The Mirage and Oasis...New FF: Chapter 13 updated

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meera06

@meera06

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#581

Oh my God ...

That was uncalled for...I hope nothing happens to Khushi...

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ArSh23

@ArSh23

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#582

Yay I'm glad you decided to continue this! Awesome update! Arnav is such a jerk lol. Why can't he ever admit his feelings, instead of treating Khushi so badly. He better go back to get her and Khushi better give him a hard time. Can't wait to read the next part!

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Anupama

@Anupama.

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#583

I had read a few chapters long back but then i left it coz i thought ermm..i..umm..i thought that it s not updated regularly :D
anywho..i read it all now and i must say its very entertaining,magic like ipk,especially in chapter 11..when he says 'out'..so asr..hmpf!

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Soniya

@TUKI.MICKY

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

#584

Hi Rima, First of all let me introduce myself, I'm Soniya and I'm new in the forum... I had been a silent member for quite sometime but read some of your posts and I really admire them...😊 And now coming to the FFs, I love reading them and recently started reading this one of yours, and now can you plz bear with me coz I'm gonna make a long post... 😳

So, first of all I love this school girl Khushi and her instant crush on her boss... The interview part and the next day cafe meeting was equally cute and funny, loved their interactions and expression and the way Arnav liked teasing her was definitely cute...😆Love the caring Arnav right from the lift scene when he console a nervous Khushi as if she is a child, drops her home and even faces her father's queries, so unlike ASR... He definitely adores her but as usual dismisses it... But then every relation needs its own sweet time to bloom... The flight scene was so funny and Khushi is such a chatter box...😆I would like to travel to Italy, France and London' she said

'Please do,' 🤣

That was hilarious... 😆

And now Arnav and Khushi together in a cottage and Arnav in his ASR mode; already thrown her out of the car...😭 Typical ASR...

Oh yes, the skating part and Khushi pleading like a child; that was too cute... 😊

Ok, ri8 now I won't irritate you anymore... Waiting eagerly to know what happens next...

And Thank You so much for tolerating me... 😳

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shree10

@shree10

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#585

OMG Rima, You updated this??
Liked the update very much. Arnav is so affected by her and now trying to push her away.
Loved Khushi's dialog - "Not everybody is out there to trap you and marry you!"
He lefet her like that and you left us a cliffhanger. Not fair!
Need next update fast please...

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reshmimohan

@reshmimohan

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#586

Awesome update.

She is back on the dark street. The poor thing!

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Cetronia

@Cetronia

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#587

Rima, loved reading the update!!! Now what will he come back?..

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storytellerm

@storytellerm

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#588

😆
typical arnav
hope khushi remains safe

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ayushma

@aycma98

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#589

uh-oh... just when I thought things would get better.. it got worse! Arnav really needs to realize that he's attracted to Khushi, without a fault of hers... because it seems like he is punishing Khushi for making him attracted towards him... I mean, wait, what????

Oh Khushi, Khushi.. she's already terrified of her parents, especially her dad... with her living conditions in jeopardy... to make it worse she has Arnav, who's out to get her. And he kicked her out of the car, in the middle of nowhere... :/

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renee

@renee27

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#590

Whaat The!!!!!!!!! why did u stop????// its such a cliff hanger... ASR is going to be sooo sorry if she goes missing... what a moron...

good to see you update after a long time 😊

pls continue soon