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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is an OS of our Beloved kriyaansh
Story same as D3...kriyaansh confessed their love...no Taani
Sharon is back.swayam as usal sharon ko manane kelie koshish kar rhe hai...
It was vicky's Bday party...
Vicky:Rey where are you dude.hum kabse tera wait kar rhe hai...aur tum toh.
Rey:m cmng yaar.actually trafic mein fazz ghaya hoom..give me 15 mintunes i will be there.
Vicky:cool..come fast
Rey:ya.
Damn!!ye trafic bhi naa..i think short cut lena padega.ya bt yaham se kaise nikloom ..
After some time..
Thank god ab shortcut se jaata hoom..
Rey started his car.oh god bhahut dher ho chuka hai vicky muje nahi chodega ...he incresed the speed and started messaging kriya.but usne woh truck notice nhi kia.coz uska poora focus phone pe dha...
He was about to turn his car...but he was late...the car and the Truck clashed...
Rey's head started bleeding...he become unconsious coz of the sudden Force.
After 1 hour
bday venue..
Vicky:where the hell is Rey...
Exactly...The gang said
kriya got Tensed..
Universe ji bhahut dher ho ghaya Rey hai kaham..
Suddenly swayam's mobile started ringing...
Swayam:hello..
Caller:is it sawyam..
swayam:yes..who is this..
Caller:my name is rahul,actually abhi abhi yaham i mean collage Road mein ek bhahut bada accident hua.actually uska ID mein reyaansh singhania likaha hai,kya aap usse jante hao haan?
Swayam:what?rey ka accident
everyone get shocked..
Kriya:kya ...kya hua mere Rey ko.
Hello Rey kaham hai
caller:abhi city hospital mein hai..aap log jaldi aa jaayiye..
Kriya:hospital?swayam rey hospital mein uske saat bhahut bada accident hua hai swayam agar usko kuch ho jata toh
kriya started crying..
Sharon:kriya,control yourself kuch nahi hoga usse..
Kriya:nahi sharon agar usko kuch ho ghaya naa..mein
swayam:kriya chup ho jaao chalo guys hum log chalte hai..
Gang entered the Hospital...
At Reception
nilesh:excuseme ,rey i mean Reyaansh singhania.jo abhi abhi leke aaya..
Receptionsist:aap log uska Realatives ho..
Gang:haan..
Receptionist:actually he is in operation Theatre...
Kriya:kya? operation...
Swayam:kriya ek min. Excuse me where is the operation theatre
Receptionist:6th floor..
Swayam:Thanxxx
they reached there...
Rahul:aap log? swayam?
Swayam:ya thats me ab rey kaisa hai
kriya:ya pls bolona mera Rey kaisa hai woh teek toh hai naa..
Rahul:dekiye...actually doctor ne abhi tak kuch nahi kaha.bt aap pareshaan mat ho he will be fine.i think you must his girlfriend.
Kriya:haan..Thankyou soo much aapne mera Rey ko yaham lane kelie..thanxxx so much.
Rahul:aare iske koi zaroorat nahi hai..
Swatam:yaa Thanxx dude..
Suddenly doctor came out from The operation Theatere..
Kriya:doctor woh Rey kaisa hai doctor:to say Reyaansh abhi bhi ghatre mein hai..agar A +ve blood group nhi mile toh...
Cut by kriya nhi hai aare aise kaise itna bada hospital hai phir bhi aap logom ke paas ye blood group nhi hai kya..
Swatam:calm down kria..
Kriya:ek minute doctor, mera woh A+ve hai..mein deti hoom Rey ko blood.
Doctor:great..sister inko jaldi operation Theatre mein shift karo.jaldi
sister:yes doctor.
At the OperationTheatre
kriya saw her love with a oxigen Mask with plasters...
Tears roll down her cheeks...then she laid down on the structure..
Actually kriya ko injection se bhahut dar lagta hai...
She afraid...Then the doctor starts his work...
After some times Rey opened his eyes..
Rey mind talk
oh goshhh mein hospital mein woh bhi aise...Battcutter?yahamm goshhh meri kriya ko kya hua.
When a sister entered the operation Theatre.
Oh you are awake how are you Reyaansh..
Rey:im fine bt sister meri kriya ko kya hua
sister:usse kuch nahi hua hai.actually hospital A+ve blood nahi dha aap kelie bt thank god aapki GF ki blood group Match ho ghayi...,,lagta hai woh aapse bhahut pyaar karti hai.bechari bhahut roo rhi dhi humare upper chillaya coz yaham apka matching blood group nhi hai...abhi problem ye ki woh bhahut kamzoor hai coz usne apna blood donate kia hai..waise hum logom ne usse glocouse dia hai.dnt wry mein abhi doctor ko bhulati hoom.
Rey:ya...rey's mind talk
I love you Battcutter..itna pyaar karti ho mujse...i promise ki mein tumein kabhi bhi hurt nhi karooga..
Now the whole gang entred into the operatin Theatre...
Vicky:crying) tum teek toh hona rey..
Rey:haan...dude now stop crying...
Swayam:thank god...tum teek ho
sharon:thanx toh kriya ko bol dena chahiye agar woh nhi hoti pata nhi kya hota Rey ka.she really loves you Rey..
Rey:i knw sharon...woh muje bhahut pyaar karti hai...aur mein bhi usse bhahut pyaar karta hoom
kriya wokeup
Rey...rey...bt her eyes are still closed..
Swayam:dnt wry kriya..Rey bilkul teek hai Dekho..
Kriya opened her eyes...and looked at him,,
kriya stoodup ,swayam held her
kriya:rey aap kaise ho...dard ho rha hai she adked cutely
Rey:nahi battcutter...jab tum mere saat ho toh muje bilkul dard nhi hota.i luv u battcutter
kriya:luv u more and they hugged each other...

i knw bakwass dha.bt kya kare...


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sch a cute OS
luvd it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was awesome i really loved it add me on ur buddy list plzand pm me all ur works
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was a lovely cute n sweet os...
loved it...
how kria yells at doc for non availability of blood showed how much she loves rey...
really nice..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sweet os :-) please pm me when you write something new

Nikki <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
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such a cute os... loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow this is a really cute os aww kriyaansh bonding is so adorable it was super
:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nyce...😊

this one is soo gud 👏

kriya loves rey truly madly deeply... 🤗

ab rey ki ragon me kriya ka khoon h..😆

mera bhi A+ve h... agli baar need ho to mujhse le lena 😉😆

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome OS..
Luvd it a lot
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow it was a really cute os
loved it
nicely written
loved it
do write more

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