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#71
part 31
nice part...
u know what am gonna really hit Maan...
why is he always blaming Geet?
cont soon dear...
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Part ' 32

That night'..

Geet : Neha, chalo, hum chalte hai

Dadi: lekhin Geet bte, hum haina?

Geet Dadi ki bimaari ki baat nahi karna chahathi'.

Dadi ko bhura lagtha toh?

Geet: Dadi mujhe Neha ke bina neendh hi nahi aathi

Dadi: kya?

Geet: upar se ye DD raat bar kaam karkke mujhe sonne hi nahi dethe

Dadi smiles'..hummara plan kaam kar raha hai'..

Dadi: ye toh bahut achchi baat hai, hum bhi toh yahi chahathe

Dadi Geet ko dekhkke smile karthi''

Geet: woh nahi'.office ka kaam

Geet looks disappointed'.

Dadi: kya? Maan bedroom mein office ka kaam karthe hai? aur kuch nahi? babaji ye mein kya sunrahi hoon?

Geet:aur kya? Haan! soothe haina, sirf mujhe sonne nahi dethe

Dadi: kya?

Geet: haan, agar Neha hothi toh bahar chale jaathe, hum bhi chaain se sosakthe, haina?

Dadi: aapne unnse baat nahi ki?

Geet: kiya haina? lekhin kehthe hai ki woh unkka kamra hai aur mujhe hi bahar jaana hai

Dadi: kya?

Geet: haan

Dadi: teek hai, aap Neha ko lekhe jaayiye, hum Maan se baat karthe hai

Geet chale jathi'.

Maan comes'.

He goes to see Dadi''

Dadi abhi tak soyi nahi'..

Maan: Dadi. Aap ab tak jage ho?

Dadi: aaise pothe ho toh kaise neendh aayegi?

Maan: Dadi?

Dadi: aakhir kab tak aap Geet se ladthe rahenge?

Maan: toh hummra ladne hi aapka problem hai?

Dadi: nahi bte, har koi pathi pathni ke beech aaise ladayi hotha rehtha hai

Maan: phir kya problem hai?

Dadi: ladayi ke saath saath pyaar bhi hotha hai

Maan: woh bhi hai Dadi

Dadi: par humme aaise nahi lagtha

Maan: Dadi aap kamakaam pareshaan ho jaathe hai

Dadi: aapne Geet ko apne kamre se bahar nikhala haina?

Maan: kya?

Dadi: Geet ne humme sab kuch bathadhi

Maan: Dadi aap bhi kisskke baat ko seriously lethe hai?

Dadi: Maan, ab waqt aagaya hai, aapko bhi Geet ko seriously lena hai

Maan: Dadi mein jaantha hoon, mujhe bas thoda waqt chahiye

Dadi: aur kitna waqt bte? Hum aur intrezaar nahi kar sakthe, samje aap?

Maan: teek hai Dadi, mein koshish kartha hoon, aap sojayiye, gud night

Dadi: gud night bte

Maan gets angry'.

Dadi ki tabyat pehle hi teek nahi hai aur ye Geet ne Dadi ko aur pareshaan karkke rakha hai'.

Maan: Geeet

Geet: aap aagaye?

Maan: bahar aao

Geet: kya baat hai, dhere bolo, Neha sorahi hai

Maan: tumne Dadi se kya kaha?

Geet: kya kaha?
Maan: meinne sawaal kiya toh tumme jawab dena chahiye, ulta mujhe hi sawaal nahi karna hai
Geet: sawaal karna sirf aapka haq hai?
Maan toh aone sawaal ko hi bhool gaya...
Geet: toh aapka sawaal jawab katam? gud night
Maan stops her...
Maan: ek minute, rukho
Geet: hare ab kya hai?
Maan: haan, yaad aagaya, tumne kal raat ke barein mein Dadi se kya kaha?
Geet: kal raat ki barein mein?
Geet sochthi hai...
Maan: Geet , hummare beech ke baathon ko apne paas hi nahi rakh sakthi?
Geet: hummare beech toh kuch bhi nahi hui
Maan wonders " ye sach mein innocent hai ya sab kuch jaankke bhi aaisa kar rahi hai"
Maan : Geeet
Geet: woh meinne bas Neha ko lekhe aane ke liye aaisa kuch boldhiya

Maan: tumse baat karna hi bekar hai, dimag hotha toh isstamal karthi, teri kopdhi toh kaali haina?

