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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: panchaali

Chap 11

I knew it would be Rohan...

Seriously why Mnayata went to that Devil's den alone?


yes rohan was killed
manyata was foolish to visit uday alone
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hello Andy😛

As usual the update was just amazingthe best thing was it was a triple update😃 your so sweet to give such yummy updates😊!!
so finally finally the truth is revealed, all the events of past have been cleared now no doubts left!!😉 but ab ye manyata ko kon samjha skta hai!! do something, now i am looking forward to the leading love story😳 how manyata will accept him and how will he leave his filthy life😃 just waiting for the next few chapters😉 jaldi jaldi update kro, i am very impatient 😛!! thanks for the Pm!
i am so much engrossed in the story!
Love Ya!😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -Zina-

Hello Andy😛hi zina

As usual the update was just amazingthe best thing was it was a triple update😃 your so sweet to give such yummy updates😊!! thanks zina it was actually one single chap but it turned too big so i had to split it into parts
so finally finally the truth is revealed, all the events of past have been cleared now no doubts left!!😉 but ab ye manyata ko kon samjha skta hai!! do something, now i am looking forward to the leading love story😳 love will take some time to develop as manyata hates him now how manyata will accept him and how will he leave his filthy life😃yes he has to leave it just waiting for the next few chapters😉 jaldi jaldi update kro, i am very impatient 😛!! thanks for the Pm! will try to update the next part tmrw by afternoon
i am so much engrossed in the story!my iam impressed
Love Ya!😳love you tooo
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zina am so happy to see this comment
you gave me two huge comments
just loved them
thanks so much Embarrassed

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: panchaali

Chap 11

I knew it would be Rohan...

Seriously why Mnayata went to that Devil's den alone?


she was really folish to do so
so she has to suffer its cosequences
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: panchaali

Chap: 12

OMG I am superthrilled...

Just can't leave it!!!!

thanks so much dear
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Shahista01

Unres.
Thank u andy for such a treat.welcome dear double update and written so well. thanks so much shah😃
Finally cleared all of my confusion, know I bombarded u with so many questions on previous chapter but this one made sense and answered many of the questions.you still have questions ithought i cleared all confusions😕 U thought about evry detail and covered it so well. Always kept us guessing and more intrigued... he he he😆😆😆😆😆😆😆u really have a feel 4 this thriller and suspence stories, its brilliant. hats off 2 u 4 giving us such a different and unidue version of manveer.thanks so much shah I am waiting eagerly 4 next chappie. muuaah.will update tmrw for sure😃
thaks so much for this lovely comment
do tell me what questions i need to answer next

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: huma12.




andyyy u think this storyyy is not good 😕😕😕😕 tm pagal hu 😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆 i love this storyyy 😃😃😛😛😛😛😛😛

thanks so much huma for this statement😳😃😃😃😃😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Chapter 20: A CRY FOR HELP
Uday approached manyata's room with great anger.😡 All this should stop this instant. He could no longer fall for the charm of this girl, who made him weak. It was all his bl**y mistake. He entered the room there he saw manyata sitting on the bed her head resting on her knees . she was crying. He looked and saw the plates of untouched food in front of him. he got angry and said

U: manyata eat your food . you haven't eaten since yesterday

Manyata did not answer nor move from her position. She continued to sit in that position

U: manyata I said eat your food

Manyata continued to sit that way

U: manyata for the last time iam saying😡

Manyat looked at time. Her eyes spitting out the anger bottled deep inside her. She looked tired yet so beautiful. Her eyes wide with anger. Her lips pink and rosy. Her cheeks were reddened. In short she looked like a angel, descended from heaven. All his resolve dissolved in thin air. He was to kill this innocent life, no, he could not do it. for the first time in his crime life, he could not kill the girl in front of him. she made him remember that once he too was once innocent and carefree like her

M: what will you do if I don't eat? Eh kill me? That is why you brought me here isn't it. do it I say or I myself will starve to death

U: princess you need to eat for god's sake

M: I wont eat. Oh I wish I could stop all this forever

Saying this she got up and banged her head on the wall with full force and then repeated it on and on. Her blood started to soak in the wall. Uday just could not know what to do and he pulled her away from the wall and

BAMM slapped her hard on the face

U: don't ever try to hurt yourself manyata. Never ever ever try it once more and pushed her to the bed. Manyata looked at him with lots of questions arising in her maind

Uday went outside and returned with a first aid box. He nursed her and she was too drizzy to move around. But manyata will always be manyata and started to taunt him about his family once more

Uday had enough of these false accusations

He rose from the bed and looked straight into her drizzy eyes . there was a look of extreme anger and disappointment visible in his eyes.

