OS-Modern Fairytale - Page 2

Originally posted by: Sonia17

Yo Sharna! 😎 Congrats on winning the competition I knew you would have entered and I knew you would win it! 👍🏼 This has got to be your best piece yet it was so gripping and intense it sure was a fairytale of a beautiful prince and princess! I was blown away with the concept so simple but perfect! 😳 I loved how Adi was totally mesmerised by Pankhu from the first look and what a contrast Adi's family all happy and jolly! 😆 That's a start! 😉 Aww poor Pankhu cant believe she is an orphan and lived alone for most of her life but I am amazed by her carefree nature and also her love for dance! Fits well! ❤️ Loved the last line! Melted my heart! ☺️ Keep Going Girl you are just superb! 👏 ⭐️

Awww thanks! Really, best piece? I actually thought it was the worst piece I'v written, haha. I started out with 3 different beginnings! 😆 But I'm so glad you liked it 😳🤗 Yeaah, I thought for once Adi's family should be normal 😆😉 and completely changed Panku. I'm dying to see her so jolly and carefree!

Thank you so much for your wonderful words! Coming from you, it means even more especially, the queen of writing! 😃😳

Originally posted by: shesherkobita

👏Wow what a beautiful story🤗

I saw you won the triwizard competition...congratulations my dear...

What a talent you are...your story is good enough to be a serial of its own. Hope you wont stop writing OS ...

Again...hearty congratulations...

Thaaank you Sabrina! 😳

Your words always make me feel that I'm good at these OS's, so thank you for that 😃😳

Originally posted by: Achram

Very very Superb story keep writing love u ...!i stored it

Aww, really?? Stored it? Thanks! 😃😳

Originally posted by: ...Jes...

u have great talent Sharna...it's so beautiful & have good context ,great work ❤️

keep it up 👏
👍🏼

Thank you Jes! Means a lot! 😃

Originally posted by: Surish

Haha, thank you!

Your Story comes to the point promptly " the hero knows he is in love, expresses it & decides to propose" Similarly "The heroine also does not take much time to make up her mind on her feelings"

Originally posted by: sameersaagar

Your Story comes to the point promptly " the hero knows he is in love, expresses it & decides to propose" Similarly "The heroine also does not take much time to make up her mind on her feelings"

This is best thing of the story👍🏼

Haha, I feel like that's very Adi-ish too. He's straight to the point! 😳

Plus it was a prompt so it had to be done that way.. 😆 But still, glad you liked it! 😃

Originally posted by: .Siham.

Jussst supeeerdupeeer Storry Sharnaaa

Loveeed all partsss of it xx

Aww, thanks Siham! 😳