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Posted: 12 years ago
part 27
nice part...
OMG Geet is thinking about what all Maan said in the beginning...
i just wish Nakul tells Maan before Geet leaves...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Waiting


Update u me aur ? Too please
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Posted: 12 years ago
for those who have missed my updates..pls check..n i am happy with love u get..but can i know why the likes differs ..some times..200+ n i some below..200..must i think that part is not upto ur expectation..or u forgot reading the continuation..
for example..22 part has 228 likes n part 23 ,24 25 are below 200 n again 26 th part has 227 likes...why this droppage..let me know..





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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -gurtimaniac-

Waiting


Update u me aur ? Too please

all ffs update after sil completed..dont worry..only 3 parts left i guess...
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update
poor maaneet again MU
geet is feeling to much mix emotions n want to do everything for her child
n maan he want to confess n everything became worst by geet's words

now what will happend ??
want maaneet together ... happy

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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks for all readers who commented n hit like buttons n being supportive in my way..
are you all ready for some more emotional😭😭 updates..
PART 28

GEET was quiet..she was shocked..

They both were in bed of roses lost in their own thoughts..the silence around them killed maan for the first time..before geet came he was all alone in this house'after geet came he never felt loneliness'but today,he was again in same situation..

Geet st: from 2morrow..i will not b ur side maan..i will live for our baby..u gave me a new reason to live..

Maan sighed n turned to geet..he repeated his words again..

Maan:can u give me a peaceful sleep for last time..itna tho haq hai mujei tumse haina..

He said hugging her..

Geet looked at him ..what he is asking for..just to make him sleep means like making him sleep on her laps singing a song or.. she was in her blouse n inskirt,which reminded his other meaning.

Her hands went protectively to hold her belly

Geet:if he wants me to be physically with him..how can i?it may hurt baby..i cant risk my baby..it may be only 3 or 4 weeks..it will harm baby if we get physically close..

She was lost in thoughts..her eyes widened when he leaned over her'

Geet tried to open her mouths..he sealed his with hers..

Maan:chup..bilkul chup..

Always she felt love in his kiss,today she felt only pain..she blinked her eyes n tried to get a clear vision of him..he hide himself in her crook of neck..his half body over her upper part..geet felt relieved as his weight was not on her belly..

Her heart said her to say him the truth..but her mind stopped her..his status,his relation with her was money based.. how can she prove that he is her husband..n their baby is in her womb..will this society accept it as maans baby..what if they say,she is not pure..what will dadima say when she founds,geet spent her night with maan in shimla..will she accept her as bahu..will she believe,I am pure..this will make maan more suffer..i don't want maan to suffer becoz of me..jo bhi hua,ache kiliye hua..i got a reason to live..my loves symbol..she kept on caressing her stomach with one hand n ruffled maan's hair with other..when he came below her neck slowly kissing her every parts..she was losing herself...he kept his legs over hers encircling it..geet felt his harden..n that made her blank..at present,she cant get with him intimately..she want to stop him..but the emotion n the present situation was making her chock..n nothing came out of her mouth..her heart bleeded.. she couldn't stop him..deep in her heart she too want to be with him for last time she closed her eyes helplessly..she was shocked when she did not find any moment from him..

He did not make any more advancement than that..he kept his heads on her chest hugging her ..she opened her eyes n saw maan's eyes were closed..she thought he slept s..she sighed in relief..he want only to sleep with me..after some time she placed him beside her..

n starred at him lovingly..she kissed his forehead n pecked his lips..

Geet:I really want to keep distance from you maan..that is better for us both..she slept soon beside him in relief...maan got up after some time..he did not sleep..but he faked to be..he was starring her..he kept his hands over her hand on her stomach n entwingled with it..

Maan:I don't want u to leave me..will u stay with me forever moon..how will I live without u..akela padjaungaHis eyes started to flow n wet her cheeks'will she leave me n go for sure...he kissed her all over her face.n her body..marking her as his..without waking her..

Maan:I love you moon..i love u so much..

Maan: is this really my last night with u moon.. the angel of my life is going far away from me.. .. u said u want to go away from me..ok moon..i will also see..till how extent u wish to leave me'

He felt like his heart will jump out of its ribcage..he was not able to sleep..he covered her with the saree..n lifted her n moved to their room..he placed her on bed n covered her with the duvet..

he called adi n asked him to do some arrangements immediately..

He again came n slept near geet..sleep was not in his dictionary..he kept her head on his chest n threaded her hair..he kept on looking her the whole night

He smiled..i asked u to make me sleep..but see u r sleeping peacefully.(some women sleep for hours during pregnancy..n geet was also facing same..though she was emotional at this state..her pregnancy made her sleep deeply).really don't u have any feeling for me moon..i so much want to say I love you..if I say it now,u will think I want to stop u..so only I am saying I love u to u..y u r also leaving me in pain geet..y?

