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InkyCupid

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: casker
Why Kushi can't love Arnav as much he do? . Love this possessive Arnav in love.

She will, but it's much too soon for her, just wait and watch😉

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InkyCupid

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: annab
Loved the update...arnav's possessiveness twrds khushi is getting worse day by day...I really hp this story doesn't hv a tragic end...continue soon pls...

This story WILL have some tragedy in it, but rest assured it will have a very happy ending, they'll end up together and much happier than they were ever in their lives, don't you worry:)

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InkyCupid

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: CrazyChasmish
Awww I hope Arnav and Khushi never apart like Garima expects!!! I love reading about a possessive Arnav!!! I wonder when Khushi is going to really start loving him back!!! I can't wait!! Please continue soon and thanks for the PM!!!

Right now this story is set in their teenage years, her love would come when they grow up and become adults, and after many mistakes made;)

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InkyCupid

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: farha5556
hope kushi start tolove arnav,i feel bad for arnav,continue soon.loved the update.

She will love him, after all it IS a love story and it will be incomplete with a one sided love. I plan on continuing it , please do comment and I hope you recommend this fanfic to others if you like it. You have no idea how much a reader;s comment means to a writer. Your support means a lot to me:)

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InkyCupid

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: annab
Beautiful update...wts cooking in arnav's mind? Hmmm...

My job is to keep you guessing;)

Hope you recommend this Fanfic to other's your support as well as more comments would give me the much wanted incentive to write this Fanfic:)

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InkyCupid

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: Anony_mous

Another awesome update :)

Some unsolicited advice: Don't make it too traumatic or too sad. You've a very good story here, make it believable from Khushi's POV as well. Why would any girl who knows that they are physically compatible and the guy will leave anything just to humor her, not fall in love with him?

Just a reader's POV. Else I love your story :)

PS: I tried to PM you my crappy advice, but it said that your inbox has reached its limit :(

OMG, THANK YOU. FINALLY.

I've been waiting for any kind of suggestion or criticism because this Fanfic is for people in this forum to read, and they should tell ME what they want and like. The thing is , that this story is based on their adult life ( even though it may not seem like it , right now) and for this story to progress I have to write about a tragedy. Though be assured that their adult life would not contain the angst that would bring about change in the lives of Arnav and Khushi... As for more of Khushi's point of view...? Wait for the next few chapters, there would surely be a lot of the story from her perspective. Khushi loves him.. but she's not in love with him. Theres a reason for it. Also, Khushi is meant to have a flaw, that doesn't allow her to realize exactly how much Arnav loves her, though she will see things more clearly with a more mature outlook of life

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casker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Nice update.

Don't like this Kushi. If she can't love him why she is having sex with him😡.

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Reader_Hobby

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Hey!

How are you ...?

Read all the updates so far and I must say, they are all very well-written and extremely captivating.

I look forward to reading more of this soon 😃😃😃

Arnav is oh so possessive of Khushi. He's also protective of her. No one would dare to mess with her because they'd face the wrath of Arnav. Yes she seems to be his weakness and that maybe his downfall ... though I truely hope that isn't the case. He too deserves to be loved by her and I hope with time, she will be able to.