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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow... awesome update...👏
loved riya's father...👍🏼


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Posted: 12 years ago
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awsum update..!!
lvd arjun n piya's father convo..!!!
piya's father is cool..!!
precap is interesting..!!!
continue soon..!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83

PART 13


(Arjun piya ko rathore k ghar chod kr sidhe ETF office aata hai'. ETF team arjun ko dekh kr')

Chotu : Sir aap to piya k sath gya the???? Wapas bhi aa gye?????

Arjun : haan.. main sath gya tha wahaan rehne nhi'. aur piya bhi aayi hai' wo rathore k ghar me hai'.

Rathore : wahaan sab theek tha??????

Arjun : haan' sab theek hi tha'..(arjun wahaan ki sari baat batata hai'.)

Rathore : aakhir wo ek ex-army officer ki beti hai'. Use thik hona hi hai'. (tabhi rathore ka phone ring krta hai'.rathore phone attended krne k baad)

Rathore : mujhe commissioner sir ne bulaya hai'. Iss case k silsiley me kuch baat krne k liye' RAW k chief bhi wahi honge'. Ye case itna simple nhi hai' (Rathore ETF office se nikalta hai' pr wo kuch soch pr pehle ghar jaata hai'.Piya aur masi drawing room me baith kr baatein kr rhe hai.. tabhi rathore aata hai'aur dono khade ho jate hai.. rathore bhi khade khade piya se baat krta hai)

Rathore's House

Rathore : Piya ab tum kaisi ho?? Aur tumhare parents'.

Piya : sab thik hai' Pr aap aaj jaldi?????

Rathore to piya : mujhe commissioner sir ne bulaya hai.. wahaan RAW chief bhi honge' agar koi msg dena chaho to mujhe de skti ho'

Piya : sir wo maine aate hi unse baat ki thi' to unhone mujhe kal subah office bulaya hai'. To main kal unse mil hi rhi hu'..

Rathore : ok thik hai.. main chalta hu'.

Piya : Sir aapse kuch puchna tha???????

Rathore : Piya ye mera ghar hai.. office nhi' aur tum meri junior bhi nhi ho'.ghar me mujhe sir sun na psnd nhi'

Piya : to kya bolu' aap mujhse ho bhi to bade.. like a big brother' main aur riya hamesha se baat krte the.. k hamara bada bhai hota to kaisa hota' syad aapke jaisa hota'..

Rathore : tum kuch keh rhi thi???????

(rathore se reply na sun kr'piya thodi si udas ho jati hai' pr wo thik hai')

Piya : haan' haan' wo actual me kal subah main RAW office jaa rhi hu' to ho skta hai' mujhe jaldi hi agle mission k liye jaane pade' so kya main aaj raat dinner pr ghar pr mera matlab hai aapke ghar pr ETF team aur aisha ko bula skti hu'aap sabhi ne mera itna khayal rakha ek thanx to banta hai' aur kya pta ye mera aap sab k sath pehla aur akhiri dinner ho'.

Rathore : haan' kyun nhi.. jab tak tum yahaan ho ye tumhara bhi ghar hai.. tum jise chahe yahaan bula skti ho'

Piya : thank you siiir' sorry no sir'.

(rathore jaane lagta hai.. piya masi ki taraf dekh hai apni khusi ka izhar krti hai.. tabhi enterance pr rathore rukta hai')

Rathore(suddenly) : Piya???

Piya : jee'.

Rathore : tum bol skti ho' pr meri team k aage nahi'..

Piya : thank you so much' (piya masi k gale milti hai'..suddenly rathore)

Rathore : to main aaj k dinner me invited hu ya nhi??????

Piya : ap hi to chief guest ho'.

(Rathore wahaan se chala jata hai'..Piya arjun, chotu aisha aur shree ko invite krne k liye msg krti hai'.arjun chotu aur shree ka cell ek sath ring krta hai msg tone pr teeno ek sath msg padhte hai)

IN ETF OFFICE

Shree : Oh piya ka msg hai' usne dinner pr bulaya hai.. main to definitely jane wala hu'

Chotu : main bhi ' mujhe bhi same msg'.

(Arjun dono ki baat sunta hai pr koi reply nhi deta'shree chotu ETF se sath me rathore k ghar k liye nikalne k liye hote hai..')

Shree : Sir hum rathore sir k ghar jaa rhe hai.. aap bhi aa rhe hai naa?????

Arjun : kyun????? Kuch khas hai kya rathore k ghar???????

