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Posted: 12 years ago
#81
Friends me very sad with the decreasing of likes and comments. Even after updating almost daily also.. well tell me if you are not liking the story, i will finish it off soon. But my regular readers dont worry i will update for you guys 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
lovely update

Maan dreaming abt his Mishty

Maan going to London to complete his last sem

waiting for Maaneet meet

Precap -- hope Maan save Geet from any danger
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Posted: 12 years ago
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will be waiting di!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: chinni10

Friends me very sad with the decreasing of likes and comments. Even after updating almost daily also.. well tell me if you are not liking the story, i will finish it off soon. But my regular readers dont worry i will update for you guys 😊


Nooo, why are u ending such a good story? It's unfair... It has a lots of potentials, it's unfair 😭

It's one of the best stories I read IF, but u just ruined it, ppl r waiting for Maaneet' loves torn begin, iseliye maybe they don't click like... I clicked like...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Zee_News


Nooo, why are u ending such a good story? It's unfair... It has a lots of potentials, it's unfair 😭

It's one of the best stories I read IF, but u just ruined it, ppl r waiting for Maaneet' loves torn begin, iseliye maybe they don't click like... I clicked like...


Hii Zee, i am not at all ending this one. Its my Fav ff and i dont dare to end it soon 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: chinni10


Hii Zee, i am not at all ending this one. Its my Fav ff and i dont dare to end it soon 😊


It's one of my favourites too, plz don't end it...


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Posted: 12 years ago
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will be waiting... will maaneet meet tonite???
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: chinni10


Hii Zee, i am not at all ending this one. Its my Fav ff and i dont dare to end it soon 😊


Wohi di dare u end it
i love hpl 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 23


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Karan is still in a fix what to do? One side he want to go to London and meet his sister, beg her to believe him, and tell her he is not like their father. But he also knows gaining her trust on him is not that easy. More than him geet has suffered, she lost her mother at a very tender age. When everything was going well she came to know the real face of her father. No one was there with her at that time, she was alone. She cried, screamed for her mother. How can she come? But how can a mother leave her child too, her blessings will be always with her. May be because of her blessings Raichand's came in geet's life as a ray of hope. After so many hurdles she is again stable in her life, but will she be the same when she comes to know who karan is? Will she be the same geet when she comes to know maan hid it from her? The trust she has on maan will be there still even after knowing the truth? Will maan be able to gain her trust? What will be geet's reaction in all this?

Adi and Aparna were shocked after knowing the truth. One side aparna is happy and other side she is tensed too. She loves karan, but karan is in pain. She also knows geet through maan. Geet is not that easy to be handled. "No aparna, don't loose hope. Problems will be solved soon. Don't worry, everything will be fine" thought aparna and got busy in her classes. Karan is not able to concentrate on anything. Evening after classes they met principal sir who is very happy for their success.

"I am very proud of you 4. You did a great job, now you got a chance to study in London university for a sem. If they like your performance even there. Then you may get chance to do your internship. So work hard and all the best" appreciated principal. "Thank you sir" told all the 4 in unison, smile playing on their lips. the most happy and excited soul is maan. One he worked very hard for this exam and he finally cracked it. Two he is gonna meet his mishty after 6 long years. The most confused soul is karan. But he don't want to miss this chance for 2 reasons. One his career will be smooth if he goes there and two he can try several ways to convince geet. Aparna and adi are very happy. Appu even convinced her family, but they had to take loan to her flight tickets and other needs.


In London:


Next day morning in college in basket ball court. The 2 teams are ready to play. Geet is cheering them up, after coming to London she never played basket ball, though its her fav game. If she play then her thoughts will go to maan and want to meet him, again she will be depressed thinking all those old memories. "Abay and sam, better play or else you both are gone" warned geet. More than the opponent team they are scared of geet. "Geet for heavens sake don't scare us. One you don't know how to play but also you will bet" cribbed abay. Poor he is thinking geet don't know how to play. Geet gave her famous glare to him which made him shut and go to the ground.

