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Posted: 12 years ago
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hum sab...😃
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still waitinggg
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Posted: 12 years ago
It so painful part... Thou geet was dying inside but she made herself brave in front of Maan. The separation would be unbearable for her...

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Posted: 12 years ago
I am feeling sad for Geet.They were having such cute moments together.
I am happy you'll end the seperation in just one update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 48
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Link for all my work

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1916994/my-work-compiled

Happy Makarsankranti to All...
Maan had reached New York and tried to settle down and started his work. But Deep within him was in pain. He had left Geet, his love, his life behind for 2yrs. Everyday his pain was only increasing opposite to what he had thought. He had thought by time they will get involved in their own work and the time would just pass by.

But now just one week has passed and every moment started feeling longer. The feel that she is not near him for 2 yrs, he has to survive without getting a single sight of her. Then when he would realize how Geet was coping with all this, his heart went in even more pain.

"No I have to concentrate or else all this decision will go in vain."

And with that he immersed himself in work and work

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XWKXpC2JTVU[/YOUTUBE]

Though he crazily started working day and night yet at last the feel of separation would overpower him at times thus forcing Maan to take help of drink and immerse himself in work.

Though he was madly and actively working and when alone, drinks and work went along to help forget all the guilt, feel of his pain, realization of her pain.But in actual whatever he tried her smiling innocent face always popped up infront of him.

Main Aur Meri Tanhaai, Aksar Ye Baaten Karate Hain

Tum Hoti To Kaisaa Hotaa, Tum Ye Kahati, Tum Vo Kahati

Tum Is Baat Pe Hairaan Hoti, Tum Us Baat Pe Kitani Hansati

Tum Hoti To Aisaa Hotaa, Tum Hoti To Vaisaa Hotaa

Main Aur Meri Tanhaai, Aksar Ye Baaten Karate Hain

Ruu Ruu

On the other side, Geet completely locked herself in room for two days. His going on week's tour was different but now he was not near her for 2 yrs. How will she breathe in air without him near her? And everyone talking against Maan was getting unbearable for her now.

When everyone left and only Maan's parents were there, his Mom got her out somehow. Coaxed her, calmed her and tried her best to cheer her up. But these all only reminded her of Maan. The way he used to please her when ever she would be upset. The more anyone tried to pamper her more and more she wanted to be coaxed and pampered by him.

Ye Kahaan Aa Gaye Ham, Yuunhi Saath Saath Chalate

Teri Baahon Men Hai Jaanam, Mere JismOJaan Pighalate 2

But her being in pain only made his parents, especially his father, hate him more and Geet could not take this. And thus she started to keep bold and cheerfull face infront of all.

But in alone she would cry out all her pain. The room, the bed and all that she has to bear withot him near her for 2yrs.

As days passed by, Maan crave for Geet only kept increasing. Feeling suffocated he would go out jogging in any hour of night.

But where ever he went, whatever he saw, reminded him of her, her innocent laugh, her sweet complain, he sitting on his lap, she under him on bed..

Ye Raat Hai, Yaa Tumhaari Zulfen Khuli Hui Hain

Hai Chaandani Tumhaari Nazaron Se, Meri Raate Dhuli Hui Hain

Ye Chaand Hai, Yaa Tumhaaraa Kangan

Sitaare Hain Yaa Tumhaaraa Aanchal

Havaa Kaa Jhonkaa Hai, Yaa Tumhaare Badan Ki Khushabuu

Ye Pattiyon Ki Hai Sarasaraahat

Ke Tumane Chupake Se Kuchh Kahaa

Ye Sochataa Huun Main Kabase Gumasum

Ki Jabaki Mujhako Bhi Ye Khabar Hai

Ki Tum Nahin Ho, Kahin Nahin Ho

Magar Ye Dil Hai Ki Kah Rahaa Hai

Tum Yahin Ho, Yahin Kahin Ho

Six months have passed and so many times he had thought of calling her but then stopped, knowing very well if he hear her voice he will not be able to stop himself from going to her and then his overpowering desire for her will break every sanity left in him.

But he wondred, how was Geet coping up without calling him. Yes she had promised him that she would not call but still was her promise to him much stronger than her urge to talk to him.

Sometimes he wished that his word to be not as valuable for her, that she can break her promise and call him. His restlessness was making him think differently.

For him, Geet was so fragile, how she could sustain without even talking to him. Was she strong enough to keep her promise to him that he did not get even a single missed call from her?

