CINDRELLLA STORY (rajat tokas mugdha chapekar)RTMC FF PT22 updating-73 - Page 39

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PART 17

Previously=Only seema & ananya were there,seema served ananya, seema went to attend the door as a servant came to announce someone's arrival.

Ananya had lost her appetite.

PART 18

haven't proof read so mistakes r likely

Ananya had lost her appetite. She was getting off the chair to go to her room when she came across the pleasant smiling face of her nanny (MRS D'SOUZA). But the smile vanished as she eyed ananya's face.

Nanny knew ananya since ananya's childhood. So it didn't miss mrs d'souza's eye that something was up . but firstly she made sure that ananya had her breakfast.

After making sure that some food had gone into ananya's system. She asked ananya's what was wrong. But ananya dodged by inquiring abt nanny's life . Mrs d'souza told her that she is being living with her sister and told annaya her daily routine. Nanny again poked the question. But annaya comforted her by telling that she is just tired and also added that she had been to SILVASSA with Veer , and what good time she spend there and ananya told her about komal , how komal took care of her. All in all good thing minus the bad one. Ananya made sure that nanny had no doubt the she is happy .

When it was time to leave, nanny slid a small velvet box towards ananya , when annaya opened it , her eyes fell on her mother's locket which she had left at her stepmom's house. Ananya gave a 100 volts smile .

She gave Mrs d'souza a tight hug n said,"oh thank u . for getting it back"

Nanny was relieved seeing ananya's face glimmer with true happiness.

All 'persuasion ' she had to do to retrive ananya's belonging from naintara (stepmom) greedy hands, but as mrs d'souza gave threat to take matters to police for the way the evil trio treated Mrs d'souza when ananya had left home, Naintara (stepmom)had to give in .

Naintara went upstairs angrily and shoved ananya's mom's necklace in Mrs d'souza's hand .

To Mrs d'souza's surprise Naintara also handed ananya's treasure box to her even though she only asked for the necklace, ,

The treasure box which ananya used to keep her things since she was a kid. The contents of the box varied through years from ananya's favourite toys ,her dolls , her books etc. the servant brought in the box ,it was like a trunk but bit smaller ,with 'Ananya' bedazzled on it with in pink glitter

The servant placed the white box beside the dining table. When the servant was bringing box from the main door. Piyu's eye caught it ,being curious and fascinated she followed him . But piyu stood outside the room as the servant placed the box near ananya's chair. Piyu was peeping curious to know what was in the box.

Ananya was doubly excited when she saw the box , got on her knees to check out the contents . flipped opened the cover.

First she retrieved the Barbie doll ,dressed as Disney princess with blue glittery gown and her hair prim. The doll looked good as new.

Piyu eyes were shining with fascination seeing the doll and she blurted out "cindrella"

(this is gonna be piyu from now)

Ananya glanced up and saw piyu peeping ,ananya smiled and extended the doll towards her .

U want it,said ananya

Piyu nodded but didn't step forward.

Ananya knew she has yet to make her place in this house and in the hearts of the family members.

Ananya covered the box and placed the doll on it the said , "here u can have all my stuff"

Ananya hoped that this gesture may act as an olive branch between her and piyu.

Nanny saw ananya's effort to connect with piyu ,so she intervened and called the servant to take the box to piyu's room.

Picking up the doll ananya went towards piyu and knelt at a arm length from piyu and extended her hand .

"here piyu , will u be cindrella's new friend?"

Piyu looked expectantly . but didn't pursue the offer.

Ananya said "plz she needs a friend"

Piyu took the doll ,hugged it and replied smiling ," ok I'll be her friend"

Ananya smiled and extending her hand said "will u be mine too?"

Piyu looked at her , deciding wat to do.

But at same moment seema called her out for lunch and so piyu ran off, leaving ananya on her knees with her hand extended. Annaya 's face fell and she entwined her fingers on her lap. Nanny placed her hand on ananya;s shoulder ,and made her stand facing towards her, cupping her face ,she said "its ok anu ,it will be all fine".ananya nodded and hugged nanny

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A lone tear fell on veer's photo and slip down from the glass , ananya hugged veer's photo ,closing her eyes not letting anymore tears fall. Than she thought how veer took care of her in Silvasa and their time in the car & on the beach.

(meri-aashiqui female version)

Tu mujhe chhod jaaye

Yeh nahi ho sakta, saathiya

Meri baaton mein tera zikr sadaa

Meri yaad mein teri fikr sadaa

Main jo bhi hoon tum hi to ho

Mujhe tum se mili apni adaa

She wiped her tear. No she was not gonna be dishearten.

