CINDRELLLA STORY (rajat tokas mugdha chapekar)RTMC FF PT22 updating-73 - Page 41

JAAG GAYI JAAG GAYI...HEY BHAGWAN HUMARI PARI JAAG GAYI N USE YAAD A GAYA KI USE UPDATE BHI KARNA H, THANK U
too good...but yaar ye ria n gia kam thi jo ye jenny bhi group main shamil ho gayi...B!TCH...
n that was so bad , poor anu thought to be friend with pihu but sab bekar ho gaya
thank god pihu was safe, otherwise what veer would have done...
poor anu, i m really feeling sry for her...finally he told her about their marriage...
what will happen now?????????
update soon... (plz thoda jaldi)...
luv u... :-)

wil edit mine- vry soon...

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Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

di...aapke liye bhi ek scene likha h meine!-

a girl- wid internal beauty and brain- and cute face was sitting on her computer starting to read the comment her little sister had typed for her, wid lots of lov...

"dddiii..."- this scream fills the environmental air around...and undoubted brings the heart of the gal sitting on computer to her throat for expulsion...

but evn before the screamer comes and clasps the computer gal and certainly not letting her heart be puked out...

..the screamer is not not not at all ready to leave her didi...itni jurr se padak rakha h ki kabhi chodegi hi nahi...

JAADU KI EKDUM STRONG WALI JHAPPI...

batao ye story kiski h/???

- samjhdaar ko tho ishara kaafi h...ofcorse meri n aapki...

haan vo dosari baat h ki hum abi actually ye nhi kerr rhe- n i m nt really hugging u- but scn read kerke aap feel..AHASAAS tho le hi lo...

AWWW

ananya- she is the cutest being god had made- beshakki m vry well aware dat she dosent luk good...wid all effects of meds n all...but still- the way u successfully describe her inner beauty- she is the most enticing charcter of this story-...muje veer ka handsome description bhi itna strike nhi kerta jitna ananya k gestures acts n uski thnking kerti h...she is so soft...

but it certainly doesnt mean dat wen u r writing abt veer- u r not gud- u are- but mei kyaa kruu...mere dil ananya k hi paas h !...

aww thats the biggest compliment🤗

thank u sooo much 4 loving ananya😊

vo kyaa h na- usko bhi ek dil ki jururat h na- coz uska dil tho veer ke pas h...so meine usse apna dil diya h...

don't worry veer ka heart bhi ananya ka jarur ho jayega.

dont very it eats vry ncely- and pumps blood even being crushed many times...((murat abhi tak nhi aaye h- phirr bhi heart chall rha h) 👏 👏 kya baat kahi

treasure box scn- beautiful...ananya n piyu ka scn..

arrey ye piyu tho choti wali chandini h naa1???

badi shoni h... i liked her...

((i m seriously enjoying ur changing face widout any plastic surgery like ekta kapoor...dont mind haa di!.

lol . finally i found perfect piyu. kabse dhundh rahi thi.

mili toh hamari chandni ka chota version😆

jia n ria...ye kamm the jo ek aur antic antique piece utha k laaye h aapne jaisa...- jenny!...

beevkoof ladki...

flowerpot- yes...vaise hi hona chahiye ladkiyon ko mahakta hoaa...saaja hoa...

n by the way i like her top.- so u better shut up miss jenny-...

in wannabes ki vaat lagagi ,annual ball ke din jab humari princess ko dekhenge. but 3 months r there till ball. tab tak itna udna hai ude ye wannnabes .baad mein mazza ayega😈

miss jeeny ki kiddmatt mei ek shairiii-... ((irshaad irshaad)-

miss jenny miss jenny...

oookaad nahi tumhari of single penny..

be-dimag ho ladki tum,..

beakal wid kharab shakal package ho tum...

wah wah wah!...

wah wah double wah. jenny kar rahi hai party coz aapne usse apni shayari ke layak samjha🥳

ohooo! ye bache bhi kuch bhi toffe jaisa mila nhi k khaa liyaa...but chalo isne tho sleeping tablet padker k tha...

agr koi bada kerta na ye tho mei kahti- kyaa padha likha upadh h! . kya kare bache toh bache hai

seema was nice!...

ananya kina pyaar se wait kerti h na veer kaa!!...itna patience h usme...patience ki saari parakasstha ko paar ker chuki h ananya ki pyaar ka intehaan!tum hi ho song...

our ananya is best

iss song ka male version kab ayega iss ff per...waiting... aayega aayega

veer aaya- great n he is no more thinking abt ananya--- yeaa yeaa i can see vry well.

