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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Ashish.Holic

haww...tu na disco. Karne ke bare me soch bhi mat aur mekko bhi janana hai manyata ke bare me isrf jaru ko kyun muje bhi bata na padega

bta dun gi yar...tje to pehly bht kuch btaya tha.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -Zina-

chal ma tje bta dun gi

ok chal jaldi batana
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Jarin04

ok chal jaldi batana


i am updating, you will get the answer😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
RECAP=

uday= ab kia yahin rehna hai chalnay ka irada hai ya phir kuch or plans hain apke!😉
piya= tu kitna besharam hai
uday= ab is main kia besharami hai?
piya= kuch nahi dimagh na kha mera!😡
uday= sorry for that love but wo to tumhare pas hai hi nahi!
piya= kia matlab?😕
uday = matlab k tumhare pas dimagh hai hi nahi! hoga to hum khaen gay na! 😛
piya= haawww...ruk main tuje abi btati hu!
uday= catch me if u can!
piya was running after uday!! continuously swearing at him!
uday after running a lot he wonderd ehy wasn't he able to hear piya!
when he turned back! there was no one! she was no where to be seen! he started to sweat!
uday= calling out her name piya' piya'! but no reply!
oh God where did she go😭


BOWW!! Shouted piya hanging on the tree in a way her legs were tied to the branch, and her head was falling down and hair in the air, uday almost fall down seeing her like that in fright! He was breathing heavily and for a second could not understand what was happening with him'while piya was laughing her head out she climbed off the tree, came and stood near uday who was still in shock, she passed her hand to him, uthoo, ab kia sara din giray rehnay ka irada hai, uth! Uday was super pissed of with her crazy jokes, now he was angry, he was boiling like water, and no way now piya was getting away form being crushed by his anger'! He did not take her help instead got up himself, cleaned his clothes and was staring angrily at piya'! Piya was well aware about her blunder she knew he was angry now and she has to shut her mouth, what she can never do!

Piya= giving him cheesy smiles, hehehe!!

Uday= hahaha! Wasn't it funny, said grinding his teeth!

Piya= making a puppy face, and scratching her head, oh I forgot something on the tree, I'll be rite back, she tried to escape from their very cleverly but was caught by uday!

Uday= where do you think you are going, he caught her firmly with her soulders and was shouting daggers at her with his eyes'

Piya= amm'aa,, cut off by uday.

Uday= Ssshhh"'! Not a word he said placing his index finger on her lips!

What do you think you were doing, don't you have minimum sense'huh' what are we talking about how will we expect even minimum from a person who doesn't even has a brain!

Piya= I was just having fun'!

Uday= don't act smart with me, already I am here in this freakin jungle that to because of you, and you are just having fun!

He raised his hand to slap her and she tried to save herself by hiding her face in her palms'!

Uday= Dar gai?

Piya removed her hands from her face and looked at him, to her shock she found him smiling and a second later laughing at her!

Her face flushed, and she turned red in anger, now she was to explode at him with all her might!

KUTTAYY!! She shouted with an urge to kill uday! She walked near him and started to hit him, punch him on his back while he was laughing even more harder'!

Halkat Vede, yede, tarak ke pepe'samjta kia hai tu khudko! Bara aya main ye main wo'har wqt bakwas! Kaminay tera to aj main chicken sandwich bna kr hi rahu gi! Piya was beating him continuously while he was still laughing, they lost balance and fall down on each other laughing, they were enjoying the time together'piya was on top of uday, they were looking at each other with great intensity, chal Halkat ab bohat ho gyya'we need to hurry before the sun sets!


Finally they reached the city, they were hell tired and piya was insisting to have rest but uday did not agree he booked their tickets the very hour and they left for cape town to join karan and tina!

They were received by karan and tina at the airport, they stayed there for 2 more days, had a good tiring and very enjoyable holiday together. They came back to India and everyone got busy in the marriage preparation it was in 3 days time.

Piya was staying at tina's house her parents were like parents to her as well'!

But why wasn't she happy from inside'!

Unknown to piya someone 's gaze was on her observing her every move.


Are u sure yash, is she piya said giriraj pointing towards the picture. Yes Sir! no never how is that possible, I know sir this picture is of YUVRANI not this girl but i have have seen her from my own eyes she is exactly the same! giriraj threw himself on the sofa holding his head how can this be possible. she is DEAD!

Sir may be she is the duplicate of that girl, or her ghost! What !! shouted giri on top of his lungs, are you out of your hell mind, this is not possible I don't know what to do, and you just shut your mouth and don't talk to anyone about this or else your dead!! Yes sir! He bowed and left!

I need to see rajmata, said giriraj and he at once drove off to raj mahal to see Merlani devi!

That's what my point is rajmata, that how can be some one have the exact same features. Does that means my ji ji is alive, said a overjoyed jay who had over geard the conversation'no jay beta, we cannot be this sure, we need proof, may be she resembles manyata but is not her! Where is she uncle , I want to see her, please I promise I wont say anything to her, please, please she begged with teary eyes.

