Aaj Ki Kahani 'Arjun' Ki Jubani! Last part updt on pg 2 - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
soumya its damn interesting...
the way u write is superb..
pls do update soon.. loved it a lot...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Its very interesting and touching.
Loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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heyy soumya..loving this story so far..
have read many arjun and purvi love stories..but this one is very hatt-ke and damn interesting..
do update soon..loved this part..!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Soumya

Both parts are damn interesting😛. Its something different for a change. Please do continue but preferably to have more English words as not all in Hindi I could understand and had to keep checking them, thks😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part - 3

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Accident ke news sunte hi i felt sevior pain on my head nd i cn't get any ideas wht 2 do.
Main jaldi se next flight pakad kar mauntabu chalagaya. I hv no tym 2 waste.
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Wahan ja kar dekha toh Mom got factor in her one hand and one leg. Dad 2 get de same. Both r unconssious.
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Mom toh phir v thik thi bt dad ki halat bleeding ki wajah se aur v serious ho gayi thi. So doctor advice me to take him Delhi hospital nw.
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I don't want 2 leave mom in dat condition. Bt i hv no option.
I moved 2 delhi along wid dad in next moment.
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Mom ko chachi ke bharose chod to aya tha par tasali nahi mil rahi thi. Har ghante call kar ke mom ki condition ke baremain puchta rehta tha.
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Dad ki wahan par 10 din tak treatment chala. I felt all alone. I wish if Purvi wid me... Bt i knw dat she z nt...
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Man karta tha ki use uski ghar jakar milun. Uske godh main sar rakhke ji bhar ke roun aur woh apni unglion ko mere balon main ghumae aur mujhe dilasha de ki sab kuch thik ho jayega. Par esa kuch nahi hua. Main nahi gaya.
Ek taraf woh the jinhone mujhe Zindegi di aur ek taraf woh thi jo khud meri zindegi hai. Aur mene zindegi denewale ko chuna.
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10 din main usne ek bar v mujhe call nahi ki. Uska cell switch off araha tha. Uske office phone kia toh pata chala woh ek long vacation par hai.
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I broke 4m inside. Sayad use mujhse v be behtar koi milgaya hai. Woh kush hai toh main v khush hun. Ye soch ke saath i wiped my tear nd return wid Dad to Mauntabu.
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Taxi main ate waqt raste main Purvi ka ghar aya aur maine humare bitaye hue sare lamhon ko yaad karte hue apni gile sikwe ki chota sa hissa wahin road par chod aya.
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Ghar pahunchte hi maine Dad ko car se utara aur wheel chair par bithaya aur bell ka button dabaya.
Ting Tong Ting Tong
Door khula aur door Purvi ne khola tha.
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Mere taraf na dekhte hue usne wheel chair ka handel mere haath se liya aur andar chali gayi. Main apne apko sambhalte hue uske piche piche andar gaya.
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Andar jakar dekha Mom apne factor wale per ko table par rakhkar bethi hain aur Purvi ki Aai apni hathon se santre chil chil kar unhe khilarahe hain.
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I cnt bear anymore. I just ran and hug my mom & broke down in her arms. She spare me wipe my tears and said, m ohk. Main thik hun.
Aur Arjun maine suna saadi ke baad tum aur Purvi naukari chodkar chai ki stall kholnewale ho. Kya humne isiliye tum dono ko engineering padhaya tha.
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Pura ghar hasi ki awajon se bhar gaya. Purvi sab ko chai de rahi thi. Usne mujhe ek cup offer ki maine uski hathon se cup liya aur uski taraf payar se dekhte hue chuski li. Chai garam thi to mera muhn jalgaya aur ye dekhkar Purvi hass padi. Aur maine v sar jhuka kar ek smile di.
Bas itni si thi meri yeh kahani.
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I just thought 2 gv a fly to my thinking. So i did.
It is gd or bad, hw ew lyk it or hate it, plz let me knw through ewr feedbacks. M on wait. 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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heyya soumya..
LOVED this part..
sweet and simple love story..
it was awesome...really liked it..
he thought she found someone else and was ok with it coz she was happy...thats what is called love..
and purvi the one who left most important opportunity of life just as to take care of her MIL..thats wht is called true love,coz she know how much arjun loves his parents..!!

ahh thanks for PM..😊



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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ashvikluverrr

heyya soumya..

LOVED this part..
sweet and simple love story..
it was awesome...really liked it..
he thought she found someone else and was ok with it coz she was happy...thats what is called love..
and purvi the one who left most important opportunity of life just as to take care of her MIL..thats wht is called true love,coz she know how much arjun loves his parents..!!

ahh thanks for PM..😊




m so happy dat ew lyk it. I thought my effort go in vain.
Anyways 10qs a lot 4 reading dis :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
soumya superb end...👏

but m feeling sad that this story ended..!
i loved the whole story...😊
thanx for writing it and for all ur pms...!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Soumy, its superb.😊
Kah k yeh story itne jaldi khatm na hoti.
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
Soumya, its lovely 😛

Its such a unique story which revolves about love which is simplified. It does not only show the love between two lovers but also love for their parents and in laws.

Although it has ended but I'm sure you'll come up with more😊

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