kind of solution are we talking about?" Shukla asked.

"Every government distills the basic concepts of democracy and embraces it with a mixture of oligarchic or monarchic elements. What we have to do is expand this idea a little and remove the fuzzy sections and make it more…federal. So when hung parliament prolongs, President and the upper house can come up with an agenda to run the country with as much normalcy as possible with already functional government bodies, military and diplomats. Government agencies and different government organizations fall under a specific ministry and since the ministry acts only as a guidance counselor, these agencies can still operate without any hindrance under a federal rule. With the slight difference here the government, or what's left out of it, will work closely with military with few or many of the governance positions filled by military personnel. In all technicalities current government will hold the office nominally till the formation of next government. That's really a commemorative position than a realistic one so it is not something we will be worrying out," Arnav explained.

Malvika and Shukla were speechless.

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