Geet: kya? Aapne kya kaha?

Maan: sach hi toh kehtha hoon

Geet: kya?

Maan: ab tumse behas karne ke liye mere paas waqt nahi hai, mujhe sona hai, mujhe disturb mat karo

Geet: aap ne kya socha? Mein bhi dekhthi hoon ki aap kaise stha?

Geet takes his pillow'..

Maan tries to get it back'..

Geet pulls it''

Maan also pulls it'.

Geet is too weak'.she falls over him''

Maneet eyelock''Mahi'''''.

Neha utjaathi''

Geet gets up & goes to put Neha back to sleep''.

Maan bas dekhthe hi rehtha''aur kuch nahi kar saktha, haina?

Dadi gets well'..

Ab Dadi sochthi ki ye donno ko kya karein?

Dadi bhi asaani se chodnewali nahi haina'.

Dadi sochkke hi rehthi ki kya karein?

Next week''.

Sab saath mein dinner kar rahe hai'.

Dadi: Neha, aap apne papa se kuch kehnewale haina?

Neha: haan

Dadi: toh aap kya kehna chahte hai?

Neha: papa

Maan: haan Neha , Bolo

Geet bhi eager hai'.

Neha: papa, Dadi ka room hai, Geet ka room hai

Ab Maan ko patha chal gaya ki woh aage kya kehnewali hai

Maan: haan sabka room hai, toh aapka kyun nahi? Yahi haina?

Maan looks at Dadi'.Dadima ka plans ek se badkar ek flop hothe jaa rahe hai'

Bechare Dadi, ab kya karenge?

Dadi: Nakul, hare ye kahan gaya?'.pani lekhe aao

Geet: ye lijiye pani

Neha: papa mera room kahan hai?

Maan: woh haina'.aapka room tayaar ho raha hai, aur ussko papa bahut achche se sajjaana chahate hai

Geet ko laga woh Maan ka office room hoga'..

Do teen din se kaam ho raha hai'..

Geet ne socha shayad Maan ko akhele kaam karne ke liye koi room chahiye'

Lekhin ye toh Neha ke liye hai, aur mujhe bathaya bhi nahi?

Geet ko bahut gussa aatha'..

Dadi: hare Maan bte aapne humse nahi kaha?

Maan: dadima, ye toh Neha ki b'day surprise tha, lekhin aapne toh aaj hi sabko bathadhi

Geet is very upset'..

Maan: kissko dekhna hai Neha ki room ko?

Neha: Neha ko

Maan: teek hai, aao

Maan takes her to her room

It's half done'..still some work has to be done'.

Geet bhi peeche hi jaathi'

She waits out'.

Neha: Geet

Dadi bhi aagayi

Dadi: Neha bte, Geet nahi

Neha: sorry, mama aap bhi andar aao

Neha Geet ke haath pakadke andar lekhe jaathi'.

Dadi room ki tareef karthi hai'.

Lekhin Geet chup hi rehthi'.

Maan sochtha'.ab issko kya ho gaya?

Naha bahut kush hai'

Neha: mera room'mera room'.

Dadi bhi kush hai'..

Ab inndonno ko koi bahana nahi milega'

Agle saal toh Neha ko company chahiye'.haina?

Maan ka room''

Geet Maan ke aane ki intrezaar kar rahi hai'

Maan comes'.

Maan: ab kya hai? Aaisa kyun beiti ho?

Geet: aapne Neha ke liye room ready kiya hai, aur mujhe bathaya bhi nahi?