U: enough manyata of this talk don't talk about things you don't even know off. You don't even know the truth about me. You wont find the truth reading any gossip magazine or googling me on the net. You need to know the truth. The bitter truth. The truth why I became this horrible monster

For once at least listen to me

He began narrating his past to her. The loving family he had, his chotti. His friends ajay and suraj

The life they had, the fun and pranks they played

Suraj's unknown money source and his hidings from them'

Suraj and unnathi's relation and the argument with the friends

mr kappor and his offer to his father

The threats of mr kapoor

suraj and unnathi going to the hotel and uday seeing it

uday enjoying his birthday party without knowing that the money they were spending came from selling his sister

Then uday returning home only to see the charred remains of his house

The news that his sister committed suicide

The talks of the people around him, how the story was twisted beyond imagination

His walk on the road and he meeting suraj

Both going to the site were unnathi's body was found

Suraj confessing the truth and his first killing

His encounter with mr kapoor and his killings

Then how he build his empire out of nothing and became one successful business man

But how he still continued his life of crime

And now his….. uday stopped there he was not sure of that matter yet. Manyata looked at him. there was a vacuum in her expression. He could not understand what she was thinking now. He wanted to hold her hands and cry out his inner most feelings to her. His cell rang

It was jaggat

U: yes jaggat

U: what you are here ok I will come now

Manyata felt it was a perfect time to seek for help she started screaming like all hell broke loose

Uday quickly closed the door and asked her to remain silent or………….

Manyata continued to scream HEELPPP, HELPPP, HELPPP

Uday left the basement to the ground floor to meet jaggat.

Jaggat was at the door

U: come in jaggat

Jaggat saw a broken uday in front of him, his eyes bloodshot and he was in a total mess. He smelled of alcohol like he was drinking a lot

J: uday how are you feeling

U: I don't know jaggat. Iam too sad to even think properly

U: any news about manyata yet

J: no,, but our police force is thoroughly searching this city. We will find her soon

down in the basement manyata was screaming her lungs out, but no sound came out from that room

And nobody knew that she was hidden there

U: can I offer you some water, sorry there are no servants here to prepare you some tea. I gave them off as I wanted to be left alone for sometime

J: no its ok uday. I think I should leave now, you look in a bad form

U: I don't know jaggat but what can I do, I will be at your office in one hour or so, got to freshen myself

J: ok see you there, bye

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Manyata was still screaming for help when uday entered the room

U: princess don't scream, the room is sound proof, so no use of screaming

Manyata looked at him with shock clearly written on her face

U: and eat something, I wont be back till evening

He was still disappointed with her as she falsly accused his familt over and over. That frustration was visible

He walked back without looking at her

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Manyata was crying like hell. She had foolishly walked into the hands of death. Death was waiting for her outside the door in the form of Mr. Udayveer singh alias Mr. Shark, the notorious criminal. When death stares at you at this distance there is only one thing that comes in one's mind. It is survival, the instinct to escape from the impending danger. She was marked for killing like a goat taken to a butcher's shop, waiting for its turn to be killed.

She was trying to be brave in front of uday but as seconds passed, fear started to grip her. The room was a virtual prison to her. She could never understand whether it was day or night or guess what time was it. uday did supply her food but she refused to touch them. She was weak with hunger and thirst, but she refused to touch the food.

Any way she was to die then why not now? She should die out of starvation, than waiting to be killed inch by inch by that bast***d. she remembered seeing rohan's mutilated body. She felt like retching out but there was nothing in her stomach to vomit

Manyata wanted to live. She had just started her life. She had a lot of dreams and ambitions. Now all she was seeing was a question mark in front of her- how long will all these last? All this torture. The only human she saw in the last 2 days was udayveer and as usual, she took out her frustration on him . no, he deserved it after all he was a heartless jerk. A mastermind behind many brutal killings.

Yet, no one knew the true nature of uday and no one will ever know. There were 2 persons who knew the identity of mr shark and one was dead and the next waiting for her death. His identity will never ever to brought to the real world ever and he could continue to haunt the nights of people without being captured. No, she should never allow it. after all she was a yuvarani, the queen of her riyasat. She was to see that crime was punished and safety of her people assured. But, she herself was a marked man, then how?

Think manyata , think you can do this, But how?

The first thing you have to do is escape. She looked at the chain tied to her leg she tried to remove it but in vain, she could not. She could not scream the room was sound proof. God alone will know what else he did to this room

She needed to escape. She laid down on her bed and the events in the past came to her mind. She analyzed uday's character with care and lo she got her answer, her ticket to freedom. The only thing she was unsure was whether she herself will fall for uday once again as once she was deeply in love with him

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The scene in the palace was heartbreaking

Komal refused to eat without getting any news of her daughter

Ds was silent, she was regurly in contact with the police chiefs to find any news about her granddaughter

Jai was crying for hours as she was her sister's best friend and could not stand this situation

Brigraj looked like he had aged 10 years. He missed his daughter, the apple of his eye

Only one person was happy about this. The money spent on manyata was going to reap her the whole world itself

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Guys so finally I reached the end of the chapter

So how was it?

I tried to explain manyata's feeling, hope is was expressed properly

Do hit the like button and do comment please

I want both your likes and comments

Edited by andy.a - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsssmmm andyyy 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
thanksss 4 pm😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃
Edited by huma12. - 12 years ago
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