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Infinity.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#411

Awesome update. loved it
Geet avoding Maan..aww poor Maanu
waiting for dance seq
continue soon
thankx for pm

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dreamymishti88

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Posted: 13 years ago

#412

awesome

mind-blowing update

liked a lot...

update soon

waiting dear😊

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d_sonia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#413

Awesome update
Loved it...
Continue soon
Eagarly waiting...

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Mdworld

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Posted: 13 years ago

#414

Originally posted by: singh24

hmmm...Ab Geet kahan jayegi...????😛

Maan se bachna muskil hi nahi ..namumkin hei..hehehe..😆
Waiting eagerly ...

thanx 4 liking dear...😉
grt dialogue...😆
updating...

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Mdworld

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Posted: 13 years ago

#415

Originally posted by: zariya123
get wanted 2 leave as she cant face him n maan deliberately coming in front of her
wher is rk??????????????

song sequence should be pee loon

i just gave a leap...
will show ur rk also...😆😆
song sequence gonna be kurban hua only...
in accc with majority!!!! sry...

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Mdworld

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Posted: 13 years ago

#416

Originally posted by: kalabhas
liked the part.but it is very small.so finally
maaneet met each other,i hope this time maan will not
allow geet to runaway.waiting for the hot dance sequence.
thanks for pm

sorry dear...was in hurry...
didn't realize it to be so small...
hot dance sequence on its way!!!😃😃

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Mdworld

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Posted: 13 years ago

#417

Originally posted by: shalini_s
finally read all the parts.. loved it.. waiting to c what Maan does.. will there be a confrontation??

thanx a lot...😃😃
yes there s gonna be confrontation...
but not in this update...
you will have to wait 4 it !!!!

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Mdworld

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Posted: 13 years ago

#418

**CREDIT FOR BANNER@--Rashu-- **

# WHERE S TIAKASHYAP...nida6...preethia..??? AM MISSING YOU!!!!😭

**PART 14**

geet please...dekh i will complain to sharma uncle...
pinki...guess what??? am your boss here...
and am seriously feeling very tired...
so lets just leave.....geet was about to leave...
but pinki stopped her...
theek hai if you want to leave lets just meet MSK once...
then we will leave fine.....pinki spoke
before geet could speak anything further...they heard...

TALKING ABOUT ME?????....
and her eyes looked at the figure behind pinki...
and her eyes froze...it was him!!!!

OH MY GOD!!! GEET PINCH ME...
THIS CANT BE TRUE...AM I DREAMING.....pinki jumped in excitement...
while geet didn't pay heed to what pinki was saying...
her gaze was locked with maan's...
as if he had captivated her gaze...
Ms.Handa if am not wrong.....he raised his brow...
ha...i mean yes...she s Geet ...GEET HANDA...
and am pinki....pinki answered like a little kid in excitement...

uhh...sorry for excusing...but i need to leave...
its getting late.....geet tried to leave from there...
just then she felt a tug at her wrist...
she turned around and saw it in his tight grip...
wont let you run now.....he spoke turning in her direction...
ji.....she couldn't hear what he spoke...or didn't wish to...
i mean...you can leave but befor that can i have a pleasure
of dancing with you Ms.Handa....he smirked...
wo i nee...but pinki intervened...
off-course she will....pinki spoke pushing geet ahead...

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=giZ6nRWeFJ8[/YOUTUBE]

Kurbaan hua teri dushmani mein yun kurbaan hua
Teri aashiqui mein yun
Bekhudi mein, bekali mein, bekafi mein hua
Tujhko har dua di Har daga di Aur fanaa hua
Kurbaan hua .. Kurbaan hua
Adaa pe, wafaa pe, jafaa pe
Kurbaan hua .. Kurbaan hua

maan didn't wait for her reply and took her to the dance floor...
he left her there...and looked into her eyes...
geet looked at his blaming eyes...
pain was all that visible...
and she knew she was the sole reason of this pain...
as she couldn't take his gaze more...
she moved out from there...
but maan held her inorder to stop her from leaving...
it wasn't required for her to turn and see who it was...
he gradually pulled her until her back met his chest...

his hand came around her waist and held her tightly from front...
it was all so difficult for her to handle...
as she felt his hand on her stomach...her breathing got abrupt...
as she felt his breath on her neck...her chest started heaving up...
but before she could react...he held her hand and moved it up around with his...
as he brought her hand back...he looked into her eyes...
he moved their hands sideways with the rythm not breaking the eyelock...