Maan: toh kya hua? Ab toh patha chal gaya haina?

Geet: aapko pehle hi bathana chahiye

Maan: meinne socha ye Neha ke liye surprise rahe

Geet: par mujhse toh keh sakthe ?

Maan: itni choti si baat ko lekhe itna bada issue kyun banathi ho?

Geet: ye aap ke liye choti baat hogi, lekhin Neha meri beti hai, mujhe haq hai

Maan ko ab apni galthi ka ehsaas ho jaatha'.

Maan: Geet

Geet baat nahi karthi'.

Maan: naraaz ho?

No response''

Geet wahan se chale jaane ki koshish karthi'.

Maan ussko pakadtha'

Geet: chodo mujhe, aapko meri yaad hi nahi aayi?

Maan holds her against the wall & locks her in his arms'.

Geet neeche hi dekh rahi hai'..

Maan: Geet, mujhe dekho

Geet looks at his eyes'.

Maan: mujhse galthi ho gayi, mujhe maaf kardho, agle bar aaisa nahi hoga

Maneet eyelock'.Mahi''''..

Maan: ab kya? Neha ki room ko tumme design karna haina? Toh chalo mere saath

Geet: kahan?

Maan: tum chalo toh sahi

Maan takes her to the interior designer'.

Geet bhi thoda suggestions dethi''

Jaise Neha ko drawing pasand hai toh ek wall ko usske liye hi chodthe hai'.

Geet is very excited'.

Maan: Geet

Geet: hmm

Maan: tumme bahut bhura laga?

Geet: haan

Maan: meinne ye sab jaanboochkke nahi kiya hai, mere liye bhi ye sab naya hi haina?

Geet: haan, mujhe patha hai

Maan: toh ab tum kush haina?

Geet: haan

Maan bhi kush hai''

Edited by ghsp2fan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
part 32
nice part...
at least now they behaved like a married couple...
cont soon dear...
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#74

Part – 33

Ab toh Maan ko lagtha ki Geet ab badhi ho gayi hai……

Apne rishtey ko aage badane ka samay aagaya hai….

Aakhir kab tak Geet ko intrezaar karwayega?

Maan bhi ab Geet ke paas aathe hi apne aapko rokh nahi patha…..

Maan aaise kashmakash mein guzar raha hai...
Geet bhi aaise hi apne zasbathon ko chupakke rehthi...
kahin ye sahi waqt ho ya na ho?
Maan abhi iss rishtey ke liye tayaar hoga ya nahi?
Geet ke mann mein bhi kahin sawaal hai...
donno bahut mushkil halat mein hai...
Meanwhile holidays aa rahe hai...Geet ka college katam honnewala hai...
Pinky ke maa aur papaji aathe hai…..

Pinky ki shadhi haina, Adi ke saath, woh bhi Hoshiarpur mein……

Geet bahut kush hai……

Pinky ke maa Geet ko exams ke katam hone ke badh hi Pinky ke saath aane ki insist karthi…..

Lekhin Neha ki b'day aarahi hai….

Geet ussko chodkke kaise jaa sakthi….

Geet Pinky se kehthi ki Neha ke b'day ke badh aathi hai….

Pinky understands Geet's plight…..

Neha ke b'day ke paas aathe hi sabko Annie aur arjun ke hi yaad aathe hai….

Yaad haina pichle saal donno Neha ke b'day ko kaise celebrate kiye the?

Geet kaise bhool sakthi?

Neha's room is almost complete…….

Neha aaj hi apne kamre mein sona chahathi…

Geet bhi saath mein hai…

Neha so gayi….

Geet pad rahi hai….

Ab se yahan aaram se pad sakthi…..

Maan ke kamre mein padne ki mood hi nahi aathi….

Upar se Maan bhi hai toh Geet kaise padegi?

Aajkal Maan ki nazar mein bahut badlaav aagaye hai….

Ab toh woh Geet ko gukke hi rehtha….

Geet bhi padne ke bahaane Maan ko hi notice karthi rehthi…..

