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Posted: 12 years ago
#61
yeh love toh aur bhi dangerous hota ja rha hai
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62
teaser

shocker 😲

what was geet up to ...

waiting for dangerous updates 😉

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cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Geet fall from stair case 😭
Pls update soon ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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waiting to read next part yaar...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG!!! Shocking Teaser😲
Maaneet are really unpredictable, their love is forcing them to do such things an i'm sure this time she is doing for Maan b'coz Maan can bear any pain but cant bear his jaan pain...!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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update kaha ha 😭😭😭
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PART 43

Maan stood taking those slaps from his Dad followed by his Mom who was at high on anger after hearing the truth. the truth tat Khan Saab had hidden, the truth tat Maan used Geet and let her get hurt badly by Dev, just to confirm his doubts for Dev Raichand. The truth tat made Khan Saab and Prem to close their eyes tight knowing tat once it was told this would be more dreadful. They knew the consequences and hence Prem and Khan Saab had discussed to hide about this but they were unaware tat the Dangerous Lover was way to ahead of them.

Priya: How could you Maan, how could you just put her life in danger.

He stood still while Priya raised her hand again to be stopped by Rano. Her eyes spitted anger for the very person who she had given the responsibility to save her daughter's life but here he was the reason to let her go through all that torture. She looked at him with anger yet those question tat he wanted to avoid from her.

Rano: Wasn't she your life, tat you let her get tortured by him.

Rajveer: Love and life are not meant for him Rano.. I was right, always right in judging him.

Khan Saab: Raj

However, Rajveer stopped him raising his hand. He did not want anyone to say a word, a word to know wat Maan was and why he did, but he was clueless to wat Maan had decided.

Rajveer: Kaha tha na.. he would be the one who would destroy your daughter Mohinder, and see he did sirf uski nahi balki apni bhi zindagi barbaad kar di making him to kill someone. A murder.. do you get, my son Maan Singh Khuranna is a murderer.

Prem: Bas Kijiye bade Papa.. bas.. I agree tat he put her life in danger but calling Maan a murderer you are just not blaming him but you to.

Rajveer and others looked up at Prem who for the very first time raised his voice against them but he was not done.

Prem: Kisi insaan ko nahi balki ek janwaar, hevaan ko maar diya hain.. and its not a sin but something beyond everything and if you think tat Maan is wrong tat you should even blame me for everything as I was equally involved.

Annie stood shedding her tears. Her fear, the fear tat everything was on the verge of breakage was turning into a reality. She looked at Maan not even looking at her own husband and she knew tat it was not done.

Rajveer: Than you are equally the sinner Prem.

Maan stood hearing everyone and next he threw the papers on the table making everyone freeze with his next word, a word tat would tear their relation into pieces.

Maan: I want a DIVORCE.

A silence prevailed hearing the word. Just hearing it had pierced each heart than wat would have happened to him.

Maan: Here are the papers and I have signed them. There won't be any problem for her as it is mutual, just a signature and its done.

He said these words and moved out asking one of the servants to get his bag that was lying on the floor unnoticed by everyone. It had been two weeks since the dreadful day, and though he was discharged, he stayed away from the Haveli setting everything in place. He had warned everyone, be it Prem or Khan Saab, none would meet him. He walked away but was stopped by Rano who could not get wat he meant.

Rano: Wat do you mean Maan?

He halted his steps replying her back.

Maan: It means tat the marriage tat was forced on your daughter will end with this Divorce.

He walked but was stopped again by Rano's words.

Rano: It means tat you never loved her or was it tat your attraction for my daughter Mr. Maan Singh Khuranna, tat made you to marry her but after she was touched by someone else you don't want her.

Rano closed her eyes speaking wat she never wanted but her words hit at the right place on Maan.

Maan: Yes… I don't want to as it was my lust for her and when she is not able to give me its better tat I throw her out of my life and she cant full fill my needs anymore. Janthe hain na Devne kya kiya hain uske saath aur waise bhi you handed me you're so called precious daughter to me for her safety and though I could not protect her but lately I did and she is all safe now.

Rano stilled with his harsh words. She had said those words in order to stop him but she did not know tat he would have better answers to her. Rajveer and others stood while Dadima broke seeing the indifference behavior of Maan.

Rajveer: And where the hell do you think you will go Maan.

Maan: Tats none of your concern Dad. I m a murderer and as per your values and rules I don't have a place here and I cant stand under a roof where she lives, the very person who ruined me giving me nothing back.

Rano and Priya cried hearing his words.

Rajveer: Why don't you say tat you cant face her after wat you did. Why don't you simply accept your defeat and in capability of staying into a relation.

Maan: If you think so than do, I don't care anymore.

He moved a bit when his own Mother once again stopped him and next second he felt her hand on his face pulling him at the centre of the room spitting all her anger on him holding his collar.

Priya: Wat do you think about yourself Maan.. Jawab do.. jab chaiye shaadi karo.. and when you feel to leave her you do.. why is tat always she has to burn in your anger.

Maan slowly loosened her hands from the grip and said with no expressions.

Maan: It was your mistake. A mistake done by you all to make me believe tat she was mine and I thought tat I loved her when it was a mere attraction. A relation tat was forced on me and my ego forced myself to tie her with me thinking tat I would get her but no she can never give me wat I want. She can never give into my desires and lust for her.

Everyone gasped in pain hearing his venom staring at him while he continued to speak.

Maan: An attraction tat turned me into a devil and finally made the MSK a Murderer. She has destroyed the Maan who lived his life, a destruction where I lost myself and I don't want to loose anymore.

Priya was shocked to hear it, she could never think tat her Maan, her son would ever say this. She pushed him away finally distancing him from her.

