The Mirage and Oasis...New FF: Chapter 13 updated

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kiddy-kavya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#571

What the!

That didn't just happen, not after such a beautiful moment.

What is his problem? Argh! typical ASR.

Always comes up with counter thoughts for the way his mind functions when around Khushi.

It would've been so much better if he could just think normally and not go for the if's.

You better come back and get her Mr.Raizada or else she will cry.😉

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princess_avani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#572

Great update!!!
Poor asr is so smitten and yet he's trying to avoid her!!! Poor khushi can't understands his bipolar behaviour!!!!
Please do pm me your updates!!!
Really look forward to them!!!!

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rima

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Posted: 12 years ago

#573

Originally posted by: Matheera
Awwesome update... Arnav is still ruthless but i Find him a bit right that he does not want to give Khushi any slightest idea... Khushi's skating part was cuuttte...n her attempt to make things normal..aalll went invane...poor girl... But at d end of the update I was like WHAT THE... how one cn b sooo rude...he wil surely regret it...Plzzz update soon..U have left us on Cliffhanger...*sniffs*...I m lucky one to have my name in PM list so i m expecting a pm soon..*yayy*..U r a nice writer...

thank you so much

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rima

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Posted: 12 years ago

#574

Originally posted by: kiddy-kavya
What the!
That didn't just happen, not after such a beautiful moment.
What is his problem? Argh! typical ASR.
Always comes up with counter thoughts for the way his mind functions when around Khushi.
It would've been so much better if he could just think normally and not go for the if's.
You better come back and get her Mr.Raizada or else she will cry.😉

I will try not to make you cry😊

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choochootrain

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Posted: 12 years ago

#575

She was juz telling e truth n got kicked out????!!!!!...tis asr is no gentleman...tinks all women r e same...tink too highly of himself...someone shd really bring him down to earth...

Hope kushi is ok n can find her way back safely...

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reshkn

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Posted: 12 years ago

#576

wonderful update..!!!😊😊

arnav is battling between his mind and heart...and finally opts to go along with his mind...ending up doing the wrong thing...he keeps hurting her just bcoz he doesnt hav a grip on his feelings...

he doesnt apologise,doesnt greet her..seriously..!!!!this man is rude..!!!😡

i loved the khushi part...she lets go of her anger once she finds other worthy stuff..!!!she is a sweetheart..!!!her skating part wer she asks for permission was "so cute"...!!!😊

and the final part..*a cliffhanger* and that too at such a moment..!!!!maybe he got hurt bcos she mentioned his mother...but that doesnt giv him an excuse to leave her at an unknown place and wen she was her responsibility...!!!oh my..poor thing...!!alone in the dark...hope nothing happens to her...

its high time he learns his lesson..

maybe kushi cud call her dad and tell him so that we have some *dishoom dishoom* ...u know..