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Hi guys . Again back with a new chapter . Hope you enjoy it . My school re-opens from next week so I may be irregular in posting chapters but in this week I'll try to post daily updates . Thanks to all the readers for liking and commenting in both my FF's . Your comments have made me smile all the time . Thank you so much once again . Love you guys !

Chapter 8: THE CLUB !

A little later:

Chand – Hmm... So that witch has joined hands with you .

Abhay –Yes dad! Do you think it's her trap?

Chand – No, no I don't think so! She is trying to find the murderer of her brother so I don't think it's her trap. Just be good friends with her for now. And by the way, did you hear that news?

Abhay – Ya Dad, one more girl drained by him.

Chand – Hmm...I think this is his warning. I think sooner or later he will enter Dehradoon. So, Abhay and Metz, I have jobs assigned for you. Metz you will give your friends the vervain accessories you have made. It will protect them from the bad eyes.

Metz – Ok dad! And she leaves.

Chand – And Abhay, your job is to track down him and keep eyes on him. And yes, I think you should tell that witch about him. It will be much easier for us if she helps us in this.

Abhay – Ok dad! And he also leaves.

Hostel:

Misha enters the hostel with her luggage.

Pia – Oh hi mish! Uhh … ye luggage?

Misha – Kya kahun yaar , mere mom dad ne mujhe ghar se nikal diya !😆

Pia and Maya – What ? Why ?

Misha – Are woh meine Mishra sir ki locker mein cockroaches dale the na , wohi baat Princi ne Mom and Dad ko bata di . Aur ab Mom Dad chahte he ki mein tum aur maya ki help lekar padhai karu . Infact Mom ne toh Kabeera ko bhi hostel bhej diya . Woh Boys hostel mein . 😆

Pia and Maya start laughing .

Misha – Haan Haan haslo . Baad mein agar mein phirse fail hogayi na , toh mein tumhe nahi chodungi .

Pia – Ok Misha , hum he na . Tumhe hum class topper bana denge . Are haan tumhare paas us sanki ka no. he ?

Misha – Kaun ?

Pia – Are wahi , THE GREAT ABHAY RAICHAND.

Maya – Are piya tum usse itna kyun hate karti ho ?

Misha – Sirf Pia nahi hum sab usse hate karte he . Moody no.1 . Oh take his no . .………

Pia – Thanks , I'll just call and come . and she leaves .

Misha – Hmm.. Maya meri help karo gi ?

Maya – Come …. And they start unpacking .

Corridor :

Pia (on the phone) – Come on Raichand pick up .

Abhay – Hello ?

Pia – Hi Raichand , mein Pia bol rahi hun . I hope tum mujhe bhule nahi hoge . Remember , Pandher Palace ? Project Partners?

Abhay – What do you want?

Pia – Meine aap ko isliye phone ki kyunki ab sirf 3 din rehgaye he. Aur kal Sunday he . Toh aap meherbaani karke 3:00p.m. idhar Hostel aajana . Mein ek guide ko bulaya he . Toh woh hume palace dikhayega .

Abhay – Thik he mein aajaunga . and he cuts the phone .

Pia – Idiot , sanki no. 1 .

Pia's room:

Pia – Toh hogayi unpacking?

Misha – Dude please meri madat karo.

Pia - Kya hua ? Hua kya ?

Misha – Aaj Poison Ivy mein super rocking party he . And I cannot definitely miss it . Please please help .

Pia – But aaj incharge toh Shanker sir he .

Misha – What ? Yipee ! Usse toh mein do minute mein flat kardungi . Hey , come you two also join me . Our whole group will be there . 😉

Maya – Toh der kis baat ki .

Pia – Nahi , mera mood nahi he .

Misha – Are come na Pia , tum ne yaha k club hi nahi dekh he . Please please please .

Pia – Ok ok fine , I will come .

Maya's phone beeps and she goes out :

Maya –What?? Another girl drained? But how?... Klaus did you get the scent of that vampire? ……What ?...…Oh! Looks like we have to prepare. We have to welcome our new, oh sorry, my old friend here. I want a grand welcome for him. Welcome back my old friend, oops Vampire!! Ok , thanks .