Chotu : piya ne dinner pr bulaya hai'. (Arjun realized k wo to bhul hi gya tha)

Arjun : abhi mujhe thoda kaam hai'..tum log jao'

(arjun ka jawab sun kr dono rathore k ghar k liye nikalte hai'wahaan pr aisha pehle se aayi huyi hai' piya khud se khana bana rhi hai'aur abhi khana taiyar nhi hai.. to chotu aur shree use tease krne lagte hai)

Shree : hume pta hota k khana tum bana rhi ho.. to hum khana kha kr aate

Chotu : aur kya'. Lgta hai khana khane k liye kal tak ka intzaar krna padega'

Piya : oh gya tum logo ka'.. zyada bolne ki zarurat nhi hai.. waise bhi abhi tumhare rathore sir aur arjun sir kahaan aaye hai

Chotu : arjun sir ka to pta nhi' humne unse pucha bhi tha to koi dhang se jawab nhi mila

Shree : aur rathore sir ka ghar hai to wo kahaan jayenge'. Yahi aayenge'

(tabhi masi aati hai..)

Masi to PIya : dekho ab tumhare dost bhi aa gye hai.. jakar unke sath baitho' ye main dekh lungi

Piya : pr masi????? Aaj sara khana main banane wali hu

Masi : ban chuka hai sara khana'. Bas jo thoda bahut reh gya hai main dekh lungi.. jao tum

(piya aur baki sab kitchen se nikalte hai' aur drawing room me aakar baith jaate hai')

Shree : jab tak rathore sir nhi aate tab tak to intzaar krna hi padega

Chotu : aise to hum bore ho jayenge

Piya : mere pass idea hai.. mere room me ludo rakhi hai' pta nhi kiski hai'. Wo lekar aati hu wahi khelte hai'..

(Piya ludo lekar aati hai' aur sare saap sidhi khelne lagte hai'.sabhi khel hi rahe hote hai'. Chotu ko saap sidhi me 99 wala saap kaat jata hai'to sare use tease krne lagte hai'..)

Piya : awweee'.99 wale saap ne kataa' (chotu cute sa face banata hai'.)

Shree : koi nhi' chotu ye game ham hi jitenge

Piya : rehne do.. agar ludo me oympics hote to ek gold medal to main hi lati'. Champion hu main'..

(Rathore enter hota hai' usne ye sab baatein sun li hoti hai'.rathore remembers k roshni bhi zabardasti use aur arjun ko ludo khelne pr majboor krti thi'.

Roshni to Rathore : agar aap chahte ho k main iss barish me bahar naa jau to mere sath baith kr khelo wrna main jaa rhi hu

Arjun : ye sahi hai' achchi dhamki hai

Roshni to arjun : ye tumhare liye bhi hai

Rathore to Arjun : aaja bhai khel le'. Iss se pehle se bahar jaaye aur bimar hokar aaye

(aur jab teeno khelna start krte hai' to same chotu wali situation me har baar roshni fasti hai'.

Arjun to roshni : jab pta hota hai k haarna tumhe hi hai to kyun khelti ho'

Roshni : haar kr jitne wale ko bazigar kehte hai'..

Flashback end)

Rathore : ye kya shor macha rakha hai'..

Shree : wo sorry sir'.wo chotu ko snake & ladder me 99 wale snake ne kata'..

Rathore : to isliye itna shor macha rhe ho' isme shor machne ki kya zarurat hai'

(rathore apne room me fresh hone k liye chala jaata hai' shree ka 99 wala dialogue arjun bhi sun leta hai' aur use bhi wahi sab kuch yaad aata hai to rathore ne yaad kia tha'.)

Shree : Office me to boss hai hi'. Aur ghar me bhi' bas inhe to daatne ka mauka milna chahiye'..

(Arjun enters'.)

Arjun : wo office me boss hai kyunki tumhara senior hai' aur ye ghar uska hai to wo iss ghar ka boss hai'.

(Shree is like aasman se gire khajur pr aatke'..Sare khade ho jate hai' piya jaldi se ludo utha kr rakh aati hai'.)

Piya : Main khana lagati hu'..(piya aur aisha wahaan se chale jaate hai')

PRECAP : (Next morning Piya aur rathore RAW office jaate hai' RAW office ek highly protected area hai' wahaan ander jana kafi muskil hai.. high security'.checking'sab kuch k galti ki kahi koi gunjaish naa rhe'.Rathore impress ho jata hai' wahi piya')

Piya Murmuring : fir se aa gyi iss jail me' uff'aisi kaun si afat aane wali hai yahaan jo itni security hai'.


PART 14LINK

Edited by Annudsweetgirl - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84

loved the ludo part...and frndship b/w piya chotu and shree.👏
awesome update...👍🏼

Edited by umamah70 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85

amazing update...
lvd piya shree chotu n ayesha's bonding...
fb ws cute...
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
loved the update... ludo part remained me Trio's masti... Piya already s sharing good bond with Shree nd Chotu... waiting for nxt part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
great part
loved aisha, shree, chotu nd piyas bonding
intersting precap
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
great update :)
the ludo part was so cute :) loved it
loved the way chotu and shree were teasing piya in kitchen
piya's bonding with chotu and shree is just superb
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 14


ON DINNING TABLE

(sabhi khana kha rhe hai.. masi aur piya serve kr rhe hai')

Shree to piya : r u sure k ye khana tumne banaya hai???

