~FORBIDDEN DESIRE (UL II)~#2 Ch05Pg141 01/02 EXT - Page 91

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Posted: 12 years ago
Great part, beautifully written.
Feeling bad for Khushi...
Hope everything will be fine soon.
Update next part super soon.
Thanks for the pm, take care .
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Posted: 12 years ago
wil arnav push khushi aside n go??😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMg wat an update appy
u are a magician
it was so intense, shetal is an a** seriously her pa;our is more important then arnav😡
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Posted: 12 years ago


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Chap 05

Never Been Kissed

Their lips were inches apart.

Her angelic eyes closed in anticipation.

His eyes roaming around her face, capturing the effect he has on her.

Her heaving chest brushing against his every time, she inhaled his intoxicating aftershave.

Not that he has not felt her before but it was something different. He himself made her sit on his life. He himself held her hair and pulled her close to him. He himself wanted to do something which he always held back under his anger. He wanted to Kiss her. He wanted to be kissed. He wanted to devour her lips which played with his senses every time she kissed him on hischeek. He wanted to feel those feathery petals for once before she is gone.

Gone'

GoNE'

GONE'

The word hit him hard. A sense of lose, a sense of insecurity, a sense of hollowness started suffocating him.

His chain of thoughts broke by her whisper "aaarnnnav!" which was hardly audible.

Slowly he looked at her face one last time and leaned further to join their lips. He placed hisupper lip in between her lips and locked her lower lip in between his lips.

Both of them gasped in unison. The moment their lips matched Arnav closed his eyes and pressed his lips further.

**

Khushi was just blown away by his move. The kiss which she always wanted from him, she never thought it was ever going to happen in her life and that too with him initiating it.

She was just too shocked and blank to react at that moment. She did not know whether to touch him, whether not to touch him. What if he moves back? What if he insults her once again, what if he regrets this moment in his life? She relaxed her fingers and rested it on the bed finally breathing sigh. She did not want to let go off this special moment, she did not want to pull back, she did not want to disturb him, she just wanted him to kiss..kiss and kiss her.

**

Releasing her hair and tucking it behind her ear, he touched her cheeks. With the other hand he touched her back and gave a slight push to make her flush with with him. Travelling up her spine he clutched her nape to complete the unfinished kissed this time locking it even more and moistening it with his lingering saliva.

**

the moment Khushi was starting to respond the kiss there was a knock in the door.

"Khushi! Khushi! Beta"

Khushi immediately opened her eyes and realized their position. Arnav was still lost in a different world.

She pulled back immediately and looked at his trance state. His lips were still parted, his eyes closed, his hand holding her firmly against him and his face after a long time looked relaxed as if he was drowning into sleep after many sleepless night.

She started wiggling to get up from him lap and that's when he realized their state. He opened his eyes and looked at her, the first thing he saw was her lips. They were still quivering then her eyes, which was now round as a saucer and fear pretty much evident in them.

He halfheartedly released her and she got up. Straightening the crease of her dress she casually combed her hair and ran towards the door.

She immediately bumped into dadi at the door step.

"Daa'di! Aaapne mujhe bulaya?"

Dadi cupped khushi's face,hiding her smile on seeing the blush on her face. She gulpedand said "YOUR, sammy is waiting for you downstairs". Dadi made sure she pronounced the word your louder.

Khushi faked a smile and ran out from arnav's room.

Dadi stole a quick glance at Arnav and cleared her throat, "erm! How are you feeling Arnav?"

"Dadi! Did you give permission to samrat to meet Khushi before marriage?"

Dadi raised her eyebrows and again gulped her bubbling fits.

"Haan!" she said casually.

"Par dadi, the couples cannot see each other before marriage right?"

"haan, woh to hai, but that is only after haldi", she tactfully corrected.

Dadi knew it very well that Arnav does not like samrat around Khushi. And what she witnessed few minutes back, before she called out khushi's name, made her believe that Arnav will go all the more possessive.

"ab chalo, I will ask Khushi to make haldi wala doodh for you. it will heal your wound faster".

"I don't want anything dadi", Arnav angrily said and got up. Leaving dadi behind he walked down to the living room where Khushi and samrat were talking.

Thanks divvk for correction 🤗

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Edited by Appy_Indy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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unbelievable me 2 nd that too on appy's update 😲
pinching oouucchh😵
well the almost kiss was completed yeah 😳
so u are completing all the rituals one by one 👏
waiting for the extension
Edited by vandana73 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
SECOND PAGEE
THANKS NANNAV


WHAT THEEE
extension?😭

IT WAS AWESOMEEE
THEIR FIRST KISS..😳
u described it beautifully...

Dadi😡😆

Love uuu
Vani
Edited by Shimmer_Vani - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow there first kiss
ossum dear
waiitng for the extended part dear
pls update soon
and now we should see J asr
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Posted: 12 years ago
aww...so much passion in both...😳
loved them...🤗
they did their first kiss...omg ..u wer so in flow while describng it...
tat was passionate and pure with ecstacy...☺️☺️☺️
hey dadi...i got ur back... yes go fr it...u r on rgt way and ur not to touch chote is responding ...👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 love u dadi... 😃 😃 😃

samrat here... YOUR??? arghh nw tat i hurt me but stil i smiled cz i knw u mean it the othr way... 😆 😆 😆

arnav being possesv...😳 the new thng is tat he is concernd fr marriage rituals...tat too fr tat condition of groom - bride nt meetng each othr... 😆 😆 😆 IPKKND flashd me a sec...

im all set to watch them ahead...
waitng desp fr the extnsn 😭 😭 😭 😭

Edited by -saranya- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
my place

>edited<


Uff,he does have her perfect effect,and now I know,what is going to be next. Well,i do want him to kiss her!

OMG!the kissed!

<3<3<3

Uff,why this disturbance?
</3 😭

😲 Dadi witnessed the kiss?

Arnav perfectly in Love! <3

J boy. :-p
Moving on. 😆
Edited by kuts - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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As always ... this Arnav character always confuses me!!

What does he actually want?

1stly the dude just kisses .. knowing that she will be gone soon!! wow!! seriously man u have a nerve!!

2ndly he does not like Khushi meeting Samrat!! wasn't he the one who set this up in the 1st place and chose the groom for her?

3rdly couples not meeting before marriage is supposed to be applicable only for Khushi-Samrat? what abt he himself and his fiancee?
So was he expecting to find solace that the couple will not see each other for few more hours/day but is okie that she is gonna go for gud the next day? really?

Anyways ... Its always Khushi that i feel for!! all she has is pain stamped on her ... thanks to the infamous thinking and egoistic monster of a guy!!

Gud one Appy!! Waiting for the extn!!

~Leena
Edited by LeenaRocks - 12 years ago

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