Tum hi ho, tum hi ho

Arz bhi, mera marz bhi

Chain bhi, mera dard bhi

Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho...

So what veer hasn't spoken to her in days, he must be busy,she thought. She won't give up. Today when he will be back they were definitely going to spend some time together.

She gingerly got off the bed ,she still was weak ,she had just rose from illness mere days ago. How she wished that she still was ill , atleast veer would had been by her side.

But she decided not to dwell on the thought; first she would have lunch which had been brought to her room a while ago. And than she would get ready get ready and wait for veer.

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Seema had put piyu for an afternoon nap after lunch. But sleep seemed a distant dream for the soon to be four year old. She just wasn't able to get a shut eye too much was on her mind. So many changes happened in few days. It was just that she was skeptic about veer's marriage ; skeptic pretty tough feeling for a little girl , it was just that she was unprepared even of the thought of losing veer to someone. Its not that she had grudge against ananya, possibility was low that of her even knowing the meaning of grudge .

But she was restless. And she can't even go outside to play in the afternoon. She was confined in her room.

So what to do... what to do...

She was bored with her toys .so she got of the bed and started rummaging through the box given to her by ananya.

Piyu had already placed Cindrella Barbie on her shelf ,she was going through rest of the stuff in her box.

She found a Rubik cube, kitchen set , a multicolor scarf , a bunch of kids story books. She already had all these stuff except Rubik cube ,she analyzed it wondering what do with it. She was soo bored; she had to do something else as even a afternoon nap seemed an ordeal with mind active. She dumped the Rubik cube in the box and got up when something caught her eye. She picked the small object it was a white bottle with label on it. She tried to read it . "S... Sl.. sleeping" yes she recognized the word from her fairytale book cover "sleeping beauty" . She continued reading "ta..tab...table..tablet". Suddenly her eyes glittered with a expression of 'eureka'

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"Chalo aaj ka quota toh shopping ka pura hua" Gia said to jenny , after both of them along with ria ,deposited themselves on the sofa tired after their shopping expedition. The shopping bags were crowded on the tea-table

Jenny was a friend of the wannabies, was just like them.

The servant brought in the refreshment, they were chilling talking about the upcoming 'Silver Jubilee Annual Ball'of the St.Teresa educational academy.

Jenny = plz meri toh kitni shopping baki hai. There so much to do and theme is not yet decided

Seema entered and said "agar ab tak theme decide nahi huyi hai toh tum log shopping kin cheezo ki kar rahe the"

Gia rolled her eyes and said "Mom shopping ke liye theme ki kya jarurat. Just have to buy whatever we like"

Seema- aur jab theme decide hogi toh phir se shopping mall pe raid kar renge aap log.

Ria- mom plz lecture nahi abhi. Bahar se Aaa rahi hai naa aap

Seema- haan main mummyji ke saath club ki meeting ke liye gayi thi.

Gia- we are not interested in your monologue of"how had I spend my day"

Seema knew better than to argue with her daughters who were brainless twits, "aacha baba jaa rahi hoon main. Main piyu ke evening snacks le ja rahi hoon tum logo ke liye bhi bhijwa deti hoon"

All she heard was a distracted "okk.."

As three of them got busy on their cell phones.

After seeing Veer's car entering the gates of 'Singh mansion' from her room's window and Ananya walked out of her room. She was so eager,excited ,anxious to see him. She had changed her clothes into a long sleeve top and long white cotton skirt, she had bunched her frizzy hair in a clip.

Jenny had her glass of lemonade to her mouth ,seeing ananya it went through wrong pipe of her throat causing her to cough. Gia and ria who were on the opposite sofa bend towards her .

Ria "u okay"

Jenny cleared her throat and to gia n ria's surprise she was controlling her laugh and said "whose that walking flowerpot"

Gia & ria eyed to the direction jenny was pointing they saw ananya at the far end crossing the hall.

Gia lips thinned & she gave short version of story mentioning only that ananya is heiress of "Khurrana industry " and now veer's wife.

Jenny's gaped , "u gotta be kidding. Ur chachu is soo handsome.and her!"

Ria ruefully said , "ya she doesn't have any fashion sense"

Jenny ... wat hell she is wearing.look at the top

Ria- I guess that's wat is called Fashion accident.

Gia- God! yeh top toh mere room ka pocha (wiping the floor) lagane ke liye hi qualify karta hai

Jenny- Gee, plz mere room ke dusters bhi isse better hote hai.

Oblivious to all the bitching of the wannabies ananya crossed the hall and went to the entrance passing the sitting room. But veer wasn't there.

ananya's top

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Seema placed the sandwiches and juice of the tray and turned from the kitchen counter and found her view blocked by veer. She smiled , "veer tum baitho main tumhare liye kuch bhijwati"

Veer was in his office attire with evening shadow on his jaws looking very handsome.

