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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: safia25

awsome!! andy...good job..but plz reveal mr.shark soon...i know its ajay...😉update soon


thanks so much safia
we will know soon the identity of mr shark😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks so much😃
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Precap

Ms: to kill someone requires guts and courage . I have both manyata

Chapter 18: the masked unmasked
Manyata looked at him with disgust

M: yes killing innocent lives must be a passion for you. You are such a creep.

Ms: mind your words manyata😡

M:ya, I should mind my language while you go around and slaughter people

Mr shark advances towards manyata and she takes a step back, this goes on till he pinned her to the wall

Ms: so you were saying?

Manyata was shocked by this behavior, as his body touched hers she felt unfocused. He still had that effect on her.her mind was empty- no coldblooded killer in front of her, no worry about her kidnapping and no worries of the world. All that mattered was him and he was in front of her. She craved for more- his touch and caressing just as before, whether that incident at his office or during the dance

Ms: so, are you admiring me, and he smirked😉

Manyata was rudely brought back to the real world and pushed mr shark away

M: don't you touch me with your filthy hands

Ms: ya, and did I notice that you were busy admiring or should I say drinking my manliness

M: go to hell

Ms: with pleasure😆

M:take me back to my home, my family would be waiting for my return,now

Ms: your family , my foot, it would be like taking you back to the killers den

M: what do you know about a family, you creep.

Ms: manyata😡

M: it comes in the family. your whole family is rotten inside out. A sister who was caught for selling her body for many in a hotel and committed suicide for it, what was that bi**hs name ' unnathi singh

Parents who commited suicide because of their daughter's ways- ya, ranjat and mallika singh. Who knows they committed suicide because they felt since their daughter was caught , so they too would be caught for selling their daughter to many

U: Manyata enough. Stop this talk now

Saying this he started to leave the room

Manyata continued her taunts.

M: and then a son ' mr udayveer singh( he stopped and turned back. Manyata waslooking directly into his eyes) you are nothing but a two faced criminal, for the world you are a huge business tycoon, a man kind enough to build schools for illiterates, giving scholarships to poor kids, the famous builder , but your other side, the cold-blooded side, you are a criminal , you need psychiatrist treatment , the brutality with which you killed rohan and many others ehh . you should be skinned alive for all these

[GUYS YOU READ IT RIGHT, MR SHARK IS NONE OTHER THAN UDAY, YOU ALL KNOW HIS REASONS, BUT MANYATA DOES NOT, SO PLEASE BE KIND ENOUGH TO READ THE REST AS YOU WILL GET MANY ANSWERES THAT WAS HAUNTING YOU FOR LONG]

Uday was irritated very much. He was trying his best not to kill this girl who had brought some sunlight to his dark cobwebbed mind and here she was provoking him to return back to his killer mode. Uday did feel the anger blinding his eyes.

What the hell did she know about his family. Mr kapoor was no more but he had managed to spoil his family name in that short time. Nobody would know the truth about his family. There was no one alive to prove their innocence

Yes he killed- not once or twice but many times, he never felt anything about his killings, it was merely professional , but rohan- he deserved what he got.

U: you know why I killed rohan? I killed him for self defense. He paid me kill myself, without knowing my identity so what should I have done , commit suicide ? that was one reason, next he tried to spoil all my romantic moments, third he destroyed my favorite car and trying to kill me in that incident. then There are many more to add to this REASONS TO KILL MR ROHAN LIST

M: no no I don't believe it, you're lying. Rohan was a kind person

U: was he?

M: not always and she shed a tear remembering that fateful day when rohan had attacked her with rage

U:you never know who is right and who is wrong. Anyone can fool you

M:( back to her denial mode) yes, or I would never ever believed you. But your lie made me search about your past

U: which lie?😲

M: your famous love story with sasha.

Uday remembered that day

flashback

U: princess iam sorry about last night, I am just sorry. Please try to understand why I said so.