Pia – Who was it ?

Maya – Are , chodo na . Mein tumhe baad mein bataungi . Chalo chalo chalo na .

Pia – Ok , ok chalo and they all leave .

Poison ivy :

The Poison ivy club was the bestest club in the whole Dehradoon . Full of rock music and beats , people dancing , drinks and what not .

Angad – Yaar , ye Misha ab tak kyun nahi aayi .

Metz – Haan , khud bulati he aur phir late aati he .

Misha – Guys guys , I came .

Ruhi – Misha , yaha toh dhang ke kapde pehenke aaya karo .

Misha – Hey tumhe kya problem he , khud toh guldasta(bouquet) banker aayi ho .

Metz – Hey Pia , Hi Maya .

Pia and Maya –Hi guys .

Kabir - Hi Pia !

Pia- Hi kabir !

Misha – Aaj DJ kaun he ?

Ruhi – Haye , woh apna saleem he .

Misha – Cool . Chalo guys party floor pe .

Abhay (to metz) – Mujhe yaha kyun layi ho ?

Metz – Kabhi toh enjoy karo !!

Abhay – I'm here only .

Metz – Ok bye .

Even if insisted Maya stayed back with Abhay while others all went to dance . The DJ played "Party On My Mind". All started dancing and jumping . Pia was also dancing , laughing and enjoying . She never thought that Dehradoon's club could be so rocking . Misha began her junglee dance , Angad and Ruhi –Lost in their world while Kabir was trying to impress Pia . All were dancing non-stop . They were singing ,dancing and enjoying with each other .

While from afar Abhay was watching Pia . The girl who took his heart the moment he saw her . Who made him flat due to her innocence , the fiery side and now the Rock star side of her . Abhay was so lost in Pia that he didn't hear Maya calling him .😳

Maya (in mind) – Pia ore Pia , tune ye kya kia . Raichand ko flat kardiya . Arjun bhai sach kehte the , tum me kuch toh baat he , yaar Vampire ka dil jeet liya ?

Maya (shouting) – ABHAY !!!!

Abhay (shocked) – What ???

Maya – Tum kis duniya mein gaye the ?

Abhay – God , Problem kya he ?

Maya – Very good , toh problem ye he ki tumne news suna ?

Abhay – Haan , the girl's drained . It's him .

Maya – Thank god , tumne confirm kar diya . So , you're not doing any preparations ?

Abhay – We are. Dad has assigned us some jobs . We're giving vervain accessories to people who are close to us . That will keep them protected .

Maya – Hmm.. wait a min ! If you give a vervain accessory to Pia , she will come to know . Shit , shit , shit !

Abhay –So now ?

Maya – Ya , that necklace . It will work . You have seen a small necklace in Pia's neck haven't you ? That one with a small crystal ball held between 2 hands .That's a special necklace given by my bro to her and her family . It has the power to keep you from being compelled or being attacked. That means if a supernatural will try to attack you, it will immediately enable the person to realize the situation and dodge the attack .

Abhay – Btw, where did you find Arjun's body ?

Maya – In the woods of Manali by the old palace .

Abhay – Ok , then we have to join our hands to fight against him . I m sure he has grown much powerful than before so it won't be easy to defeat him .

Maya – Should I tell this to Pia ? You know ,like ,I have never kept anything from her and it will be very hard …

Abhay – I can understand. It's ok if you want to tell it, about us as well , if she promises not to expose us . I have seen the fire and hatred in her eyes about the vampires. Will she be able to accept us?

Maya – I don't know , Arjun was not only mine but Pia's bro as well . She loved him to the extent she loved her real bro . She actually witnessed my bro being killed so she has been determined to kill or expose each Vampire she comes across ….

Pia (drunk) – Hey guys !

Maya – Pia , tumne sharap pi he ? Aunty ne mana kia tha na ?