He is after something…….but maybe he is hesitating as Geet is busy preparing for her exams…..

Maan comes……..

Geet:hare babaji, ye yahan bhi aagaye? Mujhe ek din bhi chaain se padne nahi denge, haina?

Maan: Geet, babaji se kya baat kar rahi ho?

Geet: kuch nahi, mein bas exams achche se karna chahathi

Maan: toh yahan kya kar rahi ho? Chalo jaake pado

Geet: mein yahi padoongi

Maan: yahan tum lights lagakke padogi toh Neha kaise soyegi?

Geet: par mein ………

Maan: Geet tum hummare kamre mein padlo

Geet: kya? aapkke kamre mein?

Maan: haan

Geet: babaji, ye kaisi musibat hai? Innkke saath ek hi kamre mein aur padayi?

Maan: Geet tum jao, tumme koi disturb nahi karega?

Geet: aap bhi?

Maan smiles…

Maan:haan, mein yahan Neha ke saath hi sojaatha

Geet takes her notebooks & gets ready to go….

Maan Geet ke haath pakadkke ussko rokhtha….

Geet sochthi…." Ab kya? Babaji mujhe kuch teek nahi lagtha"

Maan: all the best Geet, achche se prepare karo

Geet is disappointed….

Geet: bas yahi kehna tha?

Maan asks her to come near….

Geet gets closer,,,

Maan kisses her forehead….: gud night

Geet: gud night…….

Geet smiles & leaves….

Waise aajkal Geet saath ho toh Maan ko bhi neendh kahan aathi? Gandhe khyaal hi aathe...

Next day….

Maan leaves for a conference at Pune…..

Chalo Geet bhi ab aaram se pad sakthi….

Geet ke exams are over….

She is busy making arrangements for Neha's 2nd b'day……

Iss bar Maan ne sare responsibilities Geet ko hi dedi…

Warna ye phir se shuru ho jayegi……

That's the last thing maan wants,haina?

Waise Maan toh ab yahan nahi haina?

He will come only on Neha's b'day….

Maan Geet ko exams ke samay disturb nahi karna chahatha….

Issiliye Pune chala gaya….

Yahan rehtha toh Geet ko kamaakam pareshaan karthe rehtha………

Aajkal Maan bhi Geet ki feelings ko samaj gaya…..

Aakhir ye lakdki itne din mujhse nafrat karne ki natak kar rahi thi…..

Toh meinne teek samjha, ye bhi mujhe chahathi hai par aasaani se nahi manegi…

Kaise manegi? Aakhir Geet Handa haina?

Maan toh kab se Geet ko chup chupkke admire kar raha tha…..

He had this gut feeling that she too feels the same way…..

Thoda zyada bolthi hai…..aur bahut kam sochthi hai……

Jo bhi baat hai pehle karthi hai aur sochthi hai ki aaise karna chahiye hai ya nahi…….

Phir bhi dil se bahut achchi hai….

Hamesha sabki madat karthi hai…ya madat karne ki koshish mein pareshaan karthi…

Jaise Maan ko hamesha pareshaan karthi…..

Jo bhi ho Maan toh fida ho gaya…….

That's why he straightaway asked her to marry him…..

Aur usskke badh Maan ko apne pyaar ko kehne ka moka hi nahi milla….

Seedhe shadhi karna pada……

Chalo koi baat nahi, ab toh sab teek ho gaya haina?

Mumbai aathe hi Maan Geet ko pure tarah apnayega….

Ye Geet yahan Maan ke intrezaar karthi rethi….

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Part - 34

Ranno has come….

After Neha's b'day celebrations she will take them to hoshiarpur….

Maan has other plans…

He has been planning a HM after Geet's exams….

Par Geet toh Hoshiarpur jaane ki tayyari kar rahi hai….

Neha bhi bahut excited hai…

Pehle bar Mumbai se bahar jaarahi haina?

She is fond of Mr.Handa…..

