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Posted: 12 years ago

I am not very pleased with the way this update turned out...prolly could not concentrate with all the negetivity arround in the show...a slightly emotional update... and it is too long I wanted to shorten it... but somehow could not find a way...so here it goes...

Madhu opened the back door and got in the seat next to RK. He acted surprised and said "TUM"

Madhu:- Nahi tum hi tum ho RK'

She was tired and limping. She had a bump on her forehead. Her suit was torn, and she looked as if she had rolled in tons of mud. Her delicate pumps were totally gone. She looked a complete wreck'and she felt like a complete wreck..

RK gestured his driver to take them home

RK :- "TUM Miss world lag rahi ho. You will soon learn not to cut into RK's dialogues"

Madhu:- Hmmm

RK noticed her hmm lacked the fire in it,

RK:- "one can only have that much of fuel."

Madhu:- "I can see that"'.Madhu looked into his eyes as if saying that she could see him getting weary and tired of his own ways. She tried to decipher what she could see was mockery at her, or concern for her, or to once again imply his superiority on her. She could find none infact his eyes were even more blank than hers. She had always relied on his eyes to read through his exterior because he was a good actor and the rest of his body never gave any hint of what exactly he felt.

Madhu turned her face to look at the road and thought " Did you guess what I had done. Why are you so blank? I wish I did not have to do that.

They both traveled in painful stillness and silence neither wanted to acknowledge the other as if they were trying to escape something but what ?. It was pretty late. Madhu had dozed off she had a very strange habit of driving without AC no matter how hot. Her head was partially outside the window. RK was about to put her hand on her head to tilt it towards himself, but she woke up with a start and in a reflex she held his wrist in her right hand tightly.

RK:- what??( he screamed in anger) I was going to pull you inside.)

The look in his eyes was pure crystalline anger why she was so jumbled up to understand. She murmured a sorry and sat back straight.

RK for second had seen an intense fear flash in her eyes and then gone. It was replaced by a murderous look that would spare no one. He knew that look did not originate from duty. Duty instills satisfaction not fear. That look had to have its origination in deep wound inflicted on her at some point of time. He was also certain that this wound had to be physical, because fear had made her attentive at all times even in sleep. Did she fear someone to this extent?? Was she hurt to an extent that she feared for her life?? '.

They came home. His chain of thoughts was broken. He opened the door a nd went to Madhu's side to open her door.

MK:- and they say chivalry is dead

RK:- Impactless dialogue, you should not have changed your dialogue writer.

MK:- he got a better price from my husband so he left me.

RK:- smiled and looked at her intently'

For a moment Madhubala also got lost in those intent eyes'.

RK:- God you need a bath he scrunched his nose

MK:- really!! I was actually thinking of going to bed and ofcourse not alone

She winked

RK:- careful BIWI, don't instigate that what you can't handle.

MK:- you think I cannot handle sleep? Husband,''Is that all the credit you give to Madhubala Rishabh Kundra.

He looked at her as if another word from her and he wont let her make it to the bed also. A warning given and received with due respect.

MK:- Backing off husband

And she went in.

RK said to himself:- I wish I knew it myself how much credit I give to you Mrs Madhubala..

He followed her inside. He was right now having a strong urge to ask her what happened there. Yet in his heart he knew he was not ready to take in what might have happened there. He also knew she was trying her best not only to evade any questions from him but also trying to just leap across the whole incident. Something was there to the whole thing that was causing such mood swings in her. A few minutes ago she looked so distant and scared and now she tried to play the flirt.

RK:- I need to know what has happened Biwi and you have to tell me'he said to himself

Madhu came inside. She had done her bit for distracting RK from tonight's episode but still in her heart she knew he will still be on it.

"you are RK after all, and curiosity is a trait you inherited from your dad" murmured Madhubala

will soon be updating future chapters with more Rishbala moments...till then dont forget to comment ...I like reading what you have to say..

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Edited by mytinypaintings - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
not fair😔😔...so much of wait and such a small update,😔,,,,,,,m not satisfied,,,,,,,,,,,,and m even unhappy...although i liked the way u described their inner turmoil bt plz this time update asap...u shud actually continue ur habit of giving two chapters at a time bcoz gud habits shud not b left...😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aksuji

not fair😔😔...so much of wait and such a small update,😔,,,,,,,m not satisfied,,,,,,,,,,,,and m even unhappy...although i liked the way u described their inner turmoil bt plz this time update asap...u shud actually continue ur habit of giving two chapters at a time bcoz gud habits shud not b left...😉

aww I am so sorry to disappoint you ❤️🤗 lol point taken your highness will be comming up with two more chapters asap...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update ... I want to know how she can handle 2 death one Gafuran whohas no blood relation but still who was the important part of her life and other of her brother who has blood relation but a person who was criminal in all scenes , How can she convey their demise to the respective relative like Trishna and Her mother ? How could they react ? Please PM me when you are ready with update .
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome👏
poor madhu !! how will she tell all this to her mother??
waiting for some intense rishbala moment😳😉
Edited by kendra - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update..👏Liked the way RK & Madhu dealt with situation after such a action packed encounter..😊They both giving space & showing the care too..Loved Madhu's flirting too😉 Continue soon..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovd madhus little flirtn.. Continue soon. Nd do pm also nxt tm a longer update
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update dear...and waiting for rishabala moments
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Posted: 12 years ago
not fair its like a cliffhanger but am just hooked with ur fic great work loved it really intrigued and excited
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: smilydear

Nice update ... I want to know how she can handle 2 death one Gafuran whohas no blood relation but still who was the important part of her life and other of her brother who has blood relation but a person who was criminal in all scenes , How can she convey their demise to the respective relative like Trishna and Her mother ? How could they react ? Please PM me when you are ready with update .

You have actually asked very crucial questions.. but as of now in the future updates she will only be handling two things one is RK who will find it difficult to absorb her role as a killer...and she will deal with her own past and then killing her brother. honestly I doubt that she will ever be able to handle these situations or for that matter any one can I guess she will just let time do the handling and she will move on with it...I will be updating the next few chapters in a few minutes hope to hear back from you...Thanks for commenting😊

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