The 'jhatka' format in other stories.

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A lot of us are very fond of the "jhatka" leading to realization of love format. 😆 I've just read two wonderful OS's with that trope, and I've read others before that. Although it isn't likely to happen right now, because we would've seen it in SBS if that was the case, this is still the perfect setup for it to happen. Shiv in danger from Ratan's goons, and Anandi realizing that nothing would hurt her more than losing him, and her fear of consummation was in fact her fear of losing him through him finding her inadequate. It certainly isn't anything new, it's been in all kinds of love stories, not just Indian, but everywhere else in the world. But it's wonderful every time.

One of my very favorites is from Anne of the Island, one of the books in the Anne of Green Gables series. I thought I'd post an extended quotation of that moment here. It's a public domain book now, so posting it isn't violating any copyright laws:

"Say, Anne, did you know that Gilbert Blythe is dying?" Anne stood quite silent and motionless, looking at Davy. Her face had gone so white that Marilla thought she was going to faint.

"Davy, hold your tongue," said Mrs. Rachel angrily. "Anne, don't look like that -- DON'T LOOK LIKE THAT! We didn't mean to tell you so suddenly."

"Is -- it -- true?" asked Anne in a voice that was not hers.

"Gilbert is very ill," said Mrs. Lynde gravely. "He took down with typhoid fever just after you left for Echo Lodge. Did you never hear of it?"

"No," said that unknown voice.

"It was a very bad case from the start. The doctor said he'd been terribly run down. They've a trained nurse and everything's been done. DON'T look like that, Anne. While there's life there's hope."

"Mr. Harrison was here this evening and he said they had no hope of him," reiterated Davy.

Marilla, looking old and worn and tired, got up and marched Davy grimly out of the kitchen.

"Oh, DON'T look so, dear," said Mrs. Rachel, putting her kind old arms about the pallid girl. "I haven't given up hope, indeed I haven't. He's got the Blythe constitution in his favor, that's what."

Anne gently put Mrs. Lynde's arms away from her, walked blindly across the kitchen, through the hall, up the stairs to her old room. At its window she knelt down, staring out unseeingly. It was very dark. The rain was beating down over the shivering fields. The Haunted Woods was full of the groans of mighty trees wrung in the tempest, and the air throbbed with the thunderous crash of billows on the distant shore. And Gilbert was dying!

There is a book of Revelation in every one's life, as there is in the Bible. Anne read hers that bitter night, as she kept her agonized vigil through the hours of storm and darkness. She loved Gilbert -- had always loved him! She knew that now. She knew that she could no more cast him out of her life without agony than she could have cut off her right hand and cast it from her. And the knowledge had come too late -- too late even for the bitter solace of being with him at the last. If she had not been so blind -- so foolish -- she would have had the right to go to him now. But he would never know that she loved him -- he would go away from this life thinking that she did not care. Oh, the black years of emptiness stretching before her! She could not live through them -- she could not! She cowered down by her window and wished, for the first time in her gay young life, that she could die, too. If Gilbert went away from her, without one word or sign or message, she could not live. Nothing was of any value without him. She belonged to him and he to her. In her hour of supreme agony she had no doubt of that. He did not love Christine Stuart -- never had loved Christine Stuart. Oh, what a fool she had been not to realize what the bond was that had held her to Gilbert -- to think that the flattered fancy she had felt for Roy Gardner had been love. And now she must pay for her folly as for a crime.

(And then he recovers and they have a lovely courtship and get married and have six beautiful kids who are all awesome characters and live happily ever after). 😆

It would be so great if the CV's borrowed from the way other people have written this idea from the beginning of the history of love stories!

No matter where I encounter this format, I always love it. It always works, and it is a well established format because it is an actual real life experience that happens. Not often, but often enough. If you've encountered this format anywhere else, I'd love to hear where. 😊

Edit #1: As pointed out by Supriya ji, it also happens in Jane Austen's Emma, when Emma realizes her friend Harriet is after Mr. Knightley, her friend and critic who she hadn't realized she was in love with.

Edit #2: Supriya ji's point again: Laurie (Theodore Laurence) and Amy (Amy March) from Little Women. Laurie and Amy both realize when she is in pain after her sister's death.

Edit #3: Prem and Suman in Maine Pyar Kiya. Prem doesn't realize he loves Suman until she is hurt by his friends humiliating her.