god inna bada syaappaaa kyu kittthaa tussi!...

haayee!! baat divorce takk aagyi... akkal ghass charne gayi hai naa veer ki. isse mein itna pareshan karnewali hoon naa jab yeh pyaar mein padega 😈

di aapko ek aur baari thnku thnku thnku- to chse hindi in emotional scene- kyaa h na- muje emotional scns hindi mei hi pdne psnd h- dialogues mei jaan aa jati h..i lov den dat way!- isliye DD n swash bhi hindi mei hi bolte h in emotional scns...

hum indian ko chainn nhi padta bina hindi k /// kyu???

ananya ka dia- muje itni badi saaza maat do- bollywood jhalak rha h...superb it is...

yup emotional wale scenes mein toh hindi banti hai

divorce- jitna bada jhtkaa ananya ko laga h naa- usese bass thoda hikaam muje laga h...

but is heart attack nhi pada muje- coz i told u na heart mera ananya k paas h...

usse bhi nhi padega- coz mera heart thoda strong h...

WAH KYA LOGIC HAI

really badlly madly luking for next update di...

plzz mahrebaani kroo..aapni poori chotiiyaan aapne n aapke internet ne chaaba khaai...

ab jaldi jaldi update do..

legally in lov ka bhi sri ganesh kerwa do...chinta maatt kroo- paise nhi lagenge- free ka pandit mei bijhwa dungi- aap baas likhna start kro..

already kaam pe lag gayi hoon cindy ko jaldi update karne ke liye

ok di...bbye...

mei soch rhi hu ki kuch mei bhi likh lun...egl n lss...

bbye!...

ananya- mei hu tumhare saath- abhi vo tuut gyi h na- so jo meine aapke saath first kiya tha na- hug...wahi ditto ananya ko bhi...

to anu , from rashu

Originally posted by: Amor.

awesome part
luved it

thanks di love uuu

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Originally posted by: DantaDeepa

superb

keep it up

thanks deepa. muaah🤗

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Originally posted by: bhuvana3

Lovely story read all the parts and thoroughly enjoyed it. Do keep me posted when you update again !!

thanksss 4 trying it

glad u liked it

Originally posted by: shruja

thanks for update
sorry for late comment
awesome uddate!!
so they reached to haveli
our princess finally confessed her love for veer
but in this case our cindrella kissed prince vise versa!!
and veer going stone!!
gia n ria deciding party theme! awe poor pihu missing veer!
beautiful fb
ohh so he knew n remembered her!!
and their parents too wanted them together! just we want our rtmc
is tht plane crash only accident?
and feeling pity for veer
he is not considering anu's true love! its not physical intimacy but the care n safety u gave to her made her love u!
but u r considering tht false love as true
i think might child also not of veer and his father came to know tht and expired!!
poor anu had to went back without veer! thanks to komal who take care of her!
and veer is only finding reason to stay away from her! and unnoticed her after he written back! open ur eyes n see how much weak she grew in your love!
oho god ria n gia are too much!!
now who came?

thanksss shruja🤗

i know our ananya has heart of gold

ya veer is being impossible. but sudhar jayega

atleast he told komal to be there for anu

don't worry future sab soooper accha hoga

gia n ria r soo gonna fall face down in future. evill laugh😈

Originally posted by: princesspriyart

Di mujhe ye ria gia bilkul psnd nhi h 😡
judwa tapoli's 😡

anu ko jaldi thik kr do na
fir pta lgega in tapoliyo ko ki anu h beauty queen 😳

mujhe feel aa rhi h ki anu n piyu ka relation ab better ho jayega

luv u di 🤗

muaah priya love u

yeh ria n gia ka tension mat lo, aage dekho kya hota hai

our princess will be healthy n hearty soon

tab in donno ko pata chalega

Originally posted by: sultanahabeeb

Thoda thoda maine 18 chapter padha nd i liked it nd ise jaldi pora karo na plz

thnks dear

love uu

abhi complete kar diya hai . enjoy reading

Originally posted by: ashu1909

poor ananya feeling so bad for
her.hope she soon become a
strong girl.thanks for pm.do

continue soon

thanks ashu

don't worry good things will happen to good ppl

anu will come out as a winner

Originally posted by: Asyalover

OMG...I was feeling so hallow when i read the part where Piyu sees the Sleeping Pills...Thank YOU...she is safe...OH MY...Veer's gonna divorce...Ananya...i feel so terrible for her now...plzzz cont soon

glad that u liked it

i m working on next update

don't worry everything will b f9

muahh love uuu