Pia (like a child) – Sirf 10 peg hi toh pi he na . Misha aur Kabir ne toh (acts like counting) …Pata nahi . Hmm.. hey Abhay , tumhe pata he ki tum aaj kitne hot lag rahe ho . Bilkul ek warrior Prince . Hehe .😆😉

Abhay – Maya isse ghar lekar jao . Hey wait it's not safe . Come I'll drop you both .

Pia – Aww ...Abhay hume ghar chodega . Haye , ek prince mujhe uthakar apne palace nahi mere ghar lekar jayega.😉 Nahi , mujhe ghar nahi jaana , mujhe dance karna he .

Abhay – God ,ye ladki mujhe pagal kardegi . Haan haan Prince tumhe ghar chodega , chalo . (He carries Pia in his arms and starts walking)

Pia – Yipee , Pia ko ek prince uthakar apne ghar chodega . So , romantic .😳😆

Abhay(Irritated) - Shh..chup .

Pia (crying) – Abhay ne mujhe daatan . (She starts beating him ) Mumma , papa mujhe bachao . Jay mujhe bachao.

Abhay – Ab ye jeh kaun he ?

Pia – Mera Boyfriend he !

Abhay (SHOCKED)- What ?

Pia was about to say something but she fell unconscious. Abhay dropped Pia and Maya to the hostel and left for his home . He was continuously thinking. Who was this Jeh ? Was he really Pia's Boyfriend? Or no? God Abhay , what does it matter to you ?

Meanwhile in the forest :

Man – Whoosh , hi dehradoon . Pehchano kaun ? I hope tum sab mujhe bhul toh nahi gaye na ? Apne purane dost ko kaun bhul sakta he . It's time now , to come back . Oh Mom and that Buddha must be waiting for me . After all meri picture ki trailer toh unhone news mein dekh hi li hogi . But it's now time for the Picture to start . So ladies and gentlemen , The picture starts ..uhh.. let me think about it . Till then enjoy the upcoming trailers . Do buckle up your seat belts and do not forget to take the popcorns and juices . Haha ! (now shouting) I'M BACK ! SIDDHARTH RAICHAND IS BACK , TO DESTROY THE LIVES OF …. OF ? …. OBVIOUSLY CHAND , HASEENA , ABHAY AND METZ RAICHAND .

Precap :

Pia – Wait , wait wait …. Abhay is a Vampire ? You're kidding right ? That means Metz too ? What the hell is going on here ? Raichand you're teasing me right ? Please tell this is not true . Why are you quiet ? You're a vampire ? Then she felt a sharp pain in her head and she fell down unconscious .

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wow great story plz update soon
it's awesome story
thanks for the pm
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nice update do continue soon
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Lovely update.
Sid is bak😲.
Waiting 4 Piya's rxn abt Abhay being a vampy.
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omg to this evil is non other than sid... and pia is so cute and abhay as usual sadu...

precap sounds interesting...
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Chapter 9 : Truth exposed ???

Next Day :

Jungle -

Maya – Pia I don't think this is a great idea to search the forest .

Pia – Come on na , (they hear sound) wait listen , ……(they see a deer running little afar and a shadow running to catch the deer)

Pia (excited) - See , see I told you , a vampire can only run at this pace . Come let's follow .

Maya – Pia , it's not a good idea .

They follow that shadow and reach a river where they see the shadow draining the deer dry . But to Pia's shock it was none other than Abhay . The guy who had blown her off her feet the moment she saw him . The guy who was her classmate . Abhay turns around and sees Pia with a horror struck face .

Abhay – Listen Pia , I can explain .

Pia – What ? You're a vampire ?

Maya – Listen Pia , let him explain ….

Pia – Wait , wait wait …. Abhay is a Vampire ? You're kidding right ? That means Metz too ? What the hell is going on here ? Raichand you're teasing me right ? Please tell this is not true . Why are you quiet ? You're a vampire ? Then she felt a sharp pain in her head and she fell down unconscious .

Maya started shouting – Pia , pia wake up .. Pia !!

Pia woke up startled . She was sweating . Maya was there beside her .

