CINDRELLLA STORY (rajat tokas mugdha chapekar)RTMC FF PT22 updating-73 - Page 38

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hoye hoye1 almost pora ud ws veeranya'

Aapko ek fact wali bat batati hu'muje na seriously ek dhemi dheemi tickling hoti h wen I read cindy story'kyu , vo pata nhi'but hoti h'

U knw, maine sikh liya h to extract the nector I want just from dis little little love blossom'

Veer n ananya seriously tho lov nhi karte h, but choti choti bate h wich makes me hapy'

Like, ananya darling ne kitna easily kah diya ki she lovs veer'veer ko bhi tully kardo..ho sakta h evn he says his heart'

And den, ek aur baat jo ki muje most imp. Baat lagi was- veer took few hours'matlab samjh jao'few hours..HOURS'in doing the heavy task of reslisng his hand from soft clutch of sleeping ananya'

Aisa kya magic ho gya veer k upar???...((agn dat tickling on heart))

Veer, patni h tumhari'now don't regret ki she can't lov u'

Niharika..naam acha h'but anu jyada acha h'n di u knw why??

Muje tho veer n ananya k beech vaise hi koi psnd nhi h'

He ws just 19 wen dey wer together'19 age hi kya hoti h'veer ws a bacha dat time..bache se nadani ho gyi niharika ko pyar karke'

Use lagta tha niharika was the ONE'isse bhi I call NADANI'.

But now veer is grown up, banda MD bann gya h'ab he is hoshiyaar'if now he loves someone((more precisely- ananya)) dat wil be his samjhdari'.

Di logic samjh aaya na aapko? Dekha kuch bhi karke'kahin se kuch bhi jod ker maine veer n anu love right prove ker diya h'

Rtmc k liye extra lenient..u knw dat., dats why veer and ananya ko bhi advantage h iss baat ka.

So, few yrs ago too, it ws not veer fault-'I think, dat niharika wud hav DOORE DAAL-ing on veer'hmm.

Veer, plz don't try to ignore our anu, it hurts her, n me too :'(

Itni saaf dil ki ladki- I mean jo dil mei h vo words mei h'wid such a pure heart- far frm any deceit kabhi nhi milegi'and ek aur baat, she is virgin at 19'not like niharika.((mean it or not'a/c to me its bekufi to hav S-X at age of 19..i sulk abt it, 'thodi aur Indian spirit mei bat karu tho I think niharika shud hav herself denied veer..yeah phirr ne kuch kiya hi nhi h, niharika is just dancing simply to hav his property.))

Next update mei di plz ek pihu and ananya scn chahiye'.in a little positive manner'

And kahin se ek scn aisa bhi tapak sakta h kya, jisme ananya snaps wannabies down.???

But pihu n ananaya ka relationship ko jyada weightage dena plz'.and veeranya scn tho jitney doge utne kam h mere liye.

maine ek bhi baar niha nhi likha...coz vo meri nhi h, like anu is ma darling...
Edited by sweetsanyo - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

Hoye hoye1 almost pora ud ws veeranya'

Aapko ek fact wali bat batati hu'muje na seriously ek dhemi dheemi tickling hoti h wen I read cindy story'kyu , vo pata nhi'but hoti h' awww best thing ever said to me🤗

U knw, maine sikh liya h to extract the nector I want just from dis little little love blossom'

Veer n ananya seriously tho lov nhi karte h, but choti choti bate h wich makes me hapy'

Like, ananya darling ne kitna easily kah diya ki she lovs veer'veer ko bhi tully kardo..ho sakta h evn he says his heart'

And den, ek aur baat jo ki muje most imp. Baat lagi was- veer took few hours'matlab samjh jao'few hours..HOURS'in doing the heavy task of reslisng his hand from soft clutch of sleeping ananya' ananya ke pyaar ke grip ka jaadu

Aisa kya magic ho gya veer k upar???...((agn dat tickling on heart)) aww

Veer, patni h tumhari'now don't regret ki she can't lov u'

Niharika..naam acha h'but anu jyada acha h'n di u knw why??

Muje tho veer n ananya k beech vaise hi koi psnd nhi h' east or west nanya is d best

He ws just 19 wen dey wer together'19 age hi kya hoti h'veer ws a bacha dat time..bache se nadani ho gyi niharika ko pyar karke'

Use lagta tha niharika was the ONE'isse bhi I call NADANI'. woh to hai

But now veer is grown up, banda MD bann gya h'ab he is hoshiyaar'if now he loves someone((more precisely- ananya)) dat wil be his samjhdari'.