2 teams are ready to play, the game started (I am not going deep into the game). 2 teams are playing with equal zeal. Opponents are playing to show geet her place and geet's team is playing to show their power. Goal after goal, goal after goal. Finally only 2 minutes is left and both the teams are having equal points. Geet is not worried, she knows their team will win. But abay and sam are worried, if they lose don't know what will they do with geet. Thinking something happening to geet made their blood boil and GOAL. 2 minutes completed and and and geet's team won the match. Geet jumped in joy and ran towards the ground. She hugged abay and sam tight. They too hugged her tight kissing her cheek.

Amit is burning with anger, he lost the match. His all plans flopped. Now he cant take revenge on geet, he lusts her and want her in bed. But geet is not that weak to fall in his traps. Geet came out of the hug smirking at amit who is glaring at her with his lustful eyes. She felt disgusted with his gaze. She want to just kill him then and there. Winning group went towards amit and smirked.

"Tch tch tch, guys yesterday someone told we will see who will win the match" taunted geet. All of them laughed. "So guys what is their punishment" asked geet to others. "Do whatever you want I don't care" told geet and left from there. "If you ever try to go near geet then'." Left abay and sam in the mid giving him a warning glare. "If we ever see you teasing a girl, then you will be out of this college. This is your punishment we cant even complain about this to principal as your studies and career will be spoiled. So better behave yourselves" warned the other seniors and left from there leaving a angry and burning amit there. "Geet, this is all happening because of you. Let me see, you will be soon under me on my bed" smirked amit and left from there.

Here geet is not in her mood, she is missing maan badly today. Mainly after the match, she remembered all those memories when they both used to play. When she pouts when he used make a goal and tease her. Her winning smile when she won on him. The chocolate he use to give her for her every success. She felt all alone today again. Some how the day passed. Its evening and no one is there in the college. Abay and sam are in library. Geet went to basket ball court and made sure that no one is there. She took the ball and started playing all alone. She is vigorously playing. After some time abay and sam are coming in search of geet. They searched in the whole college but didn't find her. Finally thought of searching her in ground as expected she was there. But what shocked them was seeing geet playing BB which they don't know she can play, that too so vigorously.

Geet lost all her energy but still she is playing. She is taking all her anger out on her dad in that game. She is taking all her pain in the game. Her eyes are red because of anger and pain. tears were treathening to come out but she is not allowing. She is totally exhausted, tired, no energy is left in her body. She throwed the ball aside with a force falling down on her knees. For the first time after that night she is feeling helpless.

"MAA'. MAAN" screamed geet on top of her lungs. Abay and sam who are watching geet are shocked. Abay is feeling her pain as he knows the truth about geet. Sam was about to go to geet but abay stopped him. "No sam, let her cry take out her pain which she bottled up from years" told abay. He don't know why but dialed maan's numbers knowing he is disturbing him as it will be late night there.


In KM:


When geet screamed, maan got up at once feeling restless. He rubbed his temple feeling odd. "Geet" whispered maan automatically. At the same time his mobile rang, he looked at the caller id. "Hello abay" answered maan. "Maan bhai" "Is geet fine?" asked maan immediately. Abay smiled a little, maan can heard geet's sobs. He closed his eyes in pain. "See bhai, she is missing you. Bhai please come soon, even we all are there with her but she needs only you bhai. She needs you bhai" told abay. "Abay, I am coming to London next week. But now I wont delay, I will try to book flight tickets for tomorrow" told maan. "really bhai? Thank you so much" told abay feeling happy. "Don't tell geet about it" told maan. "No way bhai, I wont. It will be a sweet surprise for her" told abay smiling.

After some time geet composed herself, wiped her tears. Abay cut the call seeing geet coming towards them. The most confused soul there is bechara sam. He don't know why geet is behaving like that. "Who is this new character maan" thought sam and decided to shoot abay his questions later.