Piya : kya matlab??????

Chotu : nhi' lag nhi rha k tumne banaya hai'. Kafi achcha banaya hai' zarur tumne masi ki help li hogi'.

Shree : chotu nhi.. masi ki help nhi li' ye sara khana to masi ne hi banaya hai'.help to piya ne ki hai'.

Piya : oh hello' tariff nhi kr skte to kam se kam burai to mat karo meri'..

Aisha : Piya sach me khana kafi achcha bana hai

chotu : mujhe pta tha k koi tariff kre na kare pr aisha to karegi hi.. akhir ek ladki hi to dusri ladki hai sath dengi

Piya : itna bura bhi nhi hai

Rathore : piya khana sach me achcha bana hai'(rathore apne violet me se paise nikal kr piya ko deta hai..)

Piya : ye kis liye??????

Rathore : hamare ghar ki betiya jab pehli baar khana banati hai to unhe sagun dia jaata hai'..ye wahi hai'.

Piya : oh' thank you'(piya le leti hai')

Shree : ek kaam karo piya har mahine ki 7 tarikh ko tum khana banaya karo' uss din salary day bhi hai'. To kafi achchi kamai ho jayegi'..

(Rathore aur arjun shree ki ye baat sun kr ek dusre ko dekhte hai'k roshni month ki 7 tarikh ko jaan bujh kr khud khana banti thi'

Arjun aur rathore dinning table pr baith kr khana kha rhe hai

Roshni : chaliye nikaliye mera sagun

Rathore : haan meri maa'. Ye lo'(rathore use kuch paise deta hai')

Roshni to arjun : ab aapko specially bola jayega tabhi sunoge'.

Arjun : main kyun du'. Rathore ne de to dia'.

Roshni : ye ghar hai to iske jo bhi rivaz hai wo maan ne padege'to tum iss ghar me ho to yahaan k rivaz mano aur sagun nikalo

Rathore : haan bhai de de.. ye bhi ek taraf ki hafta vasuli hai'

Roshni : hafta nhi mahina vasuli' aur aap mujhe apni salary me se thoda sa hissa nhi de skte kya????

FLASHBACK END'.

Piya : waise not a bad idea' pr problem ye hai k kal main RAW chief se milne jaa rhi hu' jaldi hi mujhe agle mission pr jana hoga' wo skta hai k ye hum sabka sath me akhiri dinner ho

Rathore : Piya kal main bhi tumhare sath RAW office jaane wala hu'. Meri bhi tumhare chief se meeting hai aur commissioner sir bhi wahi honge'.

(Rathore ki baat sun kr sab thoda shocked ho jate hai')

Arjun : sab theek to hai??????

Rathore : wo to kal jaakar hi pta chalega'..

(sab dinner finish krte hai..chotu, aisha aur shree piya k liye laya gift use dete hai aur ghar chale jaate hai.. arjun koi gift nhi deta' aur wo chala jaata hai.. Piya aur masi dinning table ki safai karte hai hai'..to arjun jahaan baitha tha uss side se piya saaf kr rhi hoti hai.. aur arjun ki plate ki niche se usse paise milte hai'.use pta hai ye arjun ne hi rakhe honge.. kyunki baki sabne gifts use khud diye the

Piya to herself : ye kis liye??????? Syad mere hi liye honge'khud se nhi de skte the'.(aur wo ye paise rakh leti hai'..tabhi rathore aata hai)

Rathore : Piya kuch baat krni hai'.

Piya : jee boliye

Rathore : ye tumhare liye'Mujhe pta nhi tumhe psnd aayega ya nhi' pr ye kisi ko bahut psnd tha(Rathore piya k liye gift laya hota hai wo use deta hai'aur piya le leti hai..piya use open krti hai to wo hanging bells hai)

Piya : thank you'.ye bahut khubsurat hai' aur mujhe bahut psnd bhi

Rathore : hmm' Piya tumhe kuch batana hai

Piya : haan boliye naa

Rathore : dekho kal jab tum RAW office jaogi to tumhare saamne ek kafi muskil situation bhi ho skti hai' actual me issi silsiley me main late ho gya

Piya : matlab????????

Rathore : kal tumhe kuch faisle lene ko kaha jayega' aur tumhara jo bhi faisla hoga sabhi ko manjur hoga' pr ek advise dunga faisla dil se nhi dimag se krna'

Piya : Jee bilkul'..

