Arranged Marriage Thd 6 - thread 7 link page 173! - Page 60

1) when I started your story I was spellbound to say the least. I absolutely loved the way you portrayed the characters and their emotions. You were amazing in the beginning . I saw were because...

2) you are a hundred times better now than in the first chapter. As you delved deeper into the story and as you got to play in the depths of these characters your writing flourished as well. I am thoroughly impressed, and believe its publishing worthy.

I'm pretty sure that you don't require anyone's validation to continue writing so wonderfully, nevertheless I shall praise you. I am eagerly waiting for all subsequent updates, and hope to stay in the loop. I fear you will disappear as well like the other writers and start a private blog. It's hard for readers like myself to comment regularly due to my hectic lifestyle. Thus I end up reading FFs in big chunks, 5-10 chapters at a time then go into hiding again. I read books and FFs to relax like I'm sure many writers , write for the same reason. Anyways I will try my best to comment as often as I can. But keep up the great work. You are very talented.

~*Nyamat S*~

On the way to bringing ASR to his knees and only Khushi is the one to do it. Beautiful ultimatum - EARN IT. Hats off to you darling 👍🏼

Felt sad seeing his past but that is no excuse for his behavior towards Khushi. Hope he understands that she is going to be his salvation 😊

NK was hilarious - that past was really funny 😆

Go Khushi, finally someone with guts to say no to the great ASR - i hope she doesn't end up 🤢 for her guts 😉

I just was wishing Khushi would say no. She so easily understood him. His actions are justified for his past but it is no reason to continue in that hell hole and drag everyone into it, especially when u have Khushi in life. Thanks for the fab update👏

one of my favorite storries

keep writting please

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And I finally read them. Fabulous updates. The way you are developing the layered personality that Arnav is along with the reasons behind each one of them is something I admire. When one commits a mistake they apologise, something that comes naturally to most; while this man expresses it through a gift, through his actions and expects one to forgive and move on. Reason he is a man of few words, a man who finds it difficult to express his sentiments through words, a man who strongly believes 'to express is one's weakness'. Hence he gifted a diamond set by ordering his manager to get the most expensive one for Khushi. The importance given to the price tag is more than to the gesture.

He is afraid of rejection, hence he places his demand rather than a request giving no room for the former. This fear has materialised twice; once when Khushi rejected the apology telling he needs to earn it and the other her refusal against his wish of taking her out for breakfast. The only one who has the guts to refuse him in current times.

He is attracted to her, far more then Khushi who doesn't feel anything more than loath towards him. His mental battle between his ego, his belief of regarding middle class people, a wee-bit of guilt lurking somewhere for having treated her thus, confusion about her words while others accept his gifts and the resolve not to stoop as low as earning forgiveness were painted wonderfully in that scene by the beach.

NK's entry is refreshing and welcome. Necessary to some extent to lighten up Khushi's mood amidst her woes.

We finally got to know a part of the sacrifice made by Khushi the events leading to the marriage. The reason I concentrated about Arnav in this comment is because we are getting to know his perspectives when all this while we have been wondering about this man and his conduct.