Di logic samjh aaya na aapko? Dekha kuch bhi karke'kahin se kuch bhi jod ker maine veer n anu love right prove ker diya h'

Rtmc k liye extra lenient..u knw dat., dats why veer and ananya ko bhi advantage h iss baat ka.

So, few yrs ago too, it ws not veer fault-'I think, dat niharika wud hav DOORE DAAL-ing on veer'hmm.

Veer, plz don't try to ignore our anu, it hurts her, n me too :'( don't jab ananya ke peeche bhagna padega ,use patane ke liye tab mazza ayega

Itni saaf dil ki ladki- I mean jo dil mei h vo words mei h'wid such a pure heart- far frm any deceit kabhi nhi milegi'and ek aur baat, she is virgin at 19'not like niharika.((mean it or not'a/c to me its bekufi to hav S-X at age of 19..i sulk abt it, 'thodi aur Indian spirit mei bat karu tho I think niharika shud hav herself denied veer..yeah phirr ne kuch kiya hi nhi h, niharika is just dancing simply to hav his property.)) 🤣

Next update mei di plz ek pihu and ananya scn chahiye'.in a little positive manner'

And kahin se ek scn aisa bhi tapak sakta h kya, jisme ananya snaps wannabies down.???

But pihu n ananaya ka relationship ko jyada weightage dena plz'.and veeranya scn tho jitney doge utne kam h mere liye.

maine ek bhi baar niha nhi likha...coz vo meri nhi h, like anu is ma darling.. aww. aww. aww.


piyu ka scene sad wala hone wala

but i asssure u next update will final "sad" update actually isi update mein main finish karne wali thi , but it already stretched too long

gia n ria ko thapad, bechari masoom hai 😉

gia n ria ko bolo silver jublee event ki prepping start kardo😉 3 months remaining

competition win karna hai😆





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Posted: 12 years ago
arey baba its ok
huh!
Koi leg pulling bhi nhi karne deta
bt i loved the story

ananya my poor angel...i felt vry bad for her
bechari ne i love u bhi bol diya...fir veer itna ajeeb kyun behave kar rha h

bt i know bhot jaldi wo hone wala h jo mein chahti hun h na?

Loved ananya n veer

n yeah my sweetu baby pihu...loved her alot

love u too
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update pranita. poor ananya hope her suffering ends soon and she becomes more self confident .
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: tejjo

arey baba its ok
huh!
Koi leg pulling bhi nhi karne deta main bhi toh vahi kar rahi thi😆
bt i loved the story

ananya my poor angel...i felt vry bad for her hum sabki pyaari
bechari ne i love u bhi bol diya...fir veer itna ajeeb kyun behave kar rha h

bt i know bhot jaldi wo hone wala h jo mein chahti hun h na? yup

Loved ananya n veer

n yeah my sweetu baby pihu...loved her alot

love u too

thanks sweety 4 awesome comment

now sooper soon sadness is gonna end and never gonna cum back till long tym😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ashu1909

nice update pranita. poor ananya hope her suffering ends soon and she becomes more self confident .


thanks dear

don't worry she is gonna recover soon

we rock the world wid her self confidence😉


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Posted: 12 years ago
pranita:


baap re it's a huge update. ananya IS veer's wife now, so regardless of circumstamces veer ought to take care of her actively, passive actions and affections arent going to help, the sooner he realises this, the better for him, more so when he knows that ananya loves him wholeheartedly. update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: polly_03

pranita:



baap re it's a huge update. ananya IS veer's wife now, so regardless of circumstamces veer ought to take care of her actively, passive actions and affections arent going to help, the sooner he realises this, the better for him, more so when he knows that ananya loves him wholeheartedly. update soon.


thanks dear 4 the awesome comment

veer will get better wid tym😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: pranita1202

Hoye hoye1 almost pora ud ws veeranya'

Aapko ek fact wali bat batati hu'muje na seriously ek dhemi dheemi tickling hoti h wen I read cindy story'kyu , vo pata nhi'but hoti h' awww best thing ever said to me🤗



i always do best thing...
or else i dont do itself...(actually ye part aur bhi best hota h...lazy ladki mei)
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Posted: 12 years ago


thanks di

happy dat u liked it

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