She likes to play with his big Mushtache…..

Aur unnkke saath bahar goomna bhi Neha ko bahut pasand hai….

Ab Maan Geet ko rokh nahi saktha….

Upar se Adi – Pinky ki shadhi bhi aarahi hai…

Hoshiarpur mein hi hai toh Maan ko bhi jaana padega…

Geet pehle jaake Pinky ki madat karegi…..

It's party time….Neha's b'day….

Sab tayaar hai….

Maan nahi hai toh Geet ko hi sab sambalna pada…

Agar koi bhi kammi ho toh Maan kamakaam gussa karega….

Aaj Geet Maan ko upset karna nahi chahathi…

Pehle hi Geet ko Neha ki pehle b'day ki yaad aathi…

She couldn't stop thinking about Annie & Arjun…

Maan ka bhi yahi haal hoga?

Issiliye ek ek cheez ko do bar check kar chuki hai….

Ab thoda aaram karna hai…..

Geet gets some rest….

She is sleeping….

Maan comes…..

He doesn't disturb her….

He helps Neha to dress up….

Geet uttjaathi…

She hurries to get Neha ready….

She is already ready…she looks like a little angel…..

Dadi could see little Annie standing there….

She just resembles little Annie…..

Maan has also noticed it…..

Geet: aap? Aap aagaye?

Maan: Geet aaram se, sab tayaar hai, tum fresh hokke aao, mein Neha ko neeche lekhe jaatha

Maan takes Neha down…..

Everone is ready…….

There is silence for a while…..

Yahan toh sab ko Annie aur Arjun ke yaad hi aatha, agar woh bhi aaj yahan hothe toh?

Sab ka mann mein yahi sawaal hai?

Bas koi bhi ye baat ko share karkke party ka mood spoil nahi karna chahatha….

Maan is also aware of this…..

He is also looking dull…Neha ke samne hassraha hai….

Lekhin Geet ko patha hai ki Maan kitna mushkil se apne dard ko chupa raha hai?

Geet bhi kitna bhi koshish karthi, past ko nahi bhool paayi…

Ab Geet ko hi kuch karna padega….….

Geet ko patha hai ki Maan ko kaise sambale?

Maan has got Neha all sorts of gifts…

From a tri-cycle to soft toys…

Neha is very happy….

Bas Dadi thodi emotional hogayi…

Sirf Ranno dadi ko samaj paayi….

Woh Dadi ko sambalthi…

Ranno: Dadiji, ab Neha hi aapki pothi hai

Dadi also tries to cheer up…

Geet tayaar hokke aathi….

Sab Geet ka hi intrezaar kar rahe the….

Maan asks her to bring the cake….…

Nakul gets the cake……

Geet lights the candles…

She helps Neha to blow –off the candles…

Maan cuts the cake….

Everyone sings…

Happy b'day to Neha….

Maneet Neha ko cake khilathe hai….

Geet Neha ko khilane ke bahane Maan ke muh pe cake lagathi….

Neha zor zor se hasthi…….

Sab hasthe hai…

Geet bhi hasthi……

Maan gets angry….

Maan: Geet

Geet turns …..Maan ke haath mein bhi cake hai…..

Geet tries to escape……

Neha Geet ke haath pakadthi…….

Maan: kahan bhaagthi ho?

Geet bhi bhaagna nahi chahathi…..

Ab Maan ki bhari…….

Aaise hi sab party ke mood mein aathe…..

Geet switches on the music…..

Chote bachein nachthe hai…..

Geet bhi Neha ke saath thoda nachthi…..

Geet ne aaj Neha ke favourite khanaa order kiya hai….

Neha ko noodles pasand hai….

Maan ka pasta bhi hai….

Donno ko chocolate mousse pasand hai…..

Geet looks for Maan…..

Maan has left….

He is not there…..

Geet ko patha hai ki Maan ko aaj Annie ki bahut yaad aayi hai….

That's why he has left as he doesn't want to spoil the party….

