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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: zona_malik

updateee

updateee
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I ll surely update in dis week 😛
Pakka😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
awsummm update...😃😃

loving it😃

nxt prt update soon plz😃😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: kuhu_Arsha

awsummm update...😃😃 Thnx dear😛


loving it😃 My pleasure

nxt prt update soon plz😃😃 😃 yup I ll update on Sunday 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
. I ll update on Sunday
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: angel_luvkreya

update plzzz. I'll Update on Sunday fr sure😃

nd do pm. 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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. Thnx dea😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
Hey..ppl..m bak!!!wid d update...firstly a very very HAPPY NEW YEAR to SHAKS 😊n all...KRIYAANSHIANS..😃hope dis year brings u joy n happiness in everyone lives n we could get our kriyaansh bak..
n special wishes yo our "shakti"
actually was busy wid ma exams..so I couldn't update soon..sry guys...fr d late update..
N dis part is especially fr angel love_kriya😛
N all my sweet readers..😃n here goes my update...

Happy reading😃 see u all at d end


It was night..n kriyaansh reached d place..😊
Kriya's eyes wer closed..she kept saying..rey hum kaha jare..hai??

Suddenly rey opened d blindfold..n
She got mesmerised by d beauty...fireworks..


d only word she could utter was just "wow..."!!!

"HAPPY NEW YEAR" BAATCUTTER...yes..it was 31st dec n time was 12 o'clock
She just hugged him as tight as she could..fr d mst precious gift..

Kr:thnq rey happy new year...n rey broke d hug..

N he inched closer to her n took his lips into her..she too equally responded..n it turned to a passionate kiss..

It was so..blissful for both..😳

Dey broke d kiss..cause lack of air..

Both foreheads touched..rey kept his hands on kriya's cheeks n she kept on his shoulders
Rey said "I love you"
She smiled n said "luv u too"

.suddenly Rey's cell starts beeping. It was viren.
Dey parted..

Re: hey wassup viren...!!!
Vi: hey hi... Tum log kaha par ho??

Re: voh hum gumne ke liye bahar ayete.. Tu Bol kya hua??

Vi: mei tho ye kehne ke liye cal kiya ki new year hai So socha ki Tum logo ko bhi humare saath leke jayege

Re: bt wer dude?

Vi:pub yaar ll u guys come ?

Re:ofcourse we ll..be der..just MSG me d address kk

V:yeah..dude den c u der..

Re:k..bye n cuts d call..

Kr: Rey aap kaha Jane ke liye plan kar rahe tey ahh...

Re: voh viren humare saath pub Jane ke liye plan bana raha tha...

Kriya kya hum chale...

Kr: haan Rey tekh hai... Kab Jana hai??

Re: Abhi..

Kr: okk

Re: Kk kriya ab hum hotel ko wapas chale
Kr: Kk letzz go..


Soon kriyaansh hired an taxi left 2 deir hotel... Dey reach der hotel n kriyaansh in room
Both changed..kriya was wearing..


Rey was wearing d same dress which he wore in shivam's party..
Rey was waiting fr her..In living room..

Kriya came all dressed..rey turned as she called him..

R:baby u look beautiful..n moved forward n kiss her near edge of her lips..
She blushed..to d core..

Soon both reached d pub
Kriyaansh n virika met..n both entered d pub..
All d boys wer just gawking at both d girls..
N dier dear hubbies wer just fuming wid jealously..
All four directly went to dance floor..
Rey n kriya both wer dancing closely..
Wen a random gal came to rey n asked fr dance..
N same was wid viren..
Both looked at each other..n smirked
Re n vi:yeah sure..
Kr n je:wt d..
Both d boys escaped frm dier..n dancing wid dos two chicks
Here kriya n jeevika wer fuming..dashed out..frm d pub..n went to parking area..

Inside d pub..
Re:dude I think dey both r serious..
Vi:yeah..dude it's reli a hard time now..
N made dier way out of d pub n reached parking area wer dier wife's wer fuming...

kriya near d parking area n she was very angry... Viren went to garden side wer jeevika was staning..n Rey goes near kriya..

Re: hey BAATCUTTER Tum yaha kya kar rahi ho n come on na letzz go inside..
Der's no answer kriya n she just went n sat inside d car whr viren n jeevika wer near d garden side..
Re: kriya kya huwa... Ur nt feeling well ah... Tum tekh ho na...
Kr: ( no answer)

Re: kriya... Kriya...

Kr: Rey ( angry mode) mujhe kuch nahi huwa bas hotel chalo

Re: par kriya...

Kr: par...var...kya Rey... Mujhe joh dekna tha Maine dekh liya..
Re: par kriya Tum kisske baat kar ri ho mujhe toh kuch mein nahi aa raha hai...
Kr: haa aapko toh kuch bhi nahi baata na...

Re: kriya Tum Kehna kya chahti ho

Kr: Rey waha aap kya kar rahe teh uss ladki ke saath... Aur shaadi shudha hoke aap dusri ladki ke saath

Re: woh toh bas dance kar raha tha yaar... Isme kunse baadi baat hai ah

Kr : Accha ha tekh hai phir aapko baadi Baath nahi hai toh jaiye uss ladki paas Jakar flirt Karo..