Maya – Pia wake up . What happened Piyu ?

Pia – Thank god it was just a dream ..Ahhh…why does my head hurt ?

Maya – Take this . (hands her a juice) You were drunk last night so it's hangover . By the way , why are you sweating ?Was it a nightmare ?

Pia - Oh fish , I had promised. Let it be . (now laughing)God , maya you won't believe what I saw man !

Maya – What ?

Pia – You know I saw that we were in the jungle and we saw a shadow draining a deer dry. Obviously a vampire. But you know it was none other than Abhay . (Maya was shocked) I know funny isn't it ? I mean that sanki and a vampire? That's the worst joke of the century man. I'm going to be fresh . See ya and she leaves .

Maya (thinking) – What , Pia saw abhay as a vampire ? Is god sending her some messages through her dreams ?God knows …..

Later :

3:00p.m.

Hostel

Abhay honks his car horn infront of the gate . Misha sees this through the window .

Misha – Ye khadoos yaha kya kar raha he ? Isse bhi ghar se nikal diya kya ?

Pia (hurriedly wearing her shoes) – Are woh mere liye aaya hai .

Misha – Wow , are you guys dating ???

Pia – Oh please , sapne mein bhi iss abhay raichand ke saath date nahi karungi . Usse behtar toh Chirag hai . Ok bye I'm getting late .

And she takes her bag and runs out .

Gate :

Abhay was leaning against the car door waiting for Pia . Pia came rushing out .

Abhay – Khud toh phone mein 10 baate sunati ho , aur apne aap hi late hoti ho .

Pia – Listen , mein sirf 3min ur 36 seconds late hui hoon .

Abhay – Whatever . Sit !

And they drive off to the palace .

In the car :

Pia was feeling highly bored as Abhay was neither talking nor was she walking. Abhay sensed her feelings so he decided to tease her .

Abhay –Now ,the palace must be about 3 hours away from here .

Pia – What ??? Still 3 hours . God I'll surely die now .

Abhay smiled within himself seeing Pia so impatient .

Abhay – There are some cd's over there . You can listen to it if you want .

Pia (happily)– Great !and she began searching but she gets angry after seeing the cd's as they were of the 1950's old songs .

Pia – What the hell ? Tum iss 21st century mein 200 saal purane gane sunte ho ?

Abhay – So what ? Old is gold after all . And these songs make my day . They are so peaceful and calmful and refreshing .

Pia – Tum inn gano ko refreshing bolte ho ? Tumhara dimag toh kharab nahi hua na ? I agree ki tumhare do teen screw dheele hai par pure nahi . And you said old is gold ? Lol , gold aaj kal bahot mehenga hogaya hai and haven't you heard new is silver ? After all silver rocks and she went on and on talking ….Abhay was pissed off with her continuous blabbering so he took out tape and put it on her mouth and took out a rope and tied her hands .

Pia (with the tape on her mouth) – Open this …… What the hell ! ………….screw you raichand . ………………………Open it now . ………….Raichand you're gonna pay for this .

Abhay was enjoying this a lot and was humming his favorite song and driving while Pia was trying to untie her hands and take the tape out of her mouth .

3 hours later :

Old Pandher Palace .

Abhay came out of the car and went to Pia's side and took off the tape and rope .

Abhay – Come out !

Pia shakes her head as a no and folds her arms across her chest. Abhay without hesitating scoops her in his arms and takes her .

Pia (trying to get down) – Abhay put me down ! Raichand you're not doing nice . Put me down . She starts hitting Abhay on the chest . Finally he keeps her down .

Pandher Palace :

The Palace keeper came out and Abhay told that they were students who had come to research on Pandher . The man offered to guide them .

Inside :

The palace looked like a haunted house from inside as well as outside. Bats were flying everywhere and the furniture was broken and covered with dust .

Guide – Yeh hai main hall jaha badi badi programs hua karte the . Bade dhum dham se . and he strted the history..

Pia was busy taking notes while Abhay was lost in the olod memories of this palace .

