FF: Forever Blissful - UPDT: CH. 8 - PG. 51 (END) - Page 16

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Posted: 12 years ago
hey pritt
its lovely ff...
awesome parts till now..as i just read all parts..
thanx sooo much for pm.
do continue soon..
love yr write ups.
keep it up.
Edited by Roohasamia - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Roohasamia

hey pritt
its lovely ff...
awesome parts till now..as i just read all parts..
thanx sooo much for pm.
do continue siin.
love yr write ups.
keep it up.


Awww thanks so much!!! <3
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Posted: 12 years ago

Yay! Glad you liked it!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice work pritt!!
I hav always luvd al ur FF, OS.
Cont ur awesum work n don't 4get 2 pm me!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
WOW I LOVED IT!!! SOOO SWEET!!!! LOVED THE SINDOOR SCENE!
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Posted: 12 years ago
I wish RK would put Sindoor on Madhu in MEIEJ! Hai-ray that would be sooo romantic!...Great FF Pritt, please keep writing more because I love your writing!




***"You know that when I hate you, it is because I love you to a point of passion that unhinges my soul." ~Julie de Lespinasse ***

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Chapter Four - The Visit

"Come in!"

I watched the door as the person listened to RK's command. It opened slightly.

My eyes widened as I saw who it was.

"MA?!"

I ran towards my mother and into her arms.

I felt at home in her arms. I heard her giggle and that sent a happy feeling through me.

Then she pulled me away to stare at me.

"You said you were going to come visit!"

I stared at her as I remembered promising to visit her after I left the hospital. I put on a sorry look as her gaze turned towards RK.

"And you! Why didn't you bring her home?!"

RK stared at my mother and then smirked.

"Sorry ma!"

That was the first time I'd heard him call her ma and not sasuma.

I saw a smile lit up on her face as it did mine.

We both stared at RK with slightly stunned yet happy expressions.

I giggled as his expression turned to confusion.

"What are you both staring at? Oh, did I forget this?"

He placed his fingers to his ears and apologized once again as my mother smiled and shook her head.

I watched as she walked towards RK.

He bent to take her blessings for the first time.

I couldn't help but let a huge smile cross my face.

Then they hugged.

They hugged!

I pinched myself to make sure I wasn't dreaming.

"Ouch!"

Both their eyes turned to face me as I rubbed at my arm.

I looked at them and smiled sheepishly.

"I thought I was dreaming."

RK chuckled along with my mother.

Ma turned to face RK and she began talking to him.

"Beta...I just wanted to thank you..."

"No, what? There's no reason to thank me sasuma!"

"Chup, you don't interrupt elders!"

I walked towards them. I placed my head upon ma's shoulder and then listened to her continue as I stared at RK.

"If you didn't enter my daughter's life...I probably would've lost her. I know why she fought. She fought for you. She survived for you. She made it through this because of you RK. You helped her survive. I have every reason to thank you."

I slowly faced my mother as tears formed in my eyes. I glanced towards RK and saw him staring at me with a loving look. Then he spoke to ma as he stared at me.

"Don't thank me. Please. All this happened because I love her...and she loves me."

I watched his smile cross his face, which took my breath away. Then he continued as he looked back towards ma.

"And we'd like to have a real, full marriage."

My eyes widened as I realized what RK just mentioned. I attempted to gesture towards him with my eyes, but it was too late. My mom caught on.

"Full marriage? Didn't you already..."

"Ma! He means..."

"Oh! I meant that Madhu and I want to get married with family present."

Phewf!

He managed to save us that time.

"Oh, that'd be wonderful RK, Madhu."

"Yeah ma! Where's papa by the way?"

"Oh, he was busy with some background shooting."

"Bring papa next time!"

"Well, now that I just received good news, next time will be at yours and RK's wedding! Understand?"

RK and I stared at each other. I felt blush filling my cheeks as I lowered my eyelids to the ground.

But I didn't want to start a relationship based on lies.

It's time we should tell ma and papa the truth about the beginning of our relationship, I remember thinking to myself as I blushed away.

Edited by PrittB - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
R u going 2 update Forever yearning ? I m eagerly w8ing fr that.
Fr this update Lemme read 1st 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: colorsluv

R u going 2 update Forever yearning ? I m eagerly w8ing fr that.
Fr this update Lemme read 1st 😆


Just updated 3 of 4 FFs!
I had classes all day, its 3am, can't keep my eyes open 😆 so I decided I'll update Forever Yearning as soon as I wake up and finish writing it! 👍🏼

Then I'll send out PMs as well!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: PrittB


Just updated 3 of 4 FFs!
I had classes all day, its 3am, can't keep my eyes open 😆 so I decided I'll update Forever Yearning as soon as I wake up and finish writing it! 👍🏼

Then I'll send out PMs as well!

No worries will be wait. Loved this update.😛
Now sleep properly 😆

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