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Posted: 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

A very well written introduction, and a nice story line.

I would love to know what happens next in their life :)

Hope you'll update regularly!

Great work.

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InkyCupid

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey, thank you sooo much for your reviewing I am also a fan of your fanfic 'Making khushi mine' though unfortunately I haven't got around to updating it. I will make sure to give a feedback to you next update:)

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OldieDezard

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Posted: 12 years ago

Awesome start!!! I love the story line and their characters!! I love the possessive Arnav!!! I hope Khushi says the three words and mean them too!!! Is there Shyam or other IPKKND characters?? Your writing style is very good too!! Can't wait for more!!! Please continue soon and PM me if you can!!

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InkyCupid

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Posted: 12 years ago

There would be more characters as the story progresses, right now they're in their teenage years, their is more to come. Also, your comment really means a lot to me as a new member of this forum and I hope that you would continue t read and review my fan fiction😃

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OldieDezard

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aaaziiz
There would be more characters as the story progresses, right now they're in their teenage years, their is more to come. Also, your comment really means a lot to me as a new member of this forum and I hope that you would continue t read and review my fan fiction😃

LOL Cant wait!!! When I wrote my first OS, i would refresh every 5 mins!!! 😆 I will surely continue reading it!!! 😃

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missinvisible

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Posted: 12 years ago

Wow! That was awesome! Loved the way you transitioned throughout their childhood to their adolescence. Very well written, loving the style and eagerly awaiting the next update!

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InkyCupid

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Posted: 12 years ago

your comment means a lot to me!!:)

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Thanushiya

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Posted: 12 years ago

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OMG Amazing concept ! Really loved the start ! Feelin really sad for Arnav, Khushi dunt love him but he loves her like anythin ! Awesome update ! Plz accept my buddy request and plzzz PM me when u continue ! PLZZZ