Priya: You are not the Maan whom I know… My Maan would never say such thing, he would never say anything about his Geet, Geet for whom he fought with us, Geet for whom he had made rules, Geet for whom he would die for and kill for. You are not my Geet's Maan.

Maan: Tat Maan was never true but this Maan was forced to be one like tat by Her.

Mohinder and Rajveer stood there with no word. Wat could they say when he was saying everything, who would stop him from this as it finally made them realize tat they were at mistake but Dadima could not sit quite anymore. She stood up gathering her broken heart and caressed Maan's face with love.

Dadima: Geet ke baaremein nahi socha kya.. she will die Maan.. Your Geet will die.

Maan holds her hand making it slide down from his face speaking with rude tone.

Maan: She has killed me and I don't wish to die any further.

Dadima jerked back with his words, her eyes stilled to his to see any sort of love but they were black and dark with hatred for her.

Maan: and I know tat none of you want me here either.

Khan Saab: wait a minute Maan Baba. (He looked at Raj and Mohinder who did not show any signs for stopping Maan) Agar mera Maan baba yaha nahi rahega.. than even this Khan wont stay here anymore.

Maan: You are not Khan Saab. M thankful to everything you have done for me but you can't come out from here. Aap yeh nahi bhool sakthe ki aapne Khuranna' ka namak khaya hain and you owe them more than me.

Khan Saab could not say a word more; he knew wat Maan said was right and he backed off shedding his tears while seeing the retreating figure of Maan.

His each word slit the one person who was standing upstairs hiding herself from the moment she heard the word DIVORCE. It killed her while her tears dried with his each word. She was all dead but his each word killed her even more. she had not complained when she had learnt tat even after the discharge he was not ready to come back but today morning when he had returned she was happy but seeing him packing his bag made her to cry but still she felt tat he was going for a business trip and before she would return back to him he was all downstairs giving her the ultimate death.

Her heart ached deciding tat she wanted to stop him, stop him at the very cost of her life and she could not think beyond it. She could not see tat he would part his way from her. She could not let their love, may it be dangerous to be ruined with time, she could not and finally her eyes knew wat she had do to stop him. She stood at the starting point of the staircase and gave a last look at his back seeing her life slipping from her. She looked up at her Babaji praying tat her plan succeeds while her tears wetted her cheeks with the harsh words tat were ringing in her ears. The words tat she never thought off were now making her to kill herself and before she could even think again on her decision she slipped herself from the stairs rolling down hitting her head on each stair causing it to bleed.


"Love is the most difficult and dangerous form of courage."

(Courtesy to Google Search)

The Haveli echoed with her painful cries freezing everyone stopping Maan dead in his track. His heart stopped beating fighting with his mind yet he moved a step to be stopped again by the most painful scream from his two mothers. He eyes closed tight fearing for the most dreadful truth turning around he heard the same scream but now from everyone. He slowly opened his eyes only to see HER in a pool of blood but her eyes still open and staring at him. He moved to go but before he could, Prem carried Geet into his arms dashing out for hospital while others followed him. Her eyes still opened looking at him though they wanted to shut down but she forced them to be open.

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He fastens the seat belt hearing the announcement for the take off. His eyes emitting the hatred for everything tat lead him here. He closed his eyes for few seconds remembering wat happened after tat painful cries tat were still haunting him.

He stood at the same place where he was standing even after the whole Haveli was empty. He did not turn to see whether anyone was waiting for him or not nor did he wanted to. His eyes stared at the floor tat was red due to her blood while his own hands bleeding as he cut his own palm with the sharp end of the Key tat he was holding. Seconds turned into few minutes and he finally jerked out fishing for his mobile dialing for the best doctor from the hospital ordering tat they have to save her, save her at any cost if they wanted to be alive. He moved out sparing a last look at the Haveli tat had them and their family moments together.

Next, he felt himself sitting on the airport waiting for his flight. None knew where he was going but he knew tat once he reaches there the news would reach his Dad or say Khan Saab would himself find out where he would be but no one would plead to him to get back and now after the incident they would wish tat he would die even before the thought of coming back reached his mind. Few hours passed making him shrink with the ring from his mobile. He closed his eyes to stable himself and received the call in next second only to calm him hearing tat she was all fine. He heard the doctor say tat though it was a severe fall it was her luck or say, a miracle tat she was least hurt even if she had hurt her head on the stairs. He even heard tat she had a leg fracture tat would heal within 2 months finally letting him know tat she was out of danger with nothing serious.

He opened his eyes hearing the soft voice of a woman or say the airhostess asking him if he needed any help. He nodded for a NO laughing at his state knowing tat none could help him in any sense letting the hatred to burn him for lifelong. The hatred tat he felt for himself. The hatred tat he forced her to bring her to kill her, the hatred tat he spread in her life and the hatred tat she proved with her acts tat his love was just a mere lust for her while the flight took him away from her making him know and feel tat they were no more bonded to each other in any sense.

Precap: Dangerous Phase of Dangerous Love.

Unexpected twist na.. but trust me you will enjoy this twist further. So do tell me wat you feel about this.

Here, many had thought tat I would the memory loss track, aarre how I could bring tat, as memory loss would make me to loose my memory with it. Its dangerous love and dangerous love would not look good with this track and I swear I seriously can't handle memory loss track. So now, get ready for the unusual dangerous love with its next phase of dangerousness.

I swear my fingers are itching to type the next update and if you give me my 275+

likes with 18 pages long comments I will update it by Saturday and I m sure tat you will do it haina.

Do like and Comment.


Edited by sdlife19 - 12 years ago

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