FF: A Hatke love story(chap.8 on pg 25) - Page 17

sorry for late commenting but i was un active becz of my examzz...last updates were fab yar...loved it...so laina heart broken ang like the bonding of piya jeh and alina...so misha interested in jeh and kabir in alina...liked it that misha make a plot that abhay get closer to piya...bt shit yar now what will happened to piya hope she will get fine yar...cont soon

Originally posted by: ifians

nice update but sad😭

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Originally posted by: cutesukirti1987

Lovely update bt accident 😲.Hope Piya also becomes well soon.

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Originally posted by: -juhi-lily-

oh god!!accident ho gaya...😭😭

hope pia jaldi se thik ho jaye...😭

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Originally posted by: vmpy

a v nice update.abhay and piya ka accident😭thanx for pm and continue soon

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Originally posted by: sukugeny

awesm update

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Chapter 8 : Losing You !

Sorry couldn't reply to all ! Hope you all will like this part ! Thanks to Aaliyah !

Half an hour later :

Outside The I.C.U.

All are in a state of shock . All are expressionless and numb with fear. The doctor had arrived a few minutes ago and said that Pia's heartbeat was falling gradually and now only a big miracle could save her !

Other room :

Abhay's P.O.V.

Damn' no , no way .These brakes , they have failed , oh my god what will happen now ? ………… Oh no Pia ! Pia , what will I tell her ! What have I done ! …………………………………please god if not me at least save her ! Please ……………………..No , Pia don't ask me what has happened ! How will I tell you !...Wait what is that ! A truck . Shit , help god , I can't control the bike. And what the , the driver looks drunk ! And before I could do anything the truck hit our bike and we were thrown high up into then air and the last thing I remember is Pia's dreadful screams and us rotating down the hill and hitting a boulder !

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Wait wait wait , Is the death bed so soft ? Really ? Where am I ? I tried opening my eyes and tried to get up but my whole body was aching so badly ! Then I heard someone calling my name ! Mom ? I opened my eyes with all the energy I had and before I realized I felt drop of tear falling down of my eyes !

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Abhay – Mom ?

Haseena (hugging him) – How are you my baby ? Are you hurt ? Does it still pain ?

Abhay (trying his best to laugh) – Mom , aap yaha aane se pehle " Kasauti zindagi ki " dekhkar aayi hai kya ? Kitni baar kaha ki mujhe yeh sab pasand nahi he ! Are mishu , kabeera , don't tell me ki tum log bhi ?

Misha (trying to stop her tears and sound cool ) – Shutup dude ! Tumne toh meri jaan nikal di ! Isliye tum abhi bache ho , bike chalani ki tumhari umar nahi hui !

Kabir – Kesa hai bro ?

Abhay – God at this rate I'll 100% go mad ! Kabeera tumhe dasgupta ne koi aur lines nahi diye hai kya Romeo juliet play ke liye ?

Mish – Haan Kabir romeo , tum juliet , maa ke laadle bigad gaye !

Abhay – Are haan where's Pia ?

All three freeze in their place !

Abhay – Hello ding dong ! Planet earth calling !

Misha – I , I have to go . and she runs outside with Kabir .

Abhay (confused) – Mom ?

Haseena – Ab tumhe so jaana chahiye.

Abhay – But mom…………….

Haseena – I said sleep means sleep and she rushes out leaving a confused Abhay on the bed !

Pia's P.O.V :

Life is an unexpected page of turns. The moment I started getting happy , fate always betrays me ! I was toally shattered after amily's death but for alina I had to be strong. Dad blackmailed me to come back and new suprises awaited me. I met kabir. Kabir was the charmer of shimla boarding school but he was very good in heart . he saved me from falling down from the stairs when nisha pushed me. Then after that we became great friends. But like a year later he shifted to dd. I cried somuch because he was the only friend I had ever . He was so open with me .Then came the world's best friends – Jeh and alina . At first I started hating them because alina was very good in studies while Jeh left no stone utered to flirt with me . But later we became besties forever ! Panchi hated Jeh because her expenisve dress was spoiled by Jeh in a bet but all's well that end's well ! We all worked very hard in our finals and lo , we all got the highest marks from all over India . There was not even 0.1% difference in our marks ! We all went to london for our further studies and that's when we met Amily – the cute tomboy ! We all were like siblings rather than best friends . Then after a year came the worst time of all our lives . Rahul – the college's best playboy entered our lives ! Apparently at first he tried to do two timing with Alina and Amily but later when they found they insulted him infront of the whole college .