That night maan didn't allow anyone to sleep. He told they got a call from university that they should join with in 2 days. And all of them believed as maan never lies, but he did for his mishty. Raghu arranged flight tickets for all the 4 and maan called everyone to pack their things as their flight is early morning. here pooja is cribbing. "Today only we came to know, cant they give some time. Babaji, I didn't prepare anything for maan. how will he manage alone in alone" cribbed pooja. There maan and raghu are staring at her with a small smile on their lips. pooja completed maan's packing. While only 2 hours left for maan to leave. Vicky and annie entered in maan's room.

"Bro" called both. Maan looked at them and smiled. "Come soon bro" told annie and hugged. Maan too hugged his baby sister and kissed her head. "Yes princess I will come soon" told maan. "Bro tell your mishty atleast to call me once. What does she think of herself ha, does she even know that her friend is waiting for her" asked Vicky with a stern voice. Maan looked at him surprised. "I know that you know where is geet, so don't act in front of me bro. I am also a Khurana, not so intelligent than you but" told Vicky.

"Ask geet to once talk to me bro" told Vicky. Maan smiled at his brother and hugged him. "Sure Vicky I will" told maan. They talked for sometime and its time for maan to leave. Thought pooja and dadi are emotional but didn't show as they are happy for her son. They drove to airport and soon reached.

Maan saw his friends too came at the same time. All are so excited. They all bid good bye to their parents and boarded the flight. All this happened in just just few hours that still maan is not able to believe he is really going to London. For every passing second maan's smile is broadening. He closed his eyes, but time is going very slow for him. "Flights are too late. It is taking so many hours to reach London" cribbed maan.

Its actually next day evening in London. Geet again came to normal and her gunda garzi is back. Abay and sam are happy to see her normal. She is feeling a strange happiness inside her, she is feeling relaxed, she is smiling unnecessarily. Here finally maan and his gang reached London. Its afternoon but none of them is tired. Raghu already arranged guest house for all the 4 near the university. When maan kept his step in London airport, geet felt a strange happiness.

"Maan" whispered geet unknown to herself. "Jhalli, now a days you are thinking about maan so much. Dekho na babaji, dhust dhanav ne 2 days se call hi nahi kiya" cribbed geet looking up. "Yaar for babaji's sake stop complaining to him" told an annoyed sam. "Chup kar tu. And I am hungry, chalo we will go to canteen" scolded geet. "Please geet, lets have lunch here only. Don't know again with whom you will fight" teased sam. Geet gave her famous angry glare.

They 3 went to canteen and got busy having their lunch. Here maan and his gang reached guest house and settled in their rooms. They freshened and had lunch together in near by restaurant. "Yaar, once we will go to uni and come" asked aparna. "Appu yaar we just came now. Let us rest" told adi. "Ohoo adi, you have whole day to rest. Please yaar" requested appu. Architecture and medicine is in the same campus. All of them agreed and headed towards uni in the car.

Here trio completed their lunch. Sam is smiling foolishly seeing his mobile. Geet and abay are observing it from long but kept quiet.

Uni is very near from their guest house so within 10 min they reached uni. All are awed to see the interiors of the uni.

"Sam, who is that?" asked geet. "Who? No one" told sam and is putting his mobile in his pocket. But devil geet snatched his mobile and sticked her tongue out. Abay smiled at them.

Maan and his gang are busy in seeing uni, they are going from one class to another. Maan is feeling his mishty is very near to him.

Geet who is feeling happy from morning, now she her heart beat is fast. But she shrugged and is teasing sam. Sam is chasing geet trying to take his mobile from her. She is running seeing back. And abay is truly enjoying their tom and jerry fight.

Maan and his gang are walking in the same corridor where geet is present.

Geet is running towards maan.

Maan is walking towards geet.

Sam is chasing geet.

Maan is talking to their gang not looking in front.

Geet came running without seeing in front.

Precap: 😆


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Ok friends, here is part 23. How is it?? 😕


Come on jaldi jaldi give me likes and long comments. 😳 😊


Love

Chinni



Edited by chinni10 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yeeepppiii me 1stt...
awesome update as alwaysss...
loved it...
really love to see geet expressions seeing maan...
thanx fr the pm...
Edited by rupzloveu - 12 years ago

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