VALENTINE special OS part 2 updated on pg 3!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hello everyone! I am once again here with my one shot on RAYA.This time I will try to write a long one n will give you in 2 parts :) Valentine special for all RAYAn and BALHIANs:)
This Os is about how I want Ayesha's valentine party to go !! so here i Go


VALENTINE SPECIAL

Whole Kapoor mansion is decorated with red and white heart shape balloons, flowers with n a touch of white ribbons. Entire kapoor family is ready n are busy in welcoming their guests.

When suddenly 2 young ladies shouts: arey wo dekho RAM KAPOOR aagya

1st lady: wow He is so handsome n cute :)😛

2nd lady: pata nahi iss ney Ayesha sey kese shaadi kr lii.. us sey better tou mei hun :(😭

1st lady: she is so lucky :(😭

And the camera shifts on our cute RAm clad in black suit with red tie n red handkerchief in his pocket 😛 looking soo cutee as always :) coming down the stairs n his eyes are searching for one and only his priya!!


kahan hai wo? sudhir jee or shipra jee tou aagaye hain, nuts bhi yehan hy hai kia wo nahi aayi ??where are you priya :😭 I am dieing to see u !! n golu is all sad 😭


when he hears a voice: arey priya puttr tu aagaii 😛

n here she is clad in red saree with black backless blouse n hair on one side n a fresh red rose in them :) but unfortunately her back is facing him !!RAm trying hard to catch her one glimpse !! But all his efforts went in vein when our beloved CONDA (or I should say the brand new one looks like chipkali ) comes in front of him 😡


Ayesha: RAm kesi lag rahi hun mei??

Ram's eyes still on priya :boht pyaari humesha ki tarah!!

Ayesha: pata hai Ram aaj mei srf aap k liye tyaar hui hun sirf aap

when Ram cuts her in between : saree ka yeh black n red combination boht pyaara lag raha hai tum par!! yeh red rose tumare balon mei lagne k baad or bhi khoobsoorat lag raha hai!! or at last tumarii humesha ki tarah yeh tedi bindi badi achi lagti hai

:) HE is all lost in her beauty 😛

Ayesha all confused : RAm yeh kia bol rahey hain aap?? Black n red?? pr mei ney tou yeh red gown pehna hua hai?? BINDI ?? wo bhi mere iss designer gown pr?? chee!! orr red flower?? mei ney tou koi red flower nhi laga hua :( ( in her as always dumb style)
N ramm who is still lost in his only love's beauty n smiling when Ayesha jerks him!!

Ayesha: RAMMM!! aap theek tou hain ?

RAM: han Ayesha I am all fine.. plzz excuse me for some time :)

and kisi tarah humara bechara RAm us chipkali seyy jaan chudwa kr bhagta hai to reach his priya !!

and he sees priya chatting with Krishna jee n DAADI!! (ab wahan daadi k hotey huey tou chance maarna mushkil hy nahi namumkin hai)

almost half hour past's n golu ko ek bhi chance nhi mila priya seyy baat krne ka :( ek chorta tou doosra pakad leta priya ko.. :( poor Ram karey tou kia karey 😭

This is when Rishabh call everyone on the dance floor. All the couples proceeds towards the dance floor including NUTS n RAHUL( ab kartik tou hai nahi mujhey nutss akele khadi hui achi nhi lagegi) where as NEha is busy on phone wth her valentine Vikram who unfortunately is in LONDON :(


RAM: yeh moka acha hai!! lets take priya on dance floor 😉 n walks towards priya who sees RAm smilingn heading towards her :) n gives him the green signal to come n wish her :)


BUT once again this KABAAB KI HADDI comes ( as priya said to sudhir RAM tk ponchne ka raasta boht bada or mushkil hai) with lots of reptiles on the way pehle conda now chipkalli :(


Ayesha: RAM come lets dance!! dekhiyeh saarey couples wahan hain!


RAM: sorry Ayesha!! mujheyy dance nhi karna aata or tumari bhi tabiyat kharab hai!! I don't think it will be good fr ur health.😡
(koi tou bachale mujhey iss sey )


AYESHA: common RAM em alright!! jub aap mere saath hotey hain mei bilkul theek hoti hun 🤢( WILL KILL U CHIPKALII!! PUKE fr ur this dialogue) :(


