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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi everyone...I'm Naina n come back to IF after long time n thought of writing on MG and this is my 1st attempt . If u like it ... plzzz hit LIKE and COMMENT.PLZ ADD "nainapmlist".


Delhi, October 2013

Today there is an Award Function for Best Businessman of the year and we are seeing that there is lots of people from different fields.
Here comes Businessman Mr. Dev Chopra with his wife Pari.

Reporter : Sir last two years se awaard aapko mil raha , apko kya lagta hai yeh award is baar bhi apko milega ??
Dev : No comments. Plz excuse us...
Reporter : Sir...
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and here comes Mr. Maan Singh Khurana.and he is also nominee for award
Reporter : Sir apko kya lagta hai yeh award kisko milega coz competition is tuff and ur new in business and other competitors are well established ?
Maan : Award usko milega jo usse deserve harta hai and i have my lady luck with me. So i have no tension if other competiotors are established or i m new in business. Plz excuse me.
And he left the media people behind

After some time, Maan calls someone.

M : where are u?
Caller : ...
M : function start hone wala haiand u know na main kaisa feel kar rah hoon.
C : ...
M : Ok i'll be w8ng for u.
C : ...
M : me too. and cut the call.

After some time , Award function start
Speaker : Ladies and Gentlemen, Best Businessman of year is ...
Dev is confident that this awrd will be his and he raise from his seat to go...
S : MR. MAAN SINGH KHURANA

Dev is shocked and what not

Maan raised from his seat and goes to recieved the award .

Maan : Thank u everyone but i would like to thanks the most lovely people of my life ...My dadimaa and my lovely wife, my life, reason of my exist my Mishty. Plz Mishty
come on the stage and share this moment with me. Plzz...

Mishty who has tears of love, happiness and proud in her eyes, refused to come but Dadimaa push her to go. Maan help her to come on stage.

Maan : Ladies and Gentlemen meet my wife Mishty and our happiness is double as u all see that my wife is pregnant.Thank u all once again.

Maan just hug her and takes her to Dadimaa for her blessing , who is w8ng for her children and bless them.

Then other people comes to congratulate the new businessman.
But the most shocked persons in fuctiion are Dev and Pari.

Dev only utter one word GEET...

Pari thinks Geet yaha kaise and woh pregnant hai...How is that possible?


This is the prologue...tell me should i continue or not...


Luv
Naina



INDEX


Part 1 :- Above

CS :- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/72654894

Part 2 :- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/73103717

Part 3 :- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/78465563

Part 4 :-
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/93620362

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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome start dear..
maan winning the award😃
dev shocked😆
he knows geet😲
waiting for more...
n welcome back dear😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Character Sketch

Maan Singh Khurana : 26 yr old business tycoon from London and recently settled in India with his family. Love and respect his Dadimaa.In London,he is famous casanova but after married to Geet, he is sharif and Geet is his Dhadkan, love n reason to live.He is happy with his small family and knoows about Geet past.He is very possessive and protective for Geet and his baby.


Mishty / Geet Maan Singh Khurana : 24yr old,lovely wife of Maan. She loves and respect Maan too much and can to anything for his happiness. She is sweet and naughty daughter of Daadi maa and crime partner of DM to annoy Maan.has some past but forget it after Maan and Dadimaa comes in her life.


Savitri Khurana : Lovely DM of her children always prayer for their happiness, she is sole reason of Maaneet marriage, now busy in making planning for arrival of new member of family.


Dev Chopra : No.1 Businessman in India and never oppose his parents, related to Geet in past.


Pari Chopra : Dev's wife, loves him. cunning always thought about herslf.


Pammi Chopra : Dev' mom cunning but lovely mother to her son, has orthodox thinking.


Rano and Mohinder Handa : Pari parents.


other characters will add later


Luv
Naina
Edited by Kool_Naina - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice start 😃
continue soon👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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maan rocks
dev shocks
intresting do continue
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing prologue...
continue soon n do pm when ever u update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I really enjoy the story line sound like an good twist to the story👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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GREAT START
GEET HAS A PAST WHICH MAAN KNOWS
BUT YOU SAID THAT DEV AND NAINA ARE SHOCKED,WHO IS NAINA
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Good start.
Geet has some past & dat too with dev.
Thank god Maan knows it already.
Dadi is always sweet.
Can u pls pm me further updates?!?!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice start dear..
loved it...
continue soon!!!

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