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hai guys
i really want to write a os aboutour virman. And this storyis based on a malayalam telefilm"omanathinkal pakshi". Its really a nice serial guys.. If u guys want it pls let me know that. if u guys dont like, pls leave it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Pls continue.seems interesting.Would like to read it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Plz dear cont soon...love to read it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Plz do write and pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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uffcourse...do update soon n pm if possible...thnx in advance 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank u so much 4 ur lovely comments guys here is the cs of my story

maanvi choudhary:-daughter of a rich business man. educated. looking so beautiful & bubbly

vishnu :- maanvis lover, really he is a bad guy. but maanvi didnt know that

mr. Rakesh choudhari:- father of maanvi

karan&Aman:- brothers of maanvi

pinky :-a relative of vishnu

virat vadera:-a business man. he has a son& he is 1 month old. virat lost his wife maalathy after the birth of child

vanshika:- mother of virat & she is a widow

Arun:- brother of virat

Maya & Tanya :- sisters of virat

Robert & krish :-husbands of maya & tanya

Rahul & priya:- parents of maalathy

viren vadera:-family friend & childhood buddy of virat

Jeevika:-wife of viren

Dr.Swaminy:- aunty of virat, viren & other members,of vaderas

Here is my cs guys. U guys like it ? Can i continue this story? All ur comments r welcome.
Edited by silpasivan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved ur character sketch.HAppy to see that Maya or tanya are not Virat;s ex gf,😆 they are sisters .'

And loved Virat's characterization, father of a small baby.Interesting.


Loved it so much. pls continue soon and pls pm me wen u continue. thanks for the pm😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice character sketch
thanks for pm me
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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HI,
I AM JESMY. I THINK YOU ARE FROM KERALA AND I AM ALSO FROM KERALA. CONTINUE YOUR STORY AND PLZ.. PM ME.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Iam really sorry for the late update guys. Iam in hospital bcoz of my fever. Now iam alright. Here is the part1 guys. Pls read it & comment

PART 1

Maanvi is a daughter of big businessman Mr.Rakesh choudhari. She is a educated girl & looking so beautiful. She has two brothers. Karan and Aman. Maanvi is loved a guy named Vishnu. But her family decided to marry her with a another guy.
But the day before wedding, maanvi take all money and gold with her and runaway from her house with vishnu. But the vishnu was really a bad person . He just want to use her & want all her money & gold . They lived somedays together in happy. These days they lived in vishnus auntys house. His auntys name is Pinky. She is a long distance relative of vishnu. She loves maanvi very much. But vishnu is a cheter. He left maanvi alone in his aunties house & runaway from there with all her money & gold.
Maanvi is heartly brocked. Pinky loves her like own child. Maanvi is pregnent. One day pinky goes to maanvis house with maanvi. But maanvis family didnt accept her. They told her that they dont have a daughter like this. Pinky take maanvi with her & goes to her own house. Pinky love her very much &gave her a mothers love.

After 9month
Pinky sell some properties for maanvis hospital payment. Maanvi gave birth to a beautiful girl.
Maanvi dischaged from hospital. They came back pinkys house.
Maanvi like her child very much. Maanvi trying go for work. But she cant bcoz of the child. Pinky understand that the baby is a problem of maanvis future.
One nyt
Maanvi is trying to slept the baby.
Maanvi : oh, dear, pls sleep yaar. Iam very tired. I too want to sleep. First u sleep. Then i will sleep. Ok?
After sometime, they both slept in the bed. Thats time pinky came to the room.
Pinky : oh, god, pls 4geve me. I want to do this for maanvi. If the baby is always with her, she cant do anything in her future. So i really want to do this.
She take the baby with her. Maanvi didnt know that. She is very sleepy bcoz she is very tired.


Here is the pt1 guys. U guys like it. Can i continue this story? Pls comment.

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