Giriraj agreed with her but on the condition of her staying quiet, she agreed and they went to see her, unnati who was in London just arrived at home, she saw jay and giriraj coming in'she was happy to see jay they met very nicely giriraj told unnati that piya was the carbon copy of manyata, she had an urge to meet her, but then she was also warned by giriraj not to say a word to her! They agreed and left to tina's house to see her.They went with shagun in case the others don't find anything fishy about them.


Ds, who was very restless to hear about piya's resemblance to manyata decided to go into her grand daughters room, no one went in that room after manyata's death it was very often cleaned by the maids, but in the supervision of Ds herself, she never allowed anyone to touch anything of manyata, because manyata was very caring about her stuff, she walked in the room, switched on the lights and walked in, a tear or two escaped from her eyes, she did not stop them from escaping because since long she was holding back, now she wanted to cry her heart out! My brave child why did you leave me alone, why manyata why, she said while holding her photo and crying! She saw every thing in that room she kissed each and every thing of her grand child, she opened her cupboard and kissed her clothes which still had manyata's fragrance in them, something fall under her feet, it was a paper she picked it up, it was a letter'!

They walked in with loads of things for the to be bride, all three were eager to see piya. Piya was in her room lost in her thoughts, she was brought back by the knock on the door. The maid informed her that her in-laws were down to see her.

What! She gluped, she had never met them before, more than that something else was irritating her. She marched down, giriraj, jay and unnati looked at her she was exactly manyata. Jay hurriedly got up and hugged manyata with all her might. Oh' I was so eager to meet you she tried to hold back her tears, but failed, piya looked at her, and asked that why was she crying, she was out of words and piya could see the pain in her eyes, she felt very sorry for her. Jay some how managed to speak, 'its because you look like my sister a lot, Ohh' replaid piya'

But she is no more, she said, her voice shaking'I am really sorry, said piya in a very meek voice.

Unnati met piya nd she felt an unknown bond with her. They frequently became friends and talked for hours'after they left piya felt very sad, very very sad'!

She sat all night in the balcony cursing her fate'! It was late night she was sitting alone'!

Hello Princess! Uday jumped in the balcony, piya was shocked to hear Princess from his mouth. Why are you calling me princess came her cold reply, why cannot I call you princess? She questioned and sat next to her. She made herself comfortable in his arms and he took her more close to him, so you did not answer my question, I am not your princess I can never be, at least don't take this from her, only manyata is your princess, she said in a serious tone'! Uday thought it's better not to talk about it more'he kissed her forehead, her eyes, nose ,cheeks and her lips to which she equally responded. He then leaned forward to her neck, leaving wet kisses there, he wanted to make love to her'!

Can I make Love to you tonight? He asked her.


Hello, chapter finished! agla parhna hai to like maro meray yaro! sorry if i bored you! this update is specially for Jarin and sweta. who almost ate my head for it😆
love
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Zina


Edited by -Zina- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsssmmm yar nxt part would be funnn 😳😆😆😆😆☺️
Edited by huma12. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: huma12.


jaldiii update day zainiii



janiya kar dia hai😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update
Piya hanging upside down from the tree must
definitely have scared Uday
Uday did get his little revenge😉
I guess the reality of Manyata/Piya vud b revealed soon
Oh My God ... Kaha pe end Kiya
Next update is definitely going to be very good no matter what Piya's reply Is.
wonder if she l tell UV nothing happened between thm that night...
do cont soon
thanks 4 de PM
Edited by anushruthi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update dear...
arey yaar kab raaz khologe...piya manya ki look a like hai...khud manya hi hai...k manya ka ghost hai...
u just left me confused
plzzz ye raaz kholo...aur woh letter me kya hai
i was thinking abt it from d start
continue soon dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update Zainab (as usual😉). Piya hanging up-side-down from the tree was pretty scary , no wonder ; poor Uday got spooked😆. Ds remembering her grand-daughter was very emotional ... which means even she is not aware of who exactly PIYA is😕. Now , I wonder what's in that letter 🤔 ... please disclose that soon😃. Jai/Unnati/Piya interraction was nice . I thought Piya would be more responsive to the girls ... but she was a bit cold towards them. Finally ... the end scene was so beautiful. Piya stopped Uday from calling her "PRINCESS" because that name belongs to Manyata😳. That scene was the highlight for me! Of-course ... HOW COULD U END IT THERE😡??? Whenever such a scene comes - U BID US GOOD-BYE ... that's very cruel Dear😔! Loved the chapter Zina, very well written 👍🏼, continue soon & ... thanx 4 the PM😊.
Edited by ...navina... - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
zina dat was awsum!!
luvd it wen piya frightened uday by hanging down d tree!!
luvd it a lot...nd plz do continue soon!!

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