Rathore : chalo good night' aur tum jaa kar so jao'..

Piya : good night

(Next morning Piya aur rathore RAW office jaate hai' RAW office ek highly protected area hai' wahaan ander jana kafi muskil hai.. high security'.checking'sab kuch k galti ki kahi koi gunjaish naa rhe'.Rathore impress ho jata hai' wahi piya')

Piya Murmuring : fir se aa gyi iss jail me' uff aisi kaun si afat aane wali hai yahaan jo itni security hai'.

Rathore : kuch kaha tumne????

Piya : nhi kuch nhi'..(dono ander jaate hai'.conferance room me already RAW chief aur commissioner baithe hote hai'.Meeting Start hoti hai'.)

RAW chief to Piya : jab tumhari identity reveal ho gyi thi aur tumhe wahaan se nikalne ko kaha gya tha to kyun nhi nikli

Piya : but sir you know naa' main kahaan tak pahuch gyi thi' agar main uss whqt nikal jati to halat aur bigad jaate hai

RAW chief : tumhe pta hai tumhari jaan ko wahaan kitna khatra tha

Piya : fir bhi main sahi salamat hu naa' important kya hai.. meri jaan bachna ya mission.. Mission na' to wo successful rha naa

RAW chief : pr wahaan tumhari identity reveal hone se khatra badh gya tha

Piya : sir' wo meri galti nhi thi'. Galti yahaan se huyi'. Meri identity wahaan reveal team k ek member ne ki

RAW chief : janta hu.. galti yahaan se huyi' aur tumne uss galti ko badhaya wahaan se naa nikal kr

Piya : agar main nikal jati to aaj mumbai me dhamake ho rhe hote'. Aur meri ek ki jaan se zyada zaruri iss desh k logo ki jaan hai'..

RAW chief : you know what'. I really hates you.. jab se tumne RAW join ki hai.. tab se sabse khatarnak missions pr tum hi jati ho' kisi aur ko aage badhne ka mauka hi nhi deti'.. meri puri team tumhare chakker me bekar ho rhi hai'. Pr ab aisa nhi hoga'..(in lovable tone)

Piya : matlab????

RAW chief : matlab ye k tumhe permotion mil rhi hai' ab tum RAW k office me baith kr files padho

Piya : mujhe aisi permotion chahiye hi nhi'. main theek hu'..aur mera alga mission kya hoga'.

Commissioner : tumhara alga mission ya to ETF join krna hoga'ya fir RAW me permotion paa kar files padhna

Rathore : Agar tum ETF join krni ho to tumhe apni real identity chod kr riya ki identity pr jeena hoga'.

Piya (Shocked) : what?????? Pr kyun???????

RAW chief : dekho piya jahaan tumne itne fyde uthaye twins hone k syad iss baar tumhare nuksan ki bari hai

Commissioner : agar tum ETF join krogi.. to hume logo ko ye btana hoga k tum riya ho..ye tumhari aur desh ki security k liye hai'aur uss biochemical case me jo mari wo piya thi' kyunki RAW ki jaankari sirf piya k paas thi aur agar wo marr gyi hai to riya safe hai'

RAW chief : tumhe ye option isliye dia jaa rha hai k I know tumhe ye office kam aur jail zyada lagti hai' aur main nhi chahta k koi mann maar kr kaam kare

Piya : Per sir main agar ye permotion naa lu to'.

RAW chief : tumhare pass bas yahi do options hai'..aur haan agar tum ETF join krni ho to RAW ki list se tumhara naam hamesha k liye hatt jayega'uske baad tum chah kr bhi RAW k kisi agent se contact nhi kar paogi'.aur RAW me tumhe koi pehchanega bhi nhi' tumhe pta hi hai' RAW officers k mrne pr hum unki files jala dete hai taki unke bare me koi kuch pta naa kar paaye'. Aur agar tum ETF join krti ho to iska matlab hoga piya marr gyi hai'aur hum tumhari file bhi jala denge'.

Piya : Mujhe sochne ka whqt chahiye

RAW chief : take your time' jab chaho bta dena'(meeting khatam hoti hai.. rathore piya ko ghar chodta hai aur ETF aata hai')

PRECAP :(Piya bahut shocked me hai k ye kaisi situation hai uske sath'.usko samjh nhi aa rha wo kya kare'.ek taraf RAW me permotion hai pr wo kaam use psnd nhi aur dusri taraf ETF team me jane pr use khud ki identity hamesha k liye chodni hogi'koi use uske real name se kabhi nhi bulayega'.)


PART 15 LINK

Edited by Annudsweetgirl - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
Nice part... Piya s really in a tough situation... i know she vl choose ETF bt wnt dat b sumthn wrong... Riya's sacrifice vl b n someone else's name no dats wrong... waiting for nxt part

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