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Posted: 13 years ago
Tanya dear...next part kab read karne ko milega🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
ajj update kar rahi hun...i m wrting it abhi abhi dost...

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Unpredictable

The 1'st night at Saint Teresa's was always a havoc all the children settling in..unpacking all the stuffs checking out new students meeting old frnds shouting complements at each other oh my my its just a total mess

Here our darling sanju was talking with sunny on her mob and unpacking her things she could not the difference between her room and ella's and vinnie's room...this room was so extravagant this made her more curious about her room mate

"i wonder y this room is so kind off spcl than the rest" she said to herself

"cuz it has the magical aaliya's touch" said sum1 from behind

Sanju turned and noticed a gal standing near the door

Wearing a tube sanju sanju was not sure but yeah she had the total dazzling factor in her

She then smiled and extended her hand and said "heloo ex-room mate"

Sanju just looked at her perfectly grasping wat she meant by tht ex part but still calmly replied "hey aaliya...hmmm lemme guess 3rd year student. Born n bought up in London...loves perfect attitude. Only child of ur parents satisfied in life and now eagerly waiting for some1 maybe boyfriend" said sanju taking out the last dress her fav pullover and placing it in the wardrobe

Aaliya had her mouth open and was staring at sanju

Sanju simply chuckled and sat down on her bed with her legs crossed and took out a mind game clue book for puzzles

"how do u kno all this" asked aaliya getting back to her normal state

"know wat in particular" questioned sanju

"i mean every bit...spcly abt the boyfrnd part...no1 in the college knows tht m in a relationship..."asked aaliya coming and sitting near sanju

Sanju looked up from tht crosswords book and answered "well mm ur attitude says that u r the only child and ur accent tells ur frm London

3rd year student...well thts wat i came to know abt the diva aaliya shenoy by some othr ppl...and tht waiting part well irritation is clearly visible in ur face...and tht sum1 being your boyfriend was just a guess"

Aaliya looked at her for sometimes "u seem intresting" she finally said

"hmm" answered sanju who was deeply involved solving her puzzle

Aaliya looked at this girl who seems fascinating to her...she thinks maybe she can tolerate this girl she smiles and gets up but suddenly turns

"sanjana"

Sanju looks up "yup" she says waiting for aaliya to speak up

" i dnt kno y...but i feel sumwer we r related" says aaliya's

Sanju just smiles "frnds usually call me sanju" she states

Aaliya gives a friendly smile and walks off to freshen up

Meanwhile in saint treasa's boys hostel

"yaar did u guys see those new gals...i mean thr r a ton of hotties this tym"said RGV

"baaki sabka toh naahi paatha...but voh ek toh bohut spcl thi..."said mac goin back to his convo with the 3 girls and tht girl...ella Mathew thts the only thing he knows abt her for now

"rehne de tu" said sum1 paating mac's head and cums and sit besides him

"varun"shouted every1 in union

"hey guyz" said varun

"werz our champ prithvi...dud3 atlast hez the part of the college"said saahil

"i dnt kno jab sein ayya hein room mein chup chap betha huva hein "said varun

There in varun's and prithvi's room prithvi was sitting near the window pane and was lost somwer

He was still stuck in the morning incident

Even he did not know why he cud not take that thing out his mind

He remeberd it all

Tht fyt

The way her fingers moved the way her brows tilled while she was shouting

The way her delicate body fitted perfectly in his arms

Thn the way she was looking in that sand coloured dress

Omg thts wat ppl call perfect beauty mayb

God knows will i meet her again...

"W*F...wat perfect...ohh shut up pritvi haf u lost it" said prithvi to himself

"and meet tht pest...again...no way...for god's sake keep her away frm me" he continued his blabber keeping his head on his hand

"suuup..chottay"said varun entering the room

He closed the door at a click and paced around the room looking quite tensed

"nuthng imp...bhai" said pritvi wat elese cud he haf done...hw cud he say tht he was smitten by unkown gal for the 1st tym in the whole bloody lot

Smitten...wot smitten no no no no prithvi stop it...!!

"lets go na...kaha khoya hein" asked varun looking at his weird bro even weirdly

"hmm..kahi na..ha lets go ,...but kaha?'" asked prithvi

"girls hostel...challl abb"said varun taking his hand and pulling him

"waaat???have u lost it...girls hostel.." said prithvi loosening his hand from his bro's grip

"kya...apne bhai ke liye itna bhi nahi kar saktha...chal na"said varun making a puupy face...and he moved out of the room giving prithvi a pleading look

"thank god meri koyi GF nahi hein" thought prithvi jerking his head and following his bro

He saw his brother taking a rope and then suddenly realisation sunk in

"we r going through the window" asked prithvi giving a disbelief walla look

"Yupp we r lill guy" said varun

"so mission girls hostel onn" shouted varun

PRECAP {varun helped prithvi to climb over the window pane varun enterd the room and walked towards the bed in the farther side while pritvi was struggling with ropes near the window pane when suddenly his gaze fells on some1

Sleeping peace fully hugging her pillow and murmuring throughout her sleep

"i miss u mumma" and a drop of tear falls from her face}

...END,...

Hellooo guys yup i kno this was a filler update moreover no saanvi

M rily sorry...but this update was necessary for the bright romantic future of saanvi

Ok ok i kno it was a total crap and my any explanations cannot justify it!!!!!!!!!!!

Sach mein i give a pakka walla promise that the next update will be full of saanvi...and u will get a gud drama of college life

And my all ff readers tht is all my sweetypie's nw can expect for a twist very soon in the ff...toh dil thamke baiton!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
Reserved.
*edited*
Hey.. That was nice! Continue soon
waiting for all the twists..!!
Edited by Love_Arnie - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG Tanya...

Amazing chapter dear

Sanju had all d info about Aliya...😆

d way she used her presence of mind in fornt of aliya ...was nicely written

Here prithvi thinking about 'Sanjana ' hehehe

Mac interested in d new girl 'Ella'

Varun going to girl's hostel n priithvi accompanying

Waiting for next part

Prithvi n sanju meet in her room wid sanju sleeping 😊
Edited by tani23 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing...just luved it..i hope this ff progresses soon
Posted: 13 years ago
yuhu im d 1st 1 2 unres
Hey tan ch 4 is d best chap im my opinion
Im really impressed
Wid ur writing skills
Thanks for d pm
update asap
Edited by SHARVANI - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh tanya dear
it was amazing dear
waiting for next chapter
Edited by shrutisweety - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome dear, ab dekhna ye hai ki prthvi aur sanju ke beech kuch hota hai ya nahi! so do update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
😛 Woww... Amazing update
Eventhough there was no sanvi part it was really interesting
Totally enjoyed it
Sanju aliya convo was superb.
Our smart Sanju ne kya jadhu chala diya...aliya ko impress ki 😉
Aliya ko lagtha he there is some connection between herself
n sanju...he na connection.. future sisters jo he 😉
...poor prithvi..ab se uska ye haal he to future me kya hoga
And the last part...the 2 brothers going to girls hostel..vo
bi window se.. 😃 ..all the best guys... 🤣
Read the precap...cant wait to read it
Plzz plzz plzz update soon

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