Pia – Acha uncle , toh iss palace ka last raja kaun tha ?

Guide - King Vishwanath !

Abhay becomes alerted listening to this name .

Pia – Kaunse saal se unk rajya chle aaraha tha .

Guide – 1399 – 1412 .

Pia – Uske baat unke bachon ne unko succed nahi kia ? Aur koi bhi nahi ?

Guide – Nahi beta , ek raat kuch raja ke dushmano ne unko aur unki patni ko maar diya tha . Unke bachon shayad kahi bhaag gaye the . Par kisiko unki koi khabre nahi mili . Aur koi toh ye kehte hai ki raja ke aatma ko shanti na milne se hi koi raja ban ne hi nayi paya . Samaye bit te gaye , ye jaamana aage baad gaya aur iss palace ke baare mein toh ab koi puchta hi nahi he .

Pia – Thank you uncle aapne humri bahot madat ki . Thank you so much .

Guide – Bhagwan tum dono ko bahot khush rakhe hai. Jai shree Krishna and he leaves.

Pia notices Abhay was lost in his thoughts so she snappes her finger infront of his eyes .

Pia – Raichand chalna hai ki yaha 2 teen din rehne ka plan hai .

Abhay – Can we take a tour of this place once ?

Pia (shocked) – Ok ! and they roam about the palace . The go to the second floor and they start walking round . Abhay starts reminiscing his childhood memories while Pia was again blabbering – Wow , lagta hai ye palace tha bada changa . God , I wish I could go back in time . I really want to see all the happenings that took place here .

The guard thought that Abhiya had left so he locked the door and went off to his home .

Pia – Ab chale ?

Abhay – Ya ! and they come down .

Pia tries to open the door but it was closed .

Pia – What ? Abhay ye khul nahi raha he .

Abhay also tries but the door was closed .

Abhay – Lagta hai ki tumhre uncle ne hume yaha band kar kar bhaag gaye .

Pia – What ? (shouting) – Koi he ? Please help ! Anybody there ?

Abhay – Yaha dur dur tak koi nahi milega .

Pia tries her phone but no network .

Pia – Damn , no network .

Abhay – Lagta hai ab hume yahi puri raat bitani hogi.

Pia – What's the time ?

Abhay – It's alredy 7 :00 p.m.

Pia – Shit shit hit , Maya pareshaan ho rahi hogi .

Abhay – Ab tumhari baate khatam hogayi ho toh chalo kahi raat katne ke liye jaga dhund te hai .

Pia – Kese insaan ho tum ? Yaha bechari bholi bhali nadaan ladki iss haunted house mein tumhare saath phs gayi hai . Aur tum kuch raasta nikal ne ke siwaye mujhe attitude dikh rahe ho . Hate you Raichand.

Abhay – Toh mene kab tumse I love you bola hai . Feelings are mutual Jaiswal. Ab chalo . And they go off to a corner and sit down .

It was pitch dark in the palace. Pia was getting more scared nd hungry by the passing time. But Abhay was least bothered.

Pia – Aaah , tumhe bhuk nahi lagi ?

Abhay – Nope.

Pia (in mind) – Kesa insaan he yaar . Bhuk bhi nahi lagi aur isse toh dar bhi nahi lag raha he.

Slowly by the passing time Pia gradually drifted off to sleep and she didn't realize when her head fell down and rested in Abhay's shoulder . Abhay was a little startled at first and decided to jerk her head off his her sleep so shoulder but seeing peacefully Abhay was calmed down . The moon light was falling on Pia's face when she was sleeping and Abhay couldn't stop smiling and admiring seeing the beautiful Angel who laid on his shoulders sleeping peacefully …………………………………….

Precap : Sid's entry in the Raichand Mansion

How was it ? Do like and comment . 😊

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wanderfull update dear.loved abhiya so much😳.
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abhiya were 2 cute. Pia is so talkative poor abhay...tortured by her non stop blabbering. It was awsum an update
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abhiya were 2 cute. Pia is so talkative poor abhay...tortured by her non stop blabbering. It was awsum an update



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