MG FF DHADKAN Part 4/Pg 13 - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
prologue
awesome...
wow lovely...
in few places u have typed Naina for Pari...
so Pari is Dev's wife?

CS
interesting...
cont soon...

PS - when u update, can u plz post the link in the FF Daily Updates 4?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
Awesome prologue
lovely ff
cs interesting
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
@ all : Thank u i'll update tomorrow

Edited by Kool_Naina - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Mumbai,April 2011

City Hospital


Savitri Devi is injured in accident and saved by young lady who dressed in bridal wear. Doctor comes out from OT n inform the lady that SD is save and she will be conscious in 2-3 hours.
After sometime in hospital room, SD gains conscious n ask who saves her n want to meet the person.

Lady : Namaste, how r u now mam?

SD : Im fine beta, thnx foe saving my life'.

Lady : no no mam wat r u saying yeh toh mera farz tha. Aap plz mujhe apni family k no. de dijiye I'll inform dem about u'''''''.

SD : no beta meri family nahin hain bus ek grand son hain n we