AnSh FF: Makar Sankranti

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Note: Based on the assumption that Shiv and Anandi celebrate Makar Sankranti in Udaipur.

Part 1: Kati Patang!

Shiv: Anandi, dheel dijiye.. Nahi, nahi.. Arre thoda right.. Ab left.. Arrere!

Anandi's kite has been cut down again. 'The skies of Udaipur are ruthless!', thinks the new bride. 'Shiv must think I am an idiot!'. On the contrary, Shiv is enjoying himself and thinks that Anandi is making good progress for an amateur.

Anandi: Mujhse nahi hoga! Aap udaiye patang, main phirki pakadti hu..
Mahi: Bhaiya, aap bhabhi ko pakad lijiye, phir dekhiye patang kahaan tak jaati hai!
Sanchi: Kya Mahi bhaiya, aap kyu Shiv bhaiya ko sata rahe hai. Bhabhi ka 'talent' dekhkar woh pehle hi pareshaan hai.. Aur aap aur sata rahe hai..
S: Sanchi! Kya-
A: Main thak gayi hu Shiv.. Jaane dijiye na.. (she just wanted to save Sanchi from getting yelled at by Shiv)
Sa: (smirks) Haan bhaiya, jaane dijiye, warna saari patangein kat kar padosiyon ke ghar pahunch jayengi..
M: Sanchi, tu toh aise udd rahi hai jaise khud badi champ ho!
Sa: Anandi bhabhi se toh better hi hu..
S: (sternly) Is that a challenge, Sanchi?
Sa: Sure bhaiya, why not?
S: Anandi, Sanchi ke paas khadi ho jaiye.. Mahi tu Sanchi ki phirki pakad, main Anandi ki pakadta hu..
A: (coming close to Shiv, in a frightened whisper) Please Shiv! Mujhse nahi hoga!

Shiv sighs in exasperation and smiles at Anandi.

S: (looking into her eyes) Anandi, aap bas woh kijiye jo main kehta hu. Yahaan koi nahi hai, bas aap aur main. Na Sanchi aur na Mahi, bas aap, main, yeh khula aasmaan aur humara pyar...i, i mean humari pyari patang!

Anandi blushes and bows her head. She's nodding but doesn't seem too convinced.

S: (lifting her chin) Just relax. Mujhe aap par poora bharosa hai. Aap bas mazaa kijiye.

And thus begins the ultimate nanad-bhabhi showdown. Anandi is not without talent. Paying close attention to Shiv's instructions, she begins to feel quite confident. Sanchi, on the other hand, is flustered to be against her talented brother's protege. After a lot of dramatics, Sanchi's kite falls to the ground, cut down by her triumphant bhabhi!

M: Wow bhabhi, superb! Waise bhaiya kabhi koi challenge haar jayein, aisa aaj tak hua nahi!

Anandi is overjoyed to have finally mastered kite-flying. In her excitement, she forgets to be shy, forgets to be sad that Sanchi lost, neither notices Sanchi leaving in offence nor Mahi following her to calm her down. She had forgotten that she and Shiv were not really alone on some mountaintop, like it had felt when she was flying the kite.

A: Shiv! Maine patang kaat di!
S: (laughing) Congratulations!

Anandi grabs his hands and begins to narrate how she felt when she was flying a kite for the first time and the rush she felt when she actually cut another kite! Sanchi's kite.. Oops! Sanchi's kite! Anandi suddenly realizes that Shiv and she are alone, Sanchi has left! Her feelings must be hurt! Shiv sees the change in her face and understands what she's thinking. He holds her hands properly in his and strokes them.

S: Its ok, it was just a game. Bura maanane ki koi baat nahi.

Anandi smiles weakly and leaves Shiv's hand. He is sad to see that her excitement is lost. As she is going downstairs to make amends to her sister-in-law...

S: Anandi ka mood toh main theek kar ke rahunga! By hook or crook! Crook.. Cook.. Cooking! Idea! Papa, Daddu! Suniye!

Part 2: Surprise Suprise!

Anandi is thinking about Sanchi. How could she be so insensitive? But what should she do now? How can she apologize for winning a game! Even she does, Sanchi will think she's being fake. What to do... Idea! She runs to her room and comes back with a box and knocks at Sanchi's door.