And takes him to the dance floor!! 🤢 leaving priya all sad :( 😭

BAckground music

(Aankh hai bhari bhari aur tum
Muskuraane ki baat karte ho)
Zindagi khafa khafa aur tum
Dil lagaane ki baat karte ho
Aankh hai bhari bhari aur tum
Muskuraane ki baat karte ho
PRIYA's eyes are all flooded with tears ( aansoo keh rahey hainn aaj nhii bhayenge tou kub bhayenga :(
Mere haalaat aise hai
Ke main kuch kar nahin sakta
Tadapta hai yeh dil lekin
Main aahein bhar nahin sakta
ram feeling so helpless seeing tears in priya's eyes :(
Zakhm hai hara hara aur tum
Chot khaane ki baat karte ho
Zindagi khafa khafa aur tum
Dil lagaane ki baat karte ho
Aankh hai bhari bhari aur tum
Muskuraane ki baat karte ho
Zamaane mein bhala kaise
Mohabbat log karte hain
Vafa ke naam ki ab to
Shikaayat log karte hain
Aag hai bujhi bujhi aur tum
Lau jalaane ki baat karte ho
Zindagi khafa khafa aur tum
Dil lagaane ki baat karte ho
Aankh hai bhari bhari aur tum
Muskuraane ki baat karte ho
(Kabhi jo khwaab dekha to
Mili parchhaaiyaan mujhko)
Mujhe mehfil ki khwaahish thi
Mili tanhaaiyaan mujhko
Har taraf dhuaan dhuaan aur tum
Aashiyaane ki baat karte ho
Zindagi khafa khafa aur tum
Dil lagaane ki baat karte ho
Aankh hai bhari bhari aur tum
Muskuraane ki baat karte ho
Mm hm hm hm hm hm hm hm hm hm


UFFF eekkk touu haalat itnee gumgeen uprrr seyyy isss DJ neyy bhii esaaa songg chala diya :(((😭😭😭 chaliye tou song yehan khatam hua lekin priya k ansoo hain jo rukne ka naam nhi le rahey :(( she tries hard to stop her tears but nahi kar pa rhi :(😭

AFTER almost one hour ayesha comes to Natasha!!

Ayesha: Nuts tum ney kahine Ram ko dekha??

NATASHA: NO!! n moves from there!! when she recieves a sms!! reading tht she smiles n show a thumbs up to NEHA :)
😉😉

Ayesha thn moves towards priya who at the time is with neha

Ayesha: di aap ney RAM ko dekha hai?

PRIYA: nahi!!

AYESHA looking at her eyes which are swollen:di aap ro rahi ho??

PRIYA: nahi ayesha wo thaki hui hun na bus ab ghr k liye nikal rahi hun!!

AYESHA: arey esey kese kuch kha to lijiye!!
(I want to kick her so hard.. kitnii dramebazi krti hai)


n calls waiter n ask him to serve someting to priya!!

Ayesha leaves!! when the waiter is serving food to priya !! NUTS pushed the waiter n saara khana priya k upr girr jata hai!!!

waiter: sorry madam!!

PRIYA: its okay aap jaiye

NEHA n NUTS: aarey priya tumare touu saareyy kapde kharab hogaye !! chalo change krlo

PRIYA: yehan kahan sey change karoon!! mei pata nahi aa kyune gaii yehan.. jub seyy aayi hun kuch na kuch ho rha hai( she is all disturbed n jealous)

NUTS: aarey priya aap k room mei aap shahyad kapde pade hain wahan chal k change kr lijiye

PRIYA:nahi yr choro mei ghr ja rahi hun.. wese bhi peehu k soney ka waqt hogaya hai.

NEHA: priyaa tum eseyy kese ghr jaogi.. or wese bhi tumare andr seyy chicken ki smell aarhi hai :( comee lets change :(
ab priya k pas koi orr choice nhi hai other thn going in to their room n change!!

NEha n priya walks towards the room n nuts text someone back "SHE IS COMING BEST OF LUCK n DONT WORRY ABOUT AYESHA "

when they are about to reach the RAYA room neha's phone rings!1

NEHA; priya tum chalo mei aati hun

PRIYA: arey yr kis ka phone haii baad mei attend karna pehle mere sath chalo andr.

NEHA: Darling VIKRAM ka hai!! try to understand plz.. yeh frst valentines hai jis pr hum saath nhi.. plzzz n makes puppy face

PRIYA: smiles abit n says OKAY.. n open s the door of her room!!!


N SHEE ISS ALL shock!!!!!😛


TO BE CONTINUED :))))😊


GUYS do leave ur comments good or bad!!! n this one part was bit boring n emotional with less RAYA but the next partt will bee full off RAYA romance!!! SO WAIT for it :)
till thn good byee!!
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n plzzz click like n do leave ur comments :)



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bpatil3 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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WOW awesome...
Go ahead--Chipkail 👏

i can't stop laughing that Neha, Nutz and Chipkali convesration..

Beech beech aap bhi chipkali ke upar comment maar rahe ho na.. sio nice 🤣

Go ahead👍🏼

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hayeee waiting eagerly please continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice start... continue soon
waiting for next part!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Haha!! Loved the first part! Waiting for the next!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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like the part lamba raste aur lots of reptiles...pehle conda ab chipkali...continue quick plzzz
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Posted: 13 years ago
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continue yaar...
u just rocked...special mention of chipkali too hehehe...
thank you
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice update...can't wait for nxt...please continue soon!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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THANK u so much guys!!! ur comments means alot to me :)😛
will update 2nd part tomorrow InshAllah :)
Edited by farwasneha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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🤗Very good.Keep it coming.Aajkal.OS se hi kush hona padtha hai.Karen tho kya Karen?

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