He said pointing at the tray "bhabhi piyu ke liye hai ?. Seema nodded . "Main le jata hoon" replied veer taking the tray with him

These pass days he hadn't able to pay proper attention to piyu.With so much going on. But whatever the matter was, his princess was being ignored. He extremely hated it.

He was frustrated with situation he was put into but that didn't mean his little girl had to suffer. He just couldn't bear to shoulder the blame of hurting another innocent.

He already was having hard time with Ananya. Enough! he was not gonna think about Ananya . How he had meticulously avoided her after the trip from Silvasa. The girl was hopeless and it absolutely wasn't her fault.

It wasn't her fault dat she was tormented by her stepmother and inorder to get away , married away to him ; who had got through the marriage to safeguard his family's interest.

AND on top of that Ananya was harboring a crush for him labeling it as 'love'

But he wasn't gonna think all this ; now he was gonna spend time with his princess piyu

Veer entered piyu rooms . it was a mess and his princess was curled in a ball on the bed, facing the wall. He placed the tray near by and walked towards the bed , nearly stumbling through the white box , he bend to keep it aside and was surprised to see Ananya's name on it. He smiled and thinking atleast ananya is making friends with piyu.

"piyu get up" he said placing the box aside. Even listening to his voice piyu did not stir.

Veer sat on the bed and patted piyu's back. She didn't even moved .he turned her. To his shock she was breathing but was very still.

His gaze fell on the bottle near her and his eyes widen reading the label on it . he let the bottle fall on the bed. And began his attempt to wake piyu. He patted her cheek calling out her name but no response.

He gathered piyu in his arm the walked towards the door.

Seema was shell shocked standing at the entrance of the room. "wat happened"

Veer responded with panic "don't know but there was bottle of sleeping pills on her bed"

Before seema could ask any question veer surpassed her.

Downstairs Annaya almost collided with veer ,she too was shocked seeing the sight and asked veer about it but veer just crossed the room and was outdoor.

Ananya ran towards the door. And saw veer getting in the car with piyu and the car drove off.

Ananya was rooted to her position in shock but then went upstairs to find out wat happened.

When she entered piyu room Seema and jaya (veer's mom) were staring at a bottle which seema was holding.

Seema- mujhe nahi pata mummyji ke ye piyu ke pass kaise aaya

Jaya- kaise nahi pata.

Ananya recognized the bottle, it were the pills which her stepmom have instructed her to take without fail warning her that if she won't take she will fall ill. Annaya had been taking them for years under the deception of it being medicine

Ananya said "yeh toh meri medicines hai"

Jaya 'kya!!!!!!! (she continued schooling her anger) Yeh piyu pass kaise aayi

Ananya eyes misted- kya piyu ne yeh goliyain khayi

Seema consoled her- ananya rona mat. Yeh yaha kaise aayi. Tum ne piyu ko di?

Annaya (her voice wobbling)- nahi maine toh usse apna treasure bo'..

Suddenly recollecting something. She covered her hand over her mouth and a sob broke.

Seema-kya ananya .?..bolo

Annaya (swallowing hard said)= maine piyu ko apna toy box diya tha mujhe nahi pata tha ke usme meri tablets thi

And she covered her face and started crying and apologizing.

Jaya told ananya not to blame herself and instructed seema to take ananya to her room and jaya was tense about how veer would react and prayed that piyu would be fine.

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Veer was feeling like he just had a trip from hell. Even when he got piyu to the hospital then also, he could taste the fear. The feeling was horrible like someone just put a knife in his gut.

After six hours Doctors assured him that piyu was fine though she had 4 tablets but they won't have any lasting affect only that she would be unconscious or say sleeping for 18 hours or so. But then to he just was not able to get the dreadful feeling of losing piyu outside his system.

Ananya was restless in her bed ,she had been crying hours ago but seema informed her that everything is fine and piyu is ok. But ananya was not able to shook off the guilty feeling. It was her fault she thought that piyu was in such a state. She had to apologize to veer and making the resolution she tried to get off the bed. But seema stopped her when she entered room with the dinner tray. Ananya told her she wants to see veer or atleast phone him. But seema told her that veer must be busy with piyu.and skillfully dodged any further arguments and made ananya have dinner, promising her that first thing in the morning she will take ananya to veer.

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At the hospital veer was sitting by piyu's bed ,the thought losing her gave him a fright of life. Jaya placed a hand on veer's shoulder and consoled him

Veer getting emotional , hugged his mom .finally when he had his emotions under control; he asked her , "how did piyu got the pills"

Jaya hesitated but veer was persistent.