Sanchi: Come in! (Anandi enters) Oh aap.. Kya kaam tha?
Anandi: Sanchi, mujhe tumhari thodi madad chahiye..
S: (curious) Kaisi madad?

Opens the box and shakes out its contents-

A: Iske saath ki sandals hai tumhare paas?

Anandi is holding out the top and jeans that Sanchi had gifted her on her muh-dikhai. Sanchi's eyes widen at this.

S: Yeh? Aap yeh pehenengi? Kya.. Aap.. I mean.. What?

Before the confused girl can say anything else, Anandi goes into the bathroom, changes quickly and tries to forget her inhibitions, since confidence was imperative to her plan. She comes out clad in western wear, her long hair tied back in a ponytail, wearing only sindoor to remind of her previous attire. Sanchi is suprised to see Anandi looking so pretty!

S: Aap toh achchi lag rahi hai! Maine socha tha ki aap bahut atpati lagengi!

Sanchi bites her tongue. Her real intention in giving Anandi the gifts is now out. Anandi too had guessed as much. She smiles.

A: Toh phir tumne mujhe yeh tohfa kyu diya?

Sanchi doesn't answer but goes to sit on her bed. Anandi follows.

A: Dekho Sanchi, main jaanti hu ki tumhein mujhse bilkul alag bhabhi chahiye thi. Aur sach kahu, toh main waise bann bhi sakti hu.. Par phir mera kya astitva reh jayega? Isn't self-respect the sign of a modern girl? Aur tumhare bhaiya toh mujhse aise hi pyaar karte hain.. Kya tumhe unke pyaar par vishwas nahi?
S: Aisa bhi kya pyaar jo apni behen se bhi important ho jaaye?! (sniffs back a tear)

Aah, so this is what bothers Sanchi. She doesn't like Anandi because, all her life, she had been the most important girl in Shiv's life. She had never thought that he would ever fall in love, so deeply, that she would have to compete for his favour. Anandi puts her hand on Sanchi's shoulder and Sanchi begins to tearfully narrate her feelings. Anandi consoles her.

A: Tum aaj bhi apne bhaiya ki doll ho Sanchi. Unhone apne dil mein tumhari jagah mujhe nahi di hai, balki apna dil aur bada karke hum dono ko bahut pyaar diya hai! Unke mann mein tumhare liye bahut bahut pyaar aur tumhari bahut kadar bhi hai!

Anandi wipes away Sanchi's tears, who is looking at her in a new light, without jealousy and bias.

S: (wiping her eyes) Waise aap sach mein bahut pretty lag rahi hai!
A: Thank you! Main koshish karungi ki aise kapdo mein adjust ho pau.
S: Nahi bhabhi. Aapko aisa karne ki koi zarurat nahi..
A: Kyu nahi? Main bhi toh apni sundar nanad ko thoda competition du! (both laugh) Woh main Coll- Shiv ko surprise dena chahti hu..
S: Sach? Par kab? Honeymoon pe?
A: (eyes wide) Honeymoon!
S: Haan! Bhaiya uss din Mom ko keh rahe the ki woh aapko kahi le jaanewale hai.. Oops! Lagta hai surprise tha..

Anandi is staunch in her belief that Shiv won't touch her. He obviously wants to spend time with her. The idea of a getaway with him sounds appealing to her too.

A: Koi baat nahi.. Kaha ja rahe hai, yeh toh ab bhi surprise hai.. Chalo, main change kar leti hu..
S: (hugging Anandi) Ok Bhabhi!

Just then, Shiv bursts in!

Shiv: Sanchi, chal, kha-

He is shocked to see Sanchi hugging Anandi and even more shocked to see Anandi in jeans! He's lost his tongue! Anandi and Sanchi begin to laugh looking at him.

S: Bhaiya ko dekh kar aisa lagta hai jaise unhone koi bhoot dekh liya ho!
A: Collector Saab, kya main itni buri lag rahi hu? (both girls giggle)
Sh: Nahi.. Woh.. Main.. Khana lag gaya hai! Jaldi aa jaiye!

He almost runs out but stops at the last step.

Sh: Aap bahut achchi lag rahi hai, Anandi!

