'THE SECOND SHADOW' chap 30 pg 146 new

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andy.a

@andy.a

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#611

Originally posted by: cnibir
Hey, Wht do I say?? It's the same old things tht I have been commenting b4... Really well written and I got to understand a little more about manyata and udays inner turmoil... Thnx for the pm and I can't wait to c Wht manyata plans for uday...

Continue soon and plz pm me!!! Fantastic job!!

thnks dear
what mnyata is planning led to the promo scene on pg 47
manyata falls for udays charm

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Fekta Holic

@WhatTheF

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#612

Awsomeee...update
love it
plz...update soon thanx for PM.

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andy.a

@andy.a

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#613

Originally posted by: Ashish.Holic
Awsomeee...update
love it
plz...update soon thanx for PM.

thnks so much sweta

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zainab

@--Zinay--

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#614

Hello Andy😛

there is a good news! guess what?? 😃 this time i am commenting on time yeey!! party🥳lol!!😆 i am such a mini head😆!! okay now i will not eat you intelligent head😃!

the update was awesome, fantastic, amazing, wonderful, lovely, out-stanting👏great work girl, i just love this SSmore over i love uday☺️agr manyata ko nahi chaheye yar,to mje day do uday ko, mje wo kisi b haal main manzoor hai😳😆!! don't you think i am saying all stupid stuff all right, the update was soo good baby😃, just like you! OMG!! why doesn't this manyata 😡understands a small thing, she is a much big mini head than i am😆bechara uday sari story btane kay bad b nai samajti😭!! what can we except from this mini head😡 lagta hai isko marnay ka bohat shook hai🤢 uday is so caring for her, he cannot see her in pain😭 and she just keeps on irritating him and me😡!! DUMBOO!!

this SS is really very good, i have chipko fied to it with fevicol🤣
stupid joke!😆!
wonderful update andy, thanks a lot for Pm, and please please is manyata k dimagh main thori si akal dall do chahe to muj say thori si udhar lay lo😆! update soon Please😳!!
Love ya!😳
🤗
Huggies
😃😃😃
😃MUaah!

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anushruthi

@anushruthi

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#615

Very Nice chapter

so UV reveals his past 2 M

eager 2 knw how M escapes ...

cont soon

thanks 4 de PM

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panchaali

@panchaali

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#616

Originally posted by: andy.a
they have not yet discovered whether they are in love or not they are just friends for now

awwwn sirf friends!!!! I am hurt😲

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andy.a

@andy.a

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#617

Originally posted by: panchaali

awwwn sirf friends!!!! I am hurt😲

they havent yet understood the feeling inside them is love
only time will tell them

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chitra_rao

@chitra_rao

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#618

res😊...
unres...
Ooosome update 👏, loved it 😳, and thanks for the PM andy😊

Part 1: Difficult Manyata confused Uday: Again very well put andy, I could very well sense the inner turmoil of a lion who feel in love with his own prey and the lamb who is the prey of this lion, but still somewhere deep down her heart beats for this monster😳. When Manyata is starving , uady gets worried, when Manyata hurts herself, Uday looses his control 😳😳, it is so obvious this MR shark can never ever kill the lady for whom his heart has first time started beating 😉

Part 2: Princess Manyata-the true royal: yes here she was like a true royal who was not ready to give up . She tries almost everything in her control to save herself. She tries calling jaggat for help, she tries to kill herself to save herself the tourture of being killed by Mr shark, plus she oesnt want to give Mr shark teh satisfaction that he killed her 😆😳. And then when everything done, she uses her royal brain to hatch a plan and get out of the clutches of this monster.

I have a feeling she will try to gain Uday's confidence by going to teh extend of accepting him in her life again, so that Uday will herself let her go. And I guess there is where she back-stabs Uday and tells Jaggat to arrest her in her house. Just my guesses 😊, but again what evidence does she have, against Uday? I mean Uday is just too smart for her.

Nice update continue soon 😊

Edited by chitra_rao - 12 years ago

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Safia Rafiq

@safia25

Explorer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#619

Ab kitna intazar karwao gi yar...enough plz now reveal how manyata reached home...well that was a super dooper update..hmmm ..,,,so now manyata will try to drool uday on herself...ooohhH clever yuvrani..