FF:Love VS Ego-At Altar of Sacrifice-#3 pt41pg75!! - Page 11

Created

Last reply

Replies

396

Views

49.6k

Users

68

Likes

1.1k

Frequent Posters

ainaGURTI thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Maaneet_Vidu

hayyye kiddo maaneet ka romance ... *blushing*

Uff this Maan is so intelligent ... Kaise ?
Lol

Mature wala love ?????
Sachiii ??
Moi waitingg



viduuu :P

Maan is Maan so he gotta be intelligent!!!!! 😆

Mature walla love!!!! ummm... but i cant write lovey dovey i dont know how much i can write mushy mushy stuff i'll keep it crisp!!! 😆
ainaGURTI thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetsampa39

You know why I always go for childhood stories,they give an undiluted joy,without strains.
How cutely Maan gifted his prize to Geet and d hugs are d cutest.
And to add to the cuteness quotient we have d new born pari.so sweet.

Loved d update.



thankss dear!!!

Childhood love is the purest form of all love! 😳

cuteness quotient!!!! 😉
ainaGURTI thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: trishadcute

Awesome updates both part 32 & 33 are fab 👏

Maaneet ka childhood love 😳
Thank god Maan explain everything to Geet
Wating 4 now their maturity wala love 😳
Continue soon ...



thanksss dear!!!!!!!!!


Childhood loveee😳


mature walla love would be nok jhok typesss 😳
ainaGURTI thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: tushti-kiran



Maan is behaving so matured...

he made Geet realize that Pari is small and needs attention...

waiting for their love feelings to start...

Congrats for new thread...

wonderful update...

thanx for pm...



lol... aakhir they r growing up na!!!! 😳
ainaGURTI thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kavya.sravya

short but cute ! maan gifting away his price to geet saying he won it for her shows his selfless love for her. now, we got pari's entry in our story. but , why is geet saddd and angry ? is it because of pari...



yep, he wants to give all that he has to he rto see her happy!!! Selfless love!

geet dad 😡
ainaGURTI thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: love2_soma

wah kya samjaya maan ne...mast...

beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d p also...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...


thanksss dear :) L) updating now!
ainaGURTI thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kavya.sravya

every elder child has to face this day and each and every one feels same way ! elders don't take notice of that sadness and insecurity until and unless they throw tantrums and poor things are solded for that too. loved the way maan handled geet... I love you sweet heart ...cute... and explained pari being small...waiting for their mature love...




yep!!! many a times it happens wen the elder child is pampered lots n suddenly the attention changes they feel insecure!!! yep n they r scolded for that oo without making them understand!


thankss so much dear!!!! 😳
ainaGURTI thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
N guys me starting new FF...


plzzz do read n gimme ur feedback.. its a differnt concept! n i hope u ppl will encourage me :)))


Follow me on Twitter @ainaGURTI😳


https://twitter.com/ainaGURTI

MA BLOGGG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



MY OTHER FF 😊😊😊


LOVE VS EGO - AT ALTAR OF SACRIFICE



nd my other FF -


JAB WE MET THREAD 1


Do see this

😳😳LINK OF MY FF DISCUSSION THREAD OPENED BY MAANEETMAAHI 😳😳












PART 34 :

To all doubts : maan is 11 yrs n Geet is 10 yrs now!!!

It was few months since Pari had been born, the love n attention towards Geet were getting divided, poor baby geet was not liking it😡, but she loved her pari, n was very possessive with her, they had gone back to Delhi n he rschool started, Geet would finish up with her homeworks, play with pari, she learnt to feed her, carry her teach her to talk and waould be engrossed with her fully😡! At nights she would call up, n Geet Anni would talk long hours, Maan hardly spoke to her so she would complain abt him cutely to Anni expecting her to fish up his ears😆, but Anni never spoke to Maan about Geet😳'. Maan would at the instant pick up the night calls as soon as Anni attended the call😳, n with his room line would stalk their conversation, Anni used to get the Beep sound that someonle else had taken the other line n it took few days for her to realize it was none other than Maan, she neither confronted him nor told Geet any time tat All the time Geet was complaining about Maan he would be on call hearing their duo talk!!!🤣

Beena Kunal n Maan had come over to Delhi for a couple of days for some function n Maan insisted he stay back with Geet rather than attend such functions. Maaneet were full on playing n doing masti with Pari😳, Pari had learnt to crawl n would sit byherslef unsupported👏, she would plug everything into her mouth whatever was at her vicinity. Maaneet had a hard time managing her n finally put her to sleep , n they both scrolled up to play with themselves😳, Geet holded his hands n pulled him ,Maan u know what we have taken care of Pari jus like how maama n pappa do🥱! How sweet na behaving like mama n papa!!!🤣

Maan at first didn't understand what she was telling then she told, Maan we too would become Maama Pappa one day na😉 , promise me that day too u will help me look after our Pari 😳??? It was such a sweet confession Maan couldn't deny, that was the childhood love beyond all pleasures n pressures. He nodded silently😆, to which she reciprocated with a hug, and kissed him all over his face☺️! Well little did the kids realize that love is a mistake , love is such a mistake that one could afford to do once😳, n these kids had done the mistake😳, had mistaken themselves by , falling for someone😆,, loving someone😉,, losing oneself to someone😳, n will face life to be, broken by someone😭,, battered by someone,💔 ,n will still continue to truste someone🥺, well that is love!❤️

Love is nothing but sacrifice and very soon the'll witness it !!😡

😭A poem on Vday for Future Maaneet when their love gets jinxed! 😭

I expected and I got
I got and I lost
Lost where words from my sphere
No joy could I see to adhere
Lost were smiles that were a part
Of me; Found as a board of dart.


Lost were those blessings
Hidden in those wounds dressings
Lost were those memories
Drained were those theories
Lost was that peace
Breached up into piece
Lost was that sight
Lost out of sight.

Waiting,waiting,waiting,
Who said life is in being?

Life is all about things we lose
Life is all about The Unknown BOSE
Life is all about those pricking dose
Life is all about The Red Rose
Life is nothing but all that we lose.

- A.M.S-

plus add urself into this group, to get all linksss...




https://www.facebook.com/groups/434011513338010/


NESTTT PARTTT

Edited by ainaGURTI - 12 years ago
kiran_rati thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
so sweet update
loved the poem
thanx for the pm dear
cont soon

Related Topics

Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: sarveshjoshi42

8 years ago

Rivanya and Raina ff - Love me like you do

Ritik Mehra : Business Tycoon and Elder brother of Raghav Shivanya Kapoor : Doctor and Elder Sister of Naina and love interest of Ritik

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: sarveshjoshi42

8 years ago

Rivanya,Ishveer,Swasan and Shivika ff - Ishq wala love

Here are Characters of the Story Ritik : elder brother of Shivaay , Ranveer , Sanskar and love interest of Shivanya Shivanya : elder sister of

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: sarveshjoshi42

8 years ago

Rivanya,Ishveer,Raina,Ragsan and Vikresha ff - My love is only for u

Let's me introduced the Characters Ritik Raheja (Arjun Bijlani) : A very rich business tycoon and elder brother of Ranveer and Ragini Ranveer

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: MidnightLibrary

3 months ago

Punishment sequel to destiny of love ( Climax))

Hey there, readers , Just a quick note: I wanted to let you know that since the old module is now locked, I've created a new one for you. You...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Aleyamma47

3 months ago

Student of the Year: When Love Lost Its Way [Completed]

Author's Note: Based on the Prompt by @JasmineRahul in Submit Writing Prompt Thread who requested for writing: The alternative version of the...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".