M: does not reply

U: you are a royal blood and iam a commoner, a nobody, how would the society accept this relation, lest your family

M: is my status a drawback? Just because iam a princess I cannot marry you? If I was just manyata would you have accepted me?

U: its not like that princess,

M: then like what?

U: listen princess, let me explain

I was once in love with a girl who was from a rich family- sasha. We loved each other dearly . we were ready to die for each other. Her family somehow came to know about it and they warned me . but since I was 16 ' young and arrogant I defied them. But I did not know what price I would have to pay for my arrogance. Her father hired a local don and asked him to wipe of my family. I was out that night for a group study at my friends house.

Next morning when I came home I saw my family slaughtered. Killed mercilessly. I was alone since that day

M: what about sasha?

U: she was shipped out of the country and then I didn't have any information about her whereabouts then.

Today she is happily married and living with her husband in Italy. I met her when I went for a business trip. She didnt recognize me or acted as she never knew me

M: what? (clearly shocked)

U: (his sound was broken)yes. I am scared to commit since then .when I become very close to any girl I remember how my family was brutally killed because I loved some one

m: I am so sorry uday, I never knew it.

but why uday ? why? Why did you become close with me ? why?

U(:not looking at manyata and says,) you remind me of her- sasha your smile,your mannerisms and mant other features

M: do you still love her?

U: a barely audible , yes

M:why uday? Why are you scared to commit. My family will never come in the way of my happiness. Today you are not that ordinary uday who could be frightened by goons your powerful in your own way

Uday I never ever felt like this before. I never loved any one before. Uday you make me feel complete .you give me happiness uday. Please uday don't leave me please

U: princess I need time , please atleast give me some time to get rid of my fears

M: I am ready uday. I will wait for you

U: thank you princess

Flash back over

M:yes that excellent acting got me fooled and I believed in you, but later I searched for your details and found that the story was a cock and bull story, totally fake. That moment I knew something was seriously wrong.

U: good detective work darling

M: ok now uday. you and I are business personnel. Let me offer you a deal someone gave you 3 crore to finnish me of . I will give you six crore if you set me free. so what do you say mr udayveer aka mr shark

U: do you think you can buy me. Then your mistaken. I take only those assignments that give me a thrill to complete it and you are one of my most thrilling assignments, and the most beautiful and the most intoxicating beauty I ever laid my eyes on. You are not even aware of that effect you produce on men around you

Saying this uday moves closer to her, but not close enough . he looks her as if he was scanning her face

Manyata felt uncomfortable staying under his constant gaze

M: don't

U: what?

M: don't stare at me like that

U: who would not, even I doubt your personnel bodyguard rajat would find hard to control his hormones when you are around

M: what rubbish is this? He is my most faithful employee

U: rather I would say he 'was' your faithful employee

M: now give me an answer why did you kill rajat(manyata said quite enraged. Her only ticket to freedom was destroyed by uday. He had not only known about rajat , he had also killed him)

U: simple, his biggest mistake was that he decided to follow me, that file had enough evidence to put me behind the bars for ever, so I finished him of, poor fellow was smashed by that 3 pm express train

M: you creep I feel like killing you with my bare hands😡

U: I feel like using your hands for other purposes😉

M: stop all this double meaning talks. I HATE you UDAY. I hate you.😡

U: ok and I will love you one day.

He gave his signature smirk and left the room, before he was futher weakened by his presence

Manyata returned to her bed and cried her heart out😭. She felt so alone in this world. There was no escape for her. She should not have disclosed anything to uday. She was in one way digging her own grave.

She had believed uday inside out. But something made her feel he was hiding many things from her. As she discovered more of his past she began to doubt him. Could he be mr shark? Or could he be a harmless criminal hiding behind the famous business tycoon image?

The day rohan was killed made her doubt uday more. His behavior at the restaurant when she told him about mr shark and how she feared her life, was utterly cold.