As he shuts the door on his blushing wife and giggling sister, Shiv thinks-

Sh: Surprise karne nikla tha aur khud hi surprise ho gaya! Na jaane aur kya kya kamaal dikhayengi Mrs Anandi Shivraj Shekhar!

Part 3: Cooking Shooking!

All the Shekhars are gathered around the dining table and surprised to see Anandi and Sanchi walk in together, smiling! Nobody wants to jinx it, so no one talks about it.

Anandi: Nathu bhaiya, yeh sab aapne banaya?!

The table is an array of delicious treats; surprisingly, all of Anandi's favourites.

Nathu: Nah re bhabhisa, hya sab toh mhara Shiv bhaisa na kamaal se!
Ira: Haan Anandi! Aaj saara khana tumhare Daddu, Papa, Shiv aur Mahi ne banaya hai!
Meenu: Hum sab ko chhutti dekar inn logon ne kitchen duty sambhaal li!
A: Par kyu?
Alok: Kyu nahi? Humari bahu ki pehle Sankrant hai bhai!
Daddu: Haan! Yeh din phir kaha aayega!
Mahi: Bhabhi, itna bhi mat dariye! Humne achcha khana banaya hai!
Shiv: Baithiye na!

Anandi is overcome with emotion looking at the amount of love showered on her by her family. Her family. How true the words feel! As much as they love her, it is only when she opens her heart that she can feel like one of them! And so she sits down, taking in their love, enjoying their chatter and genuinely savouring the food! The men were really good cooks and she complimented them wholeheartedly. After dinner, everyone watches a movie and are pleasantly surprised to see Anandi and Sanchi bond over it. Later that night, in their bedroom. Shiv and Anandi are relaxing and soaking in the happiness of the wonderful day celebrated with their family.

S: Toh aapne finally Sanchi ko bhi mana liya! I hope aapko aisa kuch nahi karna pada jo aap nahi karna chahti thi..
A: (laughs) Woh kapde toh maine khud ki marzi se pehene the, Sanchi ki salah lene ke liye..
S: Kaisi salah?
A: Woh main aapko surprise dena chahti thi..
S: Par kyu?
A: Bas kuch naya karne ka mann hua..
S: Aapke saath har din naya-sa hai..
A: (blushing) Shiv?
S: Hmm?
A: Hum honeymoon par kaha ja rahe hai?

She just wanted to see his expression when she would say something so unlike her. And boy, was he shocked! She laughed and told him how Sanchi had told her by mistake.

S: Well, location toh suprise hi rahegi! Par hum jald hi jayenge..
A: (smiling) Achcha.. Shiv, yeh Sankrant main kabhi nahi bhoolungi!
S: (laughs) Main bhi! The day our Super Sarpanch won her Naughty Nanad!
A: Dhatt! (Hits Shiv on the arm) Kuch bhi!
S: (laughing) Ouch! Goodnight Anandi..
A: (smiling) Goodnight..

And thus ends the first of many such joyful festivals to come!

Thanks for reading, hope you liked it, comments welcome!
Edited by michelle281194 - 12 years ago

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VerboseG thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very nice Michelle... hope this comes true!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very nice, thoroughly enjoyed it!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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simple sweet and heart warming...just lovely,,,,,yaar hamare cv's bhi to kabhi kabhi aisa epi dikha sakte hai na😔...per na jane kya prob hai...kash aisa kuch ho bv me😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Michelle this was so very beautifulll...wish something such happens in the true show between anandi, shiv, and saanchi...
keeep writing more...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was really Very..very... Nice... Ansh sweet, cute scene, anandi nd sanchi convo, Shiv's cooking, nd last ansh sweet talk... All r so beautiful nd lovely... Superb ff... I enjoyed a lot...
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i hope something like this happens in the serial... really nice!!!
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Superb...i want 2 see these scenes in bv..really vry nice.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very Very Sweet...Michelle...
I really hope some thing like this happens on the show too...
Can't u/stand what's stopping CV's ..in showing such simple yet sweet moments between AnSh simultaneously with JagguBhai's daastaan...😕
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Michelle - very sweet .😊. Hope we get to see something like this on screen.. nothing prevents CVs from portraying such tracks

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