Rubaru tu magar Tanah hai ye jahan hoo vo
Chal uthe meri khufar se
Saanson ka ye sama hoo vo
Kya hua pal mein jaane kho gaya kyun
Tu mila aur judai maa hua yun
Bekhudi mein, bekali mein, bekafi mein hua
Tujhko har dua di Har daga di Aur fanaa hua
Kurbaan hua .. Kurbaan hua
Adaa pe, wafaa pe, jafaa pe
Kurbaan hua .. Kurbaan hua

not able to take this proximity...she tried leaving again...
he pulled her back to him with such a force ...
she held his shoulder for support...
her lips were just a mere distance away from his...
he made her bend backward not breaking the eye-lock...
it was he who was leading and she was quietly following him...
he just then turned her and made her loose all her balance on him...
he held his one leg out and with one hand held her head...

he pulled her back and stood in same position...
talking silently with his eyes...
showing the fire in them...
yet saw pain in her eyes also...
not able to take that he pulled her back with one hand held her hand in a tight grip...
while with other slowly held her back and moved it a bit above slowly caressing it...
while he moved her round with the rhythm as didn't want people to notice them...

he made her swirl to his right with his right hand and pulled her back...
as she came back he held both her hand in front from behind and held her

up and twirled around holding her like that...

he very slowly made her stand on her heels...
all the while taking care of not hurting her...

Marne ka sabab maangta raha dar badar
Mitt ne ko to dil pal mein raazi hua
Poori hui har aarzoo har dastan meri
Ye tum shuru hue jahan main khatam hua
Kurbaan hua .. Kurbaan hua
Adaa pe, wafaa pe, jafaa pe
Kurbaan hua .. Kurbaan hua

he held her sideways and moved around like that not breaking her gaze...
just as she felt she could't take it anymore she turned her head to the other side...
this angered him to no level...
he pulled her more to him while his hold got more harsh on her
which made her look back into his eyes...
he bend down and held her in her arms and twirled around...
this time geet felt conscious as she felt all would be looking at them...
yet she had never been this close to maan before...

he made her stand and sat himself on his knees...
while he held her one hand and made her take a turn around him...
he stood up...and held her waist from both his hands...
this time she gasped as she felt his hand on her bare waist...
before she could free herself...
he held her high in air and her head fell back as he very
slowly twirled with her...

as he completed the round she looked at his direction...
he captivated her gaze and very slowly brought her down...
not before rubbing her entire length with his front...
she lowered her eyes as she felt his touch...
she moved her gaze up and saw him staring at her intently...
she held her hand from her waist and very softly removed it...
he instantly broke his gaze and looked at the direction of her hold...

this did anger him as she was again trying to distance herself...
he turned his face to other direction in rage...
just then they heard the applause and turned around to see
everyone spell bound with thrir dancing...
people started gathering around them as maan turned his face in her direction
and saw she wasn't there...

as she saw people rushing in their direction...she thought it to be the
right time to rush out from there...
she sped up and held pinki and went towards the exit...
oye geet...that was awesome...
i never knew you dance so....but her one gaze was enough for her to shut up...
they went towards the lift when geet noticed that her clutch was missing...
pinki you wait in the car i will be back with my clutch...
pinki nodded and left...

geet went back to the party and saw that her clutch was lying where she left...
she quickly picked it up and went towards the lift...
as the lift opened she quickly got in...
as the door closed...she pressed the button to ground floor...
the lift started moving but didn't know why her heart beat started accelerating...
she tried calming her heart thinking it may be because of that dance...
but suddenly the lift stopped...
and the lights went off...

she was hell scared as she was phobic to darkness...
koi hai...please help.....she shouted...
she started sweating profousely...
just then she felt a cold hand on her bare waist...
she was scared out of her wits now...
kKK..auNNn hai....she stuttered...
Maan se bachna muskil hi nahi ..namumkin hei..
she heard his voice...

**courtsey for dialogue...singh24**🤣

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PRECAP: WHEN MSK S THERE HAVE NO FEAR!!!

# GUYS ITS ONE YEAR AM HERE STILL DIDN'T MAKE FRIENDS HERE...WIERD NA!!!
OK...YOU ALL KNOW ME AS ASHI...I WANT YOU ALL TO INTRODUCE AGAIN...LETS START AGAIN...😳

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Edited by Mdworld - 13 years ago