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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: SHINYSHREYA

Wow! such an amazing update. You are a wonderful writer. Thanks for the pm.

😳 aww thankyou so kind of you think that I am a writer...I wish I were😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thankyou
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aroran

Lovely update 👍🏼

Thankyou 😊
Awsm Rishbala moments
I love writing these moments...😉
Both r very stubborn 😭
yes they are , aren't they...but that is what makes them sizzle😳
Waiting for next update

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: zoshad3119

awesome updates dear...love rishbala's nok-jhok...😉

thnxx for pm...

Thankyou Zohra ... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aksuji


OMG😛 ...so much is in store for us😃...yay...now m even more excited...thanku saumya for this wonderful ff and for replying to all my posts...
my exams will start from 2nd feb ,,,,,exam prep. r going on...
update soon😊

Lots of luck for your exams...hopefully you will do exceedingly well👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kendra

hayee i just loved the dupatta scene😳

thanks for pm
pls do continue soon.😃

you are so welcome
yeah I know the dupatta scene was cutie cutie...am loving your updates too😃
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Originally posted by: SAnonymous

Awesome Updates Saumya

We will see tough RK and soft nature of RK. Hope Madhu can bring out Rishabh from RK.

Thankyou soo much Sarada for commenting ...I am actually getting lost in all the stuff that is going arround and some how personally want RK to remain a little tough for reasons that will be revealed in future chapters...but I do want him to rise in love with Madhu...lets see how things go😊
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Originally posted by: Desire6

Lovly update.. Read all chapters in a go... Hav sent u a buddy requst. Pls pm wen u update next part.

I sure will
thankyou for such a lovely comment😃
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Chapter 26
Just a little fun chapter...nothing serious

RK brought Madhu out to the living room so that they could talk to the nutritionist. What ever the nutritionist was telling was all gibberish to Madhu. She was not getting the reason why she was being denied food. She was not a foodie but yet she loved to eat a variety of things.

RK was listening intently and was making mental notes. Madhu took that opportunity to study his behavior and to grab the physical details that went by his mood. She saw that there was a small greyish thread on his arm and he was all the time distracted by it. Finally he removed it. A perfectionist and a look obsessed person was what came to Madhu's mind. That is shallow living once again her mind told her but….Oh yes it struck her….

Madhu(whispered):-You are obsessed with external beauty. So you cannot even tolerate the idea of me gaining weight that is why all this nutritionist and all. Now you want to manage my diet also. Oh no….not atall this is not going to happen. She squinted her eyes and looked at him as if she had resolved the biggest mystery of the land.

He was really amused. It took all his effort to keep him straight but then he burst into real laughter.

RK:- which detective Novels do you favor Biwi??no popatlaal And he gave her tap on her head.

She understood that she made herself a Popat.

IG also entered at that time. He saw his entire family sitting their. He had heard his sons real laughter after an era or so. He casted an enquiring look at Madhu. Madhu replied by her eyes that she will inform him the details later. That was probably a way of everyday communication between them. Madhu had been with Mr Kundra for quite some time now. This passage of message between the two did not go unnoticed by RK, and boy he took serious note of it though both of them were oblivious to it. So much for reading his gestures…..

When The nutritionist drew her diet plan the first to view it skeptically was Mr Kundra sr. It was very hard for him to curb his laughter. He could not imagine Madhu not eating her special grilled cheese sandwiches and paneer tikka's. Paneer Tikka was something she could simply not live without and then those dahi papdi's. He could not stop himself and finally asked the nutritionist

IG:- I understand all this greens and whey protein and this and that but this chart is missing something very critical for Madhu

RK:- and what might that be SIR ….. since you are so aware of her likes and dislikes.

IG:- hid his smile and then said Madhu I cannot see paneer TIkka nor dahi papdi nor sandwhiches…. Can you ??

Madhu:- I have had it…look RK…

Nutritionist :- But sir she cant eat any of those stuff untill this issue of her creatinine is resolved…..

IG:- Creatinine?????????

RK:- I think you are done here mam … I will take it from here

IG :- wait. What is wrong with her??

RK gestured her to leave but she was not in a mood to buy wrath of RK's dad even at RK's insistence.

Nu:- Sir I am sorry but I cannot tell you a thing other than that her creatinine is running a little high which needs to be evaluated. Her doctors would be in a better situation to inform more on this issue. She needs restricted diet till this comes in normal ranges.

IG nodded and the nutritionist left. IG turned to RK and asked "you must be knowing the answer what is it."

RK saw the lines of concern marr his otherwise Iron face. He was jealous of Madhu.

RK:- I don't see the need to discuss it with you. She is my responsibility and I know how to handle my responsibilities to perfection.

IG:- excuse me she is still my subordinate and a govt. servant. I have every right to know what is wrong with her? Where was this responsibility when you married her without her consent.

Madhu was listening to all this childish humdrum with little interest and this irked RK a lot.

RK:- you know she was forced into marriage with me. You kept quiet then, for your personal reasons, you should keep quiet now for my personal reasons.

RK:- BIWI….

RK:- Biwi you are going back to bed.

Madhu:- Yes Pati

IG:- ASP Madhu report to me in my study now.

Madhu:- Yes Sir.

RK:- Bed right now. He placed his left hand on her shoulder and tried to pick her up.

Bittuji saw all that he did not want his chief getting sandwhich between the two iron pillars. He said to himself

"ab samajh mein aaya auntyji shanti ki murti kyoun bani rehti hai."

Bittuji:- chief chief david ji ka phone hai..

RK:- Bittuji boliye RK devi durga ko visarjit karne jaa raha hai.

Radha:- Madhu tumhari ma ko phone beta

Madhu:- boliye gadtantra divas ki pared mein gayi hai.

IG:- looked at both of them…and thought to himself " boy he is smitten real real bad" it was getting difficult for them to curb his sly smile . He was actually enjoying it and Madhu was reading his facial nuances from across the room and she felt irritated to be the subject of this game between the father and son duo. She pushed RK hard and raced outside the house. She saw her jeep and chetan there. She quickly climbed in the passenger seat and asked chetan to drive.

RK came out as fast as he could and seeing Madhu run away from the scene he said to himself

RK:- You should not have done that…..

Bittuji:- Chief david ji ka phone…

RK glared at him. Apni BHabhi ji ko bulaiye yahan 30 min mein nahi to aap bahut yaad aayeinge

Bittuji:- chief ….RK left…hey bhagwaan yeh aage Kuan peechey khai nahi yeh dono taraf talwaar …..mera kya hoga.

Bittuji tried calling on her cell but it rang in the house,

Bittuji:- sahi hai phone bhi lekar nahi gayi ab…..

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