The next day when he took her to the beach, she looked at his face alone to find if there were any suspicious expressions creeping in

She remembered that day

Flash back

As they watched the waves crashing into the shore manyata asked

M: uday you know ajay well , don't you think there is something fishy about how he became rich, like you become super rich overnight. How could you make money so soon

(she wanted to give uday a false sence of security, so put forward ajay's name)

U: both of us WERE friends , but he wanted to make money fast by any nook or crook so we had some disagreement on the way he wanted to make easy money and we broke of

"what beautiful lie " manyata thought

M: could you make some easy money by killing someone

Manyata had directed that question directly to uday.

"how could you make money killing others and act normally" was what she meant

She said and looked at uday to see his expressions

U: meaning?

M: could ajit de mr shark? The person who is making my life a hell now

Manyata said looking directly into udays eyes

U: what, where did you get that idea

She saw a sort of shock in his eyes, he could not believe his ears. Ajay getting credit for his work

M: I don't know but my intuition makes me fell so

Uday came back to his ordinary alert mode

U: I know he has a crooked mind but I don't think he could kill anyone , he may steal or threaten but he cannot kill, my! to kill someone you need guts and a strong mind , how could anyone thinking of killing someone, its so disgusting

As he said the last few words there was a spark in his eyes, a unknown feeling of pride, the words were bringing his supressed feelings out

M: I know , I know( that you are evil, she thought)

Flash back over

Then she had met rajat- their final meeting

As she looked in the file the first sentence itself cemented her doubts

"in my observations I found that mr shark is none other than mr udayveer singh, owner of uday group of companies"

She did not need further reading to prove this line

In that anger ' the killing of her best friend and udays betrayal made her confront him without thinking and without establishing any back up plans. She should atleast have phoned jaggat and gave him an idea of where she would be. But she didn't. it was her biggest mistake and now she had to pay her life for that mistake

She remembered the old uday- his love and care visible in his eyes and now the present uday- the ruthless killer. Somewhere in her mind she did feel something for him but she was not ready to accept it

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So finally I unmasked mr shark😃

Many had guessed earlier itself that mr shark was uday

For those who still do not believe, here is homework for you

Read the starting few chapters and see how uday fits into mr sharks shoes

If still not convinced I will prove in the next chapter: A LOOK INTO THE PAST

So guys, how was it?😕

Will you read this story again after knowing the truth?

Do comment and hit the like button

PM'swill be send today afternoon
Will wait for your feedback
Edited by andy.a - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Fantastic update 👍🏼

I cracked my first case 🤣 I mean I knew MR. SHARK was UDAY 🤣

But you know what, even after knowing the truth i am not at all angry on Uday 🤣

Coming to the chapter, It was superb 👏

Great job Andy 👏

All the scenes were written so well !

And yeah finally my headaches are over 🤣

And what do you mean by :

Will you read this story again after knowing the truth?

Of course we are going to read it 😡

Continue soon ...

... Do PM me
Edited by catty2000 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
so finally updated the chapter
do read it
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yay!!! I guessed right!!! I had a strong feeling that uday was Mr shark!! Finally the truth is out!!! Anyway coming to the chapter it was really good!! And Wht do u mean if we will read further or not? Of course!!! I wanna find out how manyata changes uday for the better... C their relationship progressing!!! Thnx for the pm and so excited about whts gonna come next. Gd luck for next chapter and plz pm me!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Soo...finally MR.shark is uday...
Superb update...eagrly waiting for next part...plzz..update soon thanx for PM.
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Posted: 12 years ago
res..
unres...
woowww!!!!!
andy that was a brilliant update...
u really are e gr8 writer...
continue soon cant wait!!
thankgod manyata felles sumthing for uday!!!
Edited by iluvmanveer - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

aha!!!!!!!

my guess was rite😉

I am the guiness😆

Now stopping my jokes😊

ur updates are fantastic 👏

pls up⭐️date soon

and pls don't forget to pm me😛

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Posted: 12 years ago
comment unreserved un pg 65

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