Finally she opened her mouth , "veer u r not gonna act rashly. It was circumstantial mistake. no one's fault "

Veer= mom tell me the truth

At last jaya told him that the meds belonged to ananya but also stressed that ananya didn't do anything purposely.

But veer held his palm out to gesture her to not talk any further.

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Next morning when piyu scuttled through the driveway after getting out of the car. No one could tell that she had a overnight stay at the hospital .veer told her to slow down but she was already inside.

Everyone hugged Piyu. Entire family was gathered in the drawing room.and everyone was fussing over piyu. Piyu had no idea of the magnitude of the ordeal she had put the family into, through the night.

Ananya was peeping standing in other room,she couldn't summon the courage to interrupt in their family time.she felt like an outsider.

Gia carelessly asked piyu , "So that wacko got u ill"

Seema eyed gia to shut up.

Piyu-ill (said piyu confusedly).I just couldn't sleep. So I took the pills

Veer intervened "piyu go to your room we have to leave soon".

Ananya frowned

But piyu dashed upstairs to her room. When veer was about to leave the room jaya caught his arm and pleaded him , "aisa mat karo veer"

Veer- mom mera faisla ab nahi badlega.yaha baat piyu ki hai toh aap jante hai .uske liye main kis haad tak jaa sakta hoon

And he left the room

Ananya was standing outside veer's room and gathering the courage, she knocked.veer replied "come in"

She slowly pushed door open and was surprised to see veer had a bag on his bed and was packing his clothes. Seeing ananya veer tensed but he didn't stop wat he was doing. Ananya stood in front of him ,with bed separating them.

She found her voice and asked him , "Veer I m sorry.Agar mujhe pata hota ke mere meds us box mein hai toh main piyu woh kabhi nahi deti. "

Veer didn't look at her , "ananya plz mujhe iss bare mein koi baat nahi karni" and he went towards the drawer to get more things. His back towards her .

"veer sorry plz meri taraf dekho" saying she moved towards him. Veer took a deep breathe and got his head together and turned with neutral expression on his face and said "ananya plz jao mujhe packing karne do"

And he got back to wat he was doing earlier; again not facing her.

Ananya was hurt by his indifference but thought she deserved it.She again tried to talk to him, "veer plz meri taraf dekho. Chaho toh mujhpe chilao ,sazza do mujhe par aise chup mat raho"

But veer didn't respond, shouldering the bag he turned to leave.

Getting desperate ananya clutched her hands to veer's shoulders

"veer plz" she said with tears prickling at the back of her eyes.

Belatedly realizing the fact that he was going somewhere, she asked being alarmed

"veer tum kaha jaa rahe ho"

Sighing veer unload the bag from his shoulder to the floor but still clutching it.

He looked in her eyes filled with sorrow"ananya main piyu ko leke farmhouse jaa raha hoon... Hamesha ke liye"

Listening to this she lost it and tears began to flow, she held on to him more tightly.

"plz veer meri galti ki mujhe itni badi sazaa mat do. Plz mujhe chod ke mat jao" and she hugged him tightly.With an effort veer freed himself from her , her face was tear stained ;with still fresh tears falling .

"ananya isme tumhari koi galti nahi. I just cannot continue this excuse of marriage anymore"

A "kya keh rahe ho tum"

V"ananya I want a divorce"

Her voice wobbled"divorce"

Veer tried to explain her "Ananya, I'm sorry , main tumhe bata nahi sakta main kitna sharminda. But I cannot continue this pretence of marriage anymore ;Inorder to save my family business , I cannot put my daughter's life at stake. I'm sorry . I will transfer all the funds provided Khuraana industries to Singh enterprise back to your account"

Ananya was shell shocked after getting to know the real nature of their marriage from him .

Without saying anymore veer left.

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finish😃

finally maine complete kiya. plz dosto tell me how was it coz written after a long time😊

internet bohot pareshani de raha hai aajkaldats why not being able to b active on IF

PART-19

di...aapke liye bhi ek scene likha h meine!-

a girl- wid internal beauty and brain- and cute face was sitting on her computer starting to read the comment her little sister had typed for her, wid lots of lov...

"dddiii..."- this scream fills the environmental air around...and undoubted brings the heart of the gal sitting on computer to her throat for expulsion...

but evn before the screamer comes and clasps the computer gal and certainly not letting her heart be puked out...

..the screamer is not not not at all ready to leave her didi...itni jurr se padak rakha h ki kabhi chodegi hi nahi...

JAADU KI EKDUM STRONG WALI JHAPPI...

batao ye story kiski h/???