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part 33 n 34
nice updates..
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#77
part 33
nice part...
wow so Maan always liked Geet...
nice...
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#78
part 34
nice part...
they are missing Annie and Arjun...
cont soon dear...
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Part - 35

After dinner'.Geet Neha ko apne saath hi lekhe jaathi'.

Neha bahut tak gayi hai toh jaldhi sojaathi'.

Geet ko neendh nahi aathi'

Kaise aayegi? Maan ab tak aaya nahi haina?

Ye kahan chale gaye?'.

She keeps waiting for him'.

Maan comes'.

She doesn't want to disturb him'

Maan: Geet

Geet: hmm

Maan: so gayi tu?

Geet: nahi

Maan: Neha?

Geet: woh sogayi

Maan: tum ab tak sooyi nahi?

Geet: mujhe needh nahi aayi

Maan: mere liye wait kar rahi thi?

Geet: nahi'''.haan

Maan: Geet, mujhe bhi neendh nahi aarahi hai

Geet ko patha nahi kya karein?

Pehle bar Maan Geet se aaise khulke baat kar raha hai'.

Maan: Geet

Geet: hmm

Maan: kya tum yahan aakke so sakthi? Mere paas

Geet: haan

Geet goes & lies down near him'.

She hugs him tight''.

Maan is ke liye kitna din intrezaar kar raha tha'.

He needed this very much'.

Aakhir kitne din MSK bankke ek robot ki tarah goom saktha?

Woh bhi toh insaan haina?

Ek pyaara bhai'.apne behen ko kitna chahatha tha?

Geet: ab aapke aakhen band karlo, needh aayegi

Just as she said Maan feels much better now''..

He realizes what he had missed all these days''.

Comfort was just beside him & it took him so long to embrace it'..

Maybe it's his ego''..now that it's gone he is ready to accept that he needs someone'

He needs Geet'.just to hold him together when things fall apart'..

Maybe women are much stronger than men mentally'..

Maan: Geet

Geet:hmm

Maan:a gar tum nahi hothi toh patha nahi mera kya hotha?

Geet: kuch nahi hotha? Aap MSK ho, samje

Maan: nahi Geet, MSK fake hai, asli Maan ko iss Geet ki zaroorat hai

Geet: toh Geet haina aapke paas, ab so jao

Maan: Geet Neha se zyada mujhe tummari zaroorat hai

Geet: mein jaanthi hoon

Maan: kya?

Geet: hmm

Maan: thanks Geet

Geet apne haath se Maan ke muh band karthi'.

Geet: chup'bilkul chup, aankhen band karo

Geet orders him'..

Maan closes his eyes'..

Geet: ab sojao

Thye fall asleep'.

Next day'.

Geet ko Maan ko chodke jaane ki mann hi nahi kartha'.

Par Ranno ko bhi disappoint nahi kar sakthi'.

Geet: Maan

Maan:hmm

Geet: mein jaaoon?

Maan: haan

Geet: par aap?

Maan: Geet, mein ye project launch ke badh aatha hoon

Geet: pacca

Maan: haan pacca

Geet is still not satisfied'..

Maan: Geet

Geet: hmm

Maan: kya soch rahi hai?

Geet: hum bhi aap ke saath yahi rukh jaathe

Maan: nahi, tum jao

Geet: lekhin

Maan: mein teek hoon, waise Neha toh dus din se Hoshiarpur jaane ki baat hi karthi rehthi hai, ab tum ussko nahi lekhe jaathi toh?

Geet: haan, upar se ye maa bhi kab se Neha ko Hosiarpur lekhe jaana chahathi hai

Maan: haan

Geet: aap bhura nahi manenge, haina?

Maan: nahi, lekhin tum logon ko bahut miss karoonga

Geet: achcha?

Maan: haan, itne din tumme daantne ki aadat padgayi haina? Ab mein kissko dantoonga?

Geet: kya?

Maan: ab mein kisse ladoonga? Aur'.

Maan gets closer'

Geet: aur?