7 months have passed, Geet looked at herself in the mirror and suddenly felt Maan behind her.She closed her eyes to feel him touch her everywhere with so much love and passion'

Tuu Badan Hai Main Huun Saayaa, Tu Na Ho To Main Kahaan Huun

Mujhe Pyaar Karane Vaale, Tuu Jahaan Hai Main Vahaan Huun

Hamen Milanaa Hi Thaa Hamadam, Isi Raah Pe Nikalate

Ye Kahaan Aa Gaye Ham

Meri Saans Saans Mahake, Koi Bhinaa Bhinaa Chandan

Tera Pyaar Chaandani Hai, Meraa Dil Hai Jaise Aangan

Koi Aur Bhi Mulaayam, (Meri Shaam Dhalate Dhalate 2)

It was only Geet who knew how she was alive. She has started imagining Maan more and more these days. She needed him so much now but still could not call him.

She knew if she call him, she will pour out everything to him and he will leave everything and come here, leaving his research, which was so important for him.

"Bas Apni bahoon me samet lijiye mujhe, aur kuch nahi chahiye." Her heart itched with pain and desire.

"Bas aapka yeh pyar mere saath hai, to jee rahi hoon. What turn of life have you brought me Maan, one side I cannot forgive you easily for keeping me away from you and on other side I don't know how will I ask for forgiveness from you Maan. I disobeyed you, I am sorry Maan"

Geet was on her side fighting with so many complex feeling of which she had never ever imagined.

A year and half has passed, Maan research was complete and it did made a landmark in global economy, he was continuously been roped by media, press, Seminars, university, global business regarding his his new research which had completely redefined the global economy structure.

He had wanted to run away from everything and go to his Geet. He had decided to completely leave all this work, leave this obsession of work which had led him here where he hated all this recognition. All this recognistiona nd fame have come at the cost of their separation, he had traded her happiness to get this fame. But he was not the man to leave things in between and thus have completed his work.

Majabuur Ye Haalaat, Idhar Bhi Hai Udhar Bhi

Tanhaai Ke Ye Raat, Idhar Bhi Hai Udhar Bhi

Kahane Ko Bahut Kuchh Hai, Magar Kisase Kahen Ham

Kab Tak Yuunhi Khaamosh Rahen, Aur Sahen Ham

Now that he wanted to run away, his popularity and his great work got him surrounded with after effect of such great work. Anyone who worked this hard, would do it as a part to gain this recognition but for Maan he has only completed his work successfully and now just wanted to leave this all and go.

Dil Kahataa Hai Duniyaa Ki Har Ik Rasm Uthaa Den

Divaar Jo Ham Dono Men Hai, Aaj Giraa Den

Kyon Dil Men Sulagate Rahen, Logon Ko Bataa Den

Haan Hamako Muhabbat Hai, Mohabbat Hai, Mohabbat Hai

Ab Dil Men Yahi Baat, Idhar Bhi Hai, Udhar Bhi

Geet would sit and watch him on TV, his interviews on TV. She would feel so proud within for him. Tears these days just rolled down her cheeks feeling so helpless. Seeing him only increased her urge to be near him, she would go near TV trying to feel him from near. She knew this was insane but still heart use no logic no mind.

She could not even share his success proudly with anyone at home. None wanted to talk or listen about him. For them all, he was a selfish man, who left Geet alone to fight everything alone for his own career. But they did not knew, all Geet needed was to talk with them, share with them her feeling about him.

With them all doing this, all Geet was left to do was keep everything in her own heart. Her 1.5 yrs of promise to not call him was complete. She looked around her room, how helpless she was that she doesn't have guts to call him, to talk to him.

What will she say to him, how will she face his guilt. No she can't let him go in other round of guilt and mess their life more. She had enough and she wanted a very simple life now. With whatever it was, though she will not forgive him easily for leaving her alone but she will also not let him drift in another round of guilt. It was her responsibility now. It was need of her life now that she needed positive Maan.

It was not her situation for which she was angry with him but only a simple fact that how in any case he had decided to leave her alone to survive without him for 1.5 yrs and now the time frame was only increasing.

She looked at her room and her eyes got fixed at one point

"I was lucky that I atleast got a reason to survive in your absence, the reason I felt connected with you or else how I could have survived Maan and I can never let you feel guilty for this. But I am sorry, I disobeyed you. "

Next: Maaneet meet; Maan shocked, surprised, helpless; Geet takes the lead.

Please like and comment to encourage.
-Love Anu
Edited by tellyme - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update they way you potrey sepration is mindblowing i think in next part we will see maaneet baby if i m not wrong but even i don't want maan to go in guilt nw n happy that after a long time i m first one to comment n egerly waiting for next part pls try not to delay for next part its request n when r u going to update game or love egerly waiting for that also
Edited by tanvi04 - 12 years ago
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wonderful update ...i guess geet had maans baby...
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update

and i swear i hate this maan yeh kaisa junn00n hain kaam ka

and m sure tat they have a baby nw
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Posted: 12 years ago
Shit u did made geet preggy and made her
have a baby without that idiot maan
Now maan can live with this guilty all his life
and may he never comes out of that😡
And keep maan helpless all his life b the maid
to the kid as that's wht he deserves.

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