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Posted: 12 years ago
I like the pace at which the story is moving, but if the updates were a litle quicker then we'll enjoy it more as it will maintain the mood and tempo.
All ur updates are like some visual treat alongwith reading... I can see both arnav and khushi and their reactions,visualize them.

This part was amazingly written. Arnav is clearly getting more & more inclined towards her and khushi is getting more aware of him. Being all naive and innocent its obvious that khushi won't realise the physical attraction as soon as arnav does and meanwhile he will hv to struggle hard between the hatred and the attraction. It will be fun to read, I will only request you to give us updates more regularly and frequently... :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey krani firstly congratulation on new thread. Read last 3 parts. All are beautifuly written. I love the Pace with which the story is moving. Slow and steady with detailed emotions and feelings. And you wrote so well that every tym i read your update its like as if im actually seeing the episode. So visualising. Very few are blessed with this ability.
I wish u a healthy life ahead.
I know u r busy but waiting for the nxt part already.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update!

I am so glad she said no, but damn Arnav's dream the past is such a terrible thing if you can't move on from it.

Arnav is getting better 😆 - but he really don't think he can understand people that are selfless he has never met anyone like that who's happiness lies in others...

I need to see what happens next after this No.

Cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
just luvd it
i m spellbound to say anything else
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG Krani, Another thread's coming up already!!! 😆

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Posted: 12 years ago

fascinating!!

I just caught up after a very long time... first of all apologies and i am so sorry for not being able to check it out earlier...

but is incredible and i love the slow pace as i have said before too!!
amazing creation and keep giving amazing parts like these!!
i am in love with how it is turning out!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Omg i just love how easiy khushi smiled and said no to him. I want arnav to get slightly posessive and angry and push hervup against the wall ;)
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update loved it.. Egerly waiting for the next update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Brilliant...I got late in reading the updates...but it was awesome...I w8 for your updates.!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
👏Just finished reading all 33 chapters!! Amazing. I love the pace you are going. Not hurrying and capturing every emotion beautifully! The transition from Khushi's hatred to making him annoyed is the firs step in their relationship. And Arnav dreaming about her is so romantic (I am a romantic at heart and could not have thought of a more beautiful way to put the ignition of his feelings!)

Enough of my ramblings. Looking forward to reading where you take us next with them!!!!!
👏
Edited by Treasures - 12 years ago

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