But the vey next day he came and sought forgiveness from us . He even tied Rakhi from me but not them . We all believed him but Jeh couldn't ! Then I don't know when Amily And Alina fell in love with him . I knew Amily's feelings but I was unknown to Alina's feelings . One night when we were in his farmhouse he took out a matchstick . We thought he was playing a game but three men came out of the corner with some vessels and started spraying water here and there . And they rushed out locking the door . I asked him – What was that ? And he said – A big surprise sissy . He suddenly stood up and lit the matchstick and dropped it down ! We all were terrified . The hut caught fire and he told – Rahul never takes insults . He always returns it with paybacks . And Rahul's style is DEATH !! Shame on you that you all believed in me and Poor poor poor Amily and Alina babies fell in love with me . Oh , what a tragic ending .

I was shocked beyond words . Jeh tried to go near Rahul but he jumped out of the window and said – Bye bye besties forever !! and he locked the window and ran away .Amily totally broke down and said that it was all her fault ! Jeh spotted a log and quickly broke down the door . The flames were increasing more and more. We all stood up and tried to run away but Amily stood there still like statue ! I tried pulling Amily but she looked at me with tearful eyes and said – I'm sorry all .It's because of me you all are here in this state . Now nothing will happen . We all were confused but suddenly she jerked my hands and rn inside the fire . We all were shocked ! Then we heard her scream . I advnced towards the fire but the house burst and we all were thrown out of the house and we blacked out.

Later when we woke up we asked the police about amily and they brought us to a room where a body laid covered in a white sheet . I quickly removed the sheets and the sight I saw totally shattered me . My sister , my dear friend was laid there with all the burnt marks in her body . I didn't know what happened after that but I ran ! I ran outside the hospital to the church we used to visit .

I questioned God – Why ? Why did it happen ? Couldn't you have taken my life ? Why amily ? why ?

And then later after 3 days I saw amily . Yes , I saw amily in my dreams . She was saying – I have not left you Piyu . It's just that my destiny was not with me . I will always remain in your heart my buddhu buddy . And please be strong. At least for Alina . I saw she tried to do suicide . Please take this as my last wish . Bye Piyu and she faded while I begged her to come back ! After that I started putting fake smile on my face but no one noticed my true smile after that . I came bck to Dehradoon , my home town . I felt good . My 1^st day was not so good with bumping and all with Abhay . I know he tried to say sorry but I shouted on him because I thought he was a big flirt which reminded me of Rahul !

But later when he apologized I felt sorry because he did no mistake . But like once again fate was against me in the night of the dinner party ……... the truck……………….my screams……and now I'm here trying to open my eyes but it's like freezed . Even my body feels that way ! I can hear mumma crying . The fear gripped me . Was abhay alright ? Is he ok ? God , please let not anything happen to him . For once God , please save him ! Please!!!...

Irony of fate , isn't it ? They just don't say that life is not a bed of roses , thorns accompany them too . Ok now, will Pia come out of coma ? Will Abhay come to know what has happened with Pia ? Will they ever go on a date ? Will they ?

I know boring isn't it ? Too much drama hogaya na ? Especially Pia's past mein ? Ok , don't worry guys . Kyunki tum sab ke liye ek bahot hi bada surprise . Next update mein , Abhay will come to Pia and his presence will be a miracle and Pia will start responding ! Thank you guys for your wonderful comments . Keep commenting and do tell me how was it !

awesome update👏 and next update continue soon😊

Awesome Update! 👏 👏 Loved it❤️.
Waiting for the next part.,Pls Continue Soon. 😊
Thanks alot for the pm. 😃