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Nyamat

@NyamatS

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Posted: 12 years ago

#591

Ohh wow well a few things...I've been gone from the forum for a quite a while now busy with work and school, but finally had some time to catch up. Took me forever to figure out something was wrong on the forum with half the writers missing.. Anyways glad I was still able to find you.

1) when I started your story I was spellbound to say the least. I absolutely loved the way you portrayed the characters and their emotions. You were amazing in the beginning . I saw were because...

2) you are a hundred times better now than in the first chapter. As you delved deeper into the story and as you got to play in the depths of these characters your writing flourished as well. I am thoroughly impressed, and believe its publishing worthy.

I'm pretty sure that you don't require anyone's validation to continue writing so wonderfully, nevertheless I shall praise you. I am eagerly waiting for all subsequent updates, and hope to stay in the loop. I fear you will disappear as well like the other writers and start a private blog. It's hard for readers like myself to comment regularly due to my hectic lifestyle. Thus I end up reading FFs in big chunks, 5-10 chapters at a time then go into hiding again. I read books and FFs to relax like I'm sure many writers , write for the same reason. Anyways I will try my best to comment as often as I can. But keep up the great work. You are very talented.

~*Nyamat S*~

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badfaith4u

@badfaith4u

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#592

oh dear
this is going to be a very fun morning

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Revathy Sugathan Nair

@revathysugathan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#593

Couldn't get to this one for sometime now - so had missed updates from 30-33. Read them all at one go just now and hv to say - YOU DID IT AGAIN 👏

On the way to bringing ASR to his knees and only Khushi is the one to do it. Beautiful ultimatum - EARN IT. Hats off to you darling 👍🏼

Felt sad seeing his past but that is no excuse for his behavior towards Khushi. Hope he understands that she is going to be his salvation 😊

NK was hilarious - that past was really funny 😆

Go Khushi, finally someone with guts to say no to the great ASR - i hope she doesn't end up 🤢 for her guts 😉

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MithilaTorr

@MithilaTorr

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Posted: 12 years ago

#594

You just bowled me over...I was testing myself if I would recall the story without going back to ur precap. The moment you mentioned beach, i could envision Arnav sitting on beach watching Khushi playing with NK. U now i believe the greatest complement you can pay an author is the scenes they reminiscent without having to reread it. U have a livid imagination and very visual representation of scenes, the way the characters eye speak, the way their eyebrows move, the way their laughlines stretch..u don't miss a thing . A standing ovation to that.

I just was wishing Khushi would say no. She so easily understood him. His actions are justified for his past but it is no reason to continue in that hell hole and drag everyone into it, especially when u have Khushi in life. Thanks for the fab update👏

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

#595

waiting for the next update eagerly..😊

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_G1234_

@_G1234_

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#596

Hope u update soon.. :D

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AdventureAwaits

@AdventureAwaits

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#597

just love it

one of my favorite storries

keep writting please

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greenMoss

@greenMoss

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Posted: 12 years ago

#598

It has been a week..
Please update soon.

Edited by greenMoss - 12 years ago

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Krani

@Krani

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+ 9

Posted: 12 years ago

#599

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sj_arhi

@sj_arhi

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#600

res, need to catch up on the last few chapters

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And I finally read them. Fabulous updates. The way you are developing the layered personality that Arnav is along with the reasons behind each one of them is something I admire. When one commits a mistake they apologise, something that comes naturally to most; while this man expresses it through a gift, through his actions and expects one to forgive and move on. Reason he is a man of few words, a man who finds it difficult to express his sentiments through words, a man who strongly believes 'to express is one's weakness'. Hence he gifted a diamond set by ordering his manager to get the most expensive one for Khushi. The importance given to the price tag is more than to the gesture.

He is afraid of rejection, hence he places his demand rather than a request giving no room for the former. This fear has materialised twice; once when Khushi rejected the apology telling he needs to earn it and the other her refusal against his wish of taking her out for breakfast. The only one who has the guts to refuse him in current times.

He is attracted to her, far more then Khushi who doesn't feel anything more than loath towards him. His mental battle between his ego, his belief of regarding middle class people, a wee-bit of guilt lurking somewhere for having treated her thus, confusion about her words while others accept his gifts and the resolve not to stoop as low as earning forgiveness were painted wonderfully in that scene by the beach.

NK's entry is refreshing and welcome. Necessary to some extent to lighten up Khushi's mood amidst her woes.

We finally got to know a part of the sacrifice made by Khushi the events leading to the marriage. The reason I concentrated about Arnav in this comment is because we are getting to know his perspectives when all this while we have been wondering about this man and his conduct.

Edited by sj_arhi - 12 years ago