Re: kriya essa kuch bhi nahi...

Kr: Rey chiding mujhe hotel Jana hai toh plzz hum chale...

By thn viren comes manofying n jeevika also is hell angry. Kriya n jeevika at back n Rey n viren in front.

Kr: yeh ladke aapne aap ko kya samjhte hai...

Je: haa kriya yeh log toh arghhh
Kr : mein toh unse baat nahi karungi
😡
Je: haa kriya mein bhi😡
Rey n vi:😭

Later dey reach hotel n kriyaansh led 2 d hotel room

Re: kriya rukho... Kriya..
Ab toh eese manana padega... Woh toh mein kaise karoon...


Rey n Kriya reached their hotel room Kriya was literally fuming...she slammed d door behind n went to wardrobe den m Rey came frm bak n hugged her to calm his lady love..

R:baby Itna gussa kyun?

K:wt kyu?pub Mei uss ladki ke sath kaise dance karehe the bhul Gaye

R:but vo Karan ne..he was cut by his baatcutter

K:Rey m not in a mood to listen so please..n she left fr washroom to change.

R:Kuch tho karna padega she's damn angry on me..

Kriya came out frm washroom wearing a cute nite dress,Kriya saw tat rey was already gawking at her she faked anger..n sat on bed of her side Rey immediately ran to washroom n changed into his boxers n came out n saw his love sleeping bt still awake.. Coz ..wait..she wants me to manaofy her..tats d best work in d world I can do..n went up to bed of her slept beside her

R:baatcutter plz Baat karo na
mujhse turned her face to his

K:Rey plz...

R:let me explain once...

K:wt ll u explain huh n she turned her face to other side

Nw he was nt able to control his anger n shouted on her (nt tat loud)

R:stop it Kriya...kab se Kehna ki koshish kar raha hu par..tum

Dis was enough to Kriya make tears their way out..Rey saw it..a drop fell on her cheek Rey cursed himself..she immediately got up frm bed n went out of d room..rey also ran behind her..
She sat on d couch in living area.n tears war flowing frm her eyes...Rey went up to her..sat beside her n cupped her face

R:Kriya m sorry tumse rudely baat karne ke liye n kissed her eyes
Kriya did'nt utter a word she was n looking down..
R:baby m sry..plz mujhse Baat karo..mere aankhon mei dekho...n he took her hands in his n started beating himself on his cheeks
Kriya was surprised by his action n backed off her hands..
Kr:rey wt r u dng??who d hell gave u right to slap ur self
Re:rey slowly murmed a sorry..

K:nahi Rey m sry..Mei hi bina wajah Aap pe naraz hogayi..

R:no honey u have full rights On me am sor..r she put her finger on his lips

Kr:shhh I love you..n hugged him tight

R:love u too..baatcutter (breaking d hug) vaise wer looking hot in tat dress..
she blushed.. he came close to her bt stopped picked her in his arms n made his way to their room..
He gently placed Kriya on d bed came upon her..

R:baatcutter vo hum log aise hi tum dono ko jealous feel karvane ke liye us girls ke sath dance kiye..we couldn't control wen some boys came to dance wid u so..he pouted..m very possessive abt u baby(aww soo cute) Kriya chuckled at d last line

K:so am I (both laughed)

Both smiled looking at eachother..Rey caught her wrist n pinned to pillow..Rey started kissing her all over her face..he kissed her forehead..eyes..nose..chin..n..traced her lips..gently took her lips in his..she clutched his shirt collar tightly.n his hands on her waist..kiss deepenned..both wer kissin fiercely his arms roaming all over her waist making sme random designs on her belly..finally both parted unwillingly fr some air..both wer breathing heavily..he laid by her side..now..Kriya was in a full mood..

She came on top of him..kissed him..n unbuttoned his shirt,n threw it started to give kisses all over his chest..neck he was surprised by her sudden action n she bit his ear lobe slightly n chuckled by his reaction n he moaned..he can't help bt lose all his senses..

Rey immediately caught her hands n came up on top of her..he crushed himself more on her..she moaned Rey...
R:it's my turn honey..(with a smirk) they both looked like one soul..he stated to unbutton her dress..n was successful..started kissing her neck jawline..by giving her some love bites make her moan in pleasure..n both slept in each others embrace..

Phew...finally finished typing...d update...
Criticism allowed..
Acha laga tho cmments mein bata dena..
First time m keeping a demand fr d nxt part...till 25pg
Nxt part will be on 25pg..do like n comment guys...
Stay tuned...lots of love..deepsha

Oh...bul gayi..precap..
Challenge of adventure..

Sochte raho..ki kisne challenge kiya hai aur kya adventure hoga..??
For all dis..wait fr d nxt part...
Buh byee Guyzz...




Edited by deepshakriya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
res...
unresss...
yeyyy me first me first...
okay enough of my celebration...
update was awsm...
and viren and rey bechare
jelous karane k chakkar me khud hi phans gye...
romance part was nice...
update soon...
thnx 4 the pm...
Edited by anjee_007 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
amazing
woww
kriyansh romance ws superb...
precap seems intersting
loved it...
thnks 4 pm

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