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The morning rays hit the face of geet..she opened her eyes to see her sleeping on maans chest comfortably..his eyes were red n puffy..still looking at her..

Geet:u wake up maan?

She moved from him wrapping the sari on her..

Maan st:when did I sleep to wake up moon..

Maan sat up on bed..she can feel his eyes expressing his pain..

Geet st:im sry maan..i must go away from u..for ur reputation in society..its gud to be away from u..its for ur own gud maan..n for our baby too..

She avoided his gaze on her..he moved to washroom..he came out fully ready in his casuals..

Maan:go geet..

First time he said her name..that too to go..

Maan:from today I will not see my moon na..there wont be moon in my house..so,I must stop calling moon..if its u or the moon in sky..i must forget it..

will u ever think about me geet..

his voice chocked inside his throat..

maan:atleast for a minute in ur life time..after leaving me..dont ever think about the nights we shared in bed...it will be a bad memory..any beautiful moments we shared..i am asking about..

he left in mid..

maan:chodo..go n come down..i will be waiting for u..lets have breakfast for last time together..

maan moved out leaving a baffled geet..then geet opened the ward robe to take a dress..there was nothing inside..she looked around n saw the baggage..it was all packed with her dress'

she was already breaking inside when he uttered those painful words..n now seeing he has kept her luggage ready..she ran to the washroom thinking the words he said'

will u ever think about me geet..

now her name too sounded weird for her..how can he say that she will not remember him..from now she will live as meera..only in his thoughts n his gift of baby is going to be the beautiful things she is going to cherish throughout her life..she wiped her tears n looked around the bathroom only to see it filled with milk n rose petals n surrounded by scented candles..there was a note with a packet there..

maan:..i want to say many things to u geet..but u have made me speechless..so, I will try my best not to stop you.. this is my gift for u..i brought this in mall last month..but never gave to u..white always complements ur beauty..u look like an angel in it...hope u wear this n come down..tomorrow ,u will not be there with me..whom to gift this?

Even though it is a small note..it showed how much broken he is..

Geet unwrapped the packet n saw a beautiful white saree with silver works in it..she kissed it..

Geet:your every gift is special to me maan..i cant say it to u..i don't want u to tell my love to you..baby,ur papa has arranged a milk bath for u..

She said unknowingly talking to her child..she had a gud bath n came out feeling fresh..she wored the sari gifted by maan n came down..but her every step was heavy n her heart was pacing fast at the thought of leaving him..he did not even say dont go ..he packed my things giving upto my wish..babaji..i am doing right na..pls be with me..

she meekly smiled at him n sat in the dining next to him..

nakul came to serve her..

maan:kaka..i will serve..u may look after kitchen..

nakul nodded n went from there..he served her plate..

whenever she looked at him he avoided her ..it was pricking her..she played with the food..n started to eat ..

geet st:his indifference is killing me..just if a day is hard for me to pass..how will i pass my rest of my life..


precap..hehe.😡😉😆.i will not give you.😆.but i will meet u all at page 125..😊


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Edited by valli22 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: valli22

for those who have missed my updates..pls check..n i am happy with love u give..but can i know why the likes differs ..some times..200+ n i some below..200..must i think that part is not upto ur expectation..or u forgot reading the continuation..
for example..22 part has 228 likes n part 23 ,24 25 are below 200 n again 26 th part has 227 likes...why this droppage..let me know..





Edited by valli22 - 12 years ago
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wow lovely painful update.. te wya my maaneet broken inside them, te way my maan asking to sleep with her , te way geet is worrying for te baby , but my maan sleeping on her was so emotional scenes...te way geet talking to my maan and my maan talking to his geet wen they both sleep,. was so painful.. te way my maan carrying his geet to his room and thinking she is sleeping taking his sleep away, was so lovely.,. my maan making everything special as her last day in km, te way my maan avoiding her but showing his love in his indifference was so painful.. te way he prepared bath and gift lovely scenes.. geet wat she will do till now he didt show his love but wen she decide to leave him forever she is feeling his love, but wta she will do.. geet is sad coz of my maan ki indifference , .. i love te update so much
Edited by Desigirls12 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome updates..Loved it alot
aww poor geet...felt bad for her
geet s preg wit maan child...
aww plzzz don't spreat Maaneet Di
waiting for part 28
continue soon
Edited by Ru_21 - 12 years ago
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What 2 say they both r nt opening up 2 each other... Kab tak ye chupi rahegi u only knws...
Edited by 2102 - 12 years ago

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