Maan moves her hair aside & takes a closer look'..

Geet is speechless''.

Maan looks at her lips'..

Geet is shivering''

Maan kisses her''

Neha comes''

Neha: papa' papa'..

Maan: haan beta

Neha is ready'..she has come to show him her new dress''

Maan: ye bahut achcha hai

Neha: hum chook chook train mein jaa rahe hai

She is so happy''

Maan: achcha, aap jao, gadhi mein beito

Neha: mama

Maan: woh bhi aayenge

Neha leaves'.

Geet bhi jaa rahi hai'.

Maan stops her'..

Maan looks at her lips'.

Geet: chodo, dher ho rahi hai

Maan: ab toh tum mujhe bhool nahi sakthi?

Geet: kya?

Maan: haan, jab bhi tum aaine mein apne hotton ko dekhogi, mera hi yaad aayega

Geet: itne din chodkke aaj hi mila aapko?

Maan: kya karein? Jab koi cheez paas hothi usska kathar nahi karthe, par jab wahi cheez humse dhoor jaathi toh hummara mann gabratha, insaan ka mann hi aaisa haina?

Geet: aap kabse philosopher bangaye?

Maan: ye toh teri nasheeli hotton ka kamaal hai

Geet: Maaan

Geet chillathi'..

Maan: hare ab meinne kya kiya? Meinne toh teek se shuru bhi nahi ki?

Geet: mujhe lagtha hum zaroor train ko miss kardhenge

Maan: kya?

Geet: jaldhi karo

Geet Maan ko zabardasthi wahan se lekhe jaathi'..

Maan is disappointed''''

Maan drops them at the station'

Neha pehle bar train mein jaarahi hai '.

She is very happy'.

Geet ko hi thoda bhura laga'.

She keeps looking at him till he disappears from her sight'.

Maan bhi saath aatha, lekhin dadi ko akhele kaise chod saktha?

Maan ko bhi Geet aur Neha ko bhejne ka mann hi nahi hai'.

Kitne din Maan aaise akhele rehtha tha?

Lekhin ab akhele rehna bahut mushkil lagtha'..

Ghar hi Neha ki bina suna suna lagtha'

Geet hothi toh kuch na kuch kadbad karkke Maan se daat kaathi rehthi'

Ab toh sirf Nakul hai'.

Nakul ab fusgaya'..

Nakul: Dadima, aap jaldhi Geet m'am ko wapas bhulolo

Dadi: kyun? Geet m'am se koi kaam hai kya? Ya koi paison ki zaroorat hai kya?

Nakul: nahi, Maan sir ko wahi sambal saktte hai

Dadi: ye toh hum bhi jaante hai, bas dus din, phir Geet wapas aajayegi

Nakul: kya? Dus din? Toh mein bhi chutti lekhe jaatha hoon

Maan: Nakul?

Nakul: ji sir

Maan: kya baat hai? Dadi se kya behas kar rahe ho?

Nakul: kuch nahi sir

Dadi: woh Nakul ko chutti chahiye

Maan:kya?

Nakul: woh'.mein'.

Maan: kya mein mein?

Nakul: nahi sir

Maan: koi kaam nahi hai kya?

Nakul: haan sir, bahut kaam hai sir

Maan: jaldi jao, aur mere naastha tayaar karo, mujhe aaj jaldhi jaana hai

Nakul: ji sir

Nakul escapes''.

Hoshiarpur jaathe hi Geet Mrs.MSK se Geet Handa ban jaathi''Mumbai ko bhool jaathi'.

Woh Neha ke saath pure ghaav goomthi'.

Apne sare friends ko visit karthi'.

Pinky ki thoda madat karthi'.

Ranno Geet ko daatthi rehthi'

Ye mat karo'woh mat karo'

Ab tu bachi nahi hai'.ab teri shadhi ho gayi hai'.

Par Mr.Handa hamesha Geet ko support karte hai'.

Dus din yuhi chale jaathe''..

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