- samjhdaar ko tho ishara kaafi h...ofcorse meri n aapki...

haan vo dosari baat h ki hum abi actually ye nhi kerr rhe- n i m nt really hugging u- but scn read kerke aap feel..AHASAAS tho le hi lo...

ananya- she is the cutest being god had made- beshakki m vry well aware dat she dosent luk good...wid all effects of meds n all...but still- the way u successfully describe her inner beauty- she is the most enticing charcter of this story-...muje veer ka handsome description bhi itna strike nhi kerta jitna ananya k gestures acts n uski thnking kerti h...she is so soft...

but it certainly doesnt mean dat wen u r writing abt veer- u r not gud- u are- but mei kyaa kruu...mere dil ananya k hi paas h !...

vo kyaa h na- usko bhi ek dil ki jururat h na- coz uska dil tho veer ke pas h...so meine usse apna dil diya h...

dont very it eats vry ncely- and pumps blood even being crushed many times...((murat abhi tak nhi aaye h- phirr bhi heart chall rha h)

treasure box scn- beautiful...ananya n piyu ka scn..

arrey ye piyu tho choti wali chandini h naa1???

badi shoni h... i liked her...

((i m seriously enjoying ur changing face widout any plastic surgery like ekta kapoor...dont mind haa di!.

jia n ria...ye kamm the jo ek aur antic antique piece utha k laaye h aapne jaisa...- jenny!...

beevkoof ladki...

flowerpot- yes...vaise hi hona chahiye ladkiyon ko mahakta hoaa...saaja hoa...

n by the way i like her top.- so u better shut up miss jenny-...

miss jeeny ki kiddmatt mei ek shairiii-... ((irshaad irshaad)-

miss jenny miss jenny...

oookaad nahi tumhari of single penny..

be-dimag ho ladki tum,..

beakal wid kharab shakal package ho tum...

wah wah wah!...

ohooo! ye bache bhi kuch bhi toffe jaisa mila nhi k khaa liyaa...but chalo isne tho sleeping tablet padker k tha...

agr koi bada kerta na ye tho mei kahti- kyaa padha likha upadh h!

seema was nice!...

ananya kina pyaar se wait kerti h na veer kaa!!...itna patience h usme...patience ki saari parakasstha ko paar ker chuki h ananya ki pyaar ka intehaan!tum hi ho song...

iss song ka male version kab ayega iss ff per...waiting...

veer aaya- great n he is no more thinking abt ananya--- yeaa yeaa i can see vry well.

god inna bada syaappaaa kyu kittthaa tussi!...

haayee!! baat divorce takk aagyi...

di aapko ek aur baari thnku thnku thnku- to chse hindi in emotional scene- kyaa h na- muje emotional scns hindi mei hi pdne psnd h- dialogues mei jaan aa jati h..i lov den dat way!- isliye DD n swash bhi hindi mei hi bolte h in emotional scns...

hum indian ko chainn nhi padta bina hindi k /// kyu???

ananya ka dia- muje itni badi saaza maat do- bollywood jhalak rha h...superb it is...

divorce- jitna bada jhtkaa ananya ko laga h naa- usese bass thoda hikaam muje laga h...

but is heart attack nhi pada muje- coz i told u na heart mera ananya k paas h...

usse bhi nhi padega- coz mera heart thoda strong h...

really badlly madly luking for next update di...

plzz mahrebaani kroo..aapni poori chotiiyaan aapne n aapke internet ne chaaba khaai...

ab jaldi jaldi update do..

legally in lov ka bhi sri ganesh kerwa do...chinta maatt kroo- paise nhi lagenge- free ka pandit mei bijhwa dungi- aap baas likhna start kro..

ok di...bbye...

mei soch rhi hu ki kuch mei bhi likh lun...egl n lss...

bbye!...

ananya- mei hu tumhare saath- abhi vo tuut gyi h na- so jo meine aapke saath first kiya tha na- hug...wahi ditto ananya ko bhi...

awesome update...piyu is super cute...

Originally posted by: soniaparte90794

thnks di for nice upd
i read ur story it is totaly diffenent and interesting
i like ur concept
ur amazing writer
upd soon di luv u 😊
muhaaa...

thanksss sooo much dear 4 giving this ff a try

glad dat u liked it

Originally posted by: jdots

awesome update...piyu is super cute...

thanks dear

happy dat i liked it

awww already res kar diya tum logo ne

luv u guys😊

Originally posted by: pranita1202

awww already res kar diya tum logo ne

luv u guys😊

we too luv u
bt ab toh ud do jaldi
or kitna wait karna padega hum bechare readers ko