As always, Anandi/Shiv/AnSh haters, bashers, snarky comment passers, please don't reply.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wonderful! Great comparison. It's been decades since I read the book and years since I've seen the series. Thanks for bringing back the memories.😊
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Originally posted by: Beograd

Wonderful! Great comparison. It's been decades since I read the book and years since I've seen the series. Thanks for bringing back the memories.😊


I'm glad I got you nostalgic. 😃 It'd been seven years for me, so I thought I'd do a reread. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@Shivandi

Great post, the kind that this Forum ought to have ⭐️

👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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🤣..its my copyrite...here my frds pull my leg every now n then😆
ok on serious note...i am not very fond of this jhatka theory BUT its BV CVs way to show progress...dont know y they love to show a jerk or set beck in anandi's every step of life to move out from her previous state!!...its the part of their story telling!!
it was never gradual
either it was her decision to study further after jagiya's bday incident
or their ph break up...
or the divorce issue after jag-gauri's blame on her (killing the baby)
or to say yes to marry shiv...her mom's death!!
or shiv's refusal to marry her

everything...
...
n abt the speculated fight...i dont think he will be hurt seriously...it will b a minor one...which will bring AnSh closer...than before
but still i am not very sure sure of any realization or confession!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Well this jerk format is the age old formula. And I think psychologically it makes sense as it pushes the person out of the slumber.

In Emma as well Jane Austen makes Emma realize her love for the hero, I all of sudden forgot the name, when he starts giving attention to her close friend Harriet.

BTW thanks for bringing up Anne of Gables series, that was one of my favorites as kid
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Originally posted by: Yash.Pal

@Shivandi


Great post, the kind that this Forum ought to have ⭐️

👍🏼


Wow, thank you! 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: khusi_*

🤣..its my copyrite...here my frds pull my leg every now n then😆

ok on serious note...i am not very fond of this jhatka theory BUT its BV CVs way to show progress...dont know y they love to show a jerk or set beck in anandi's every step of life to move out from her previous state!!...its the part of their story telling!!
it was never gradual
either it was her decision to study further after jagiya's bday incident
or their ph break up...
or the divorce issue after jag-gauri's blame on her (killing the baby)
or to say yes to marry shiv...her mom's death!!
or shiv's refusal to marry her

everything...
...
n abt the speculated fight...i dont think he will be hurt seriously...it will b a minor one...which will bring AnSh closer...than before
but still i am not very sure sure of any realization or confession!!


Sorry for violating your copyright! 😆
I'm not saying it will happen either, I don't think it will, since there is no hint on sbs - I would just like it to happen, especially if it can happen as beautifully as that paragraph up there!

In context of everything with Anandi, I guess it does seem like a pattern. I think it's because for me the only alternative I can think of is that they'll explain that she's still falling in love with Shiv, and I just really want it to be that she's been in love with him pre-marriage without knowing it. That way the story is even more different from JaAn, because that was Anandi falling in 'love' out of compulsion. But still, it would still be different, because JaAn never had and could never have had what AnSh does. 😳

But now that you've pointed it out - I've started thinking of ways of slow realization. I must confess that never crossed my mind before.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: dsupriya

Well this jerk format is the age old formula. And I think psychologically it makes sense as it pushes the person out of the slumber.

In Emma as well Jane Austen makes Emma realize her love for the hero, I all of sudden forgot the name, when he starts giving attention to her close friend Harriet.

BTW thanks for bringing up Anne of Gables series, that was one of my favorites as kid


It is! 😆 Age old, I mean. Waise bhi, jerk or no jerk, it's time they moved forward. As long as whatever they do makes sense, it's enough, right?

I edited to include Emma, thanks for pointing that out! 😃 It was Mr. Knightley.

And I'm so happy to hear there are other Anne Shirley fans here! I'm rereading the series and am on Anne of Ingleside now. Such good books.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shivandi


It is! 😆 Age old, I mean. Waise bhi, jerk or no jerk, it's time they moved forward. As long as whatever they do makes sense, it's enough, right?

I edited to include Emma, thanks for pointing that out! 😃 It was Mr. Knightley.

And I'm so happy to hear there are other Anne Shirley fans here! I'm rereading the series and am on Anne of Ingleside now. Such good books.

Do also read the one after their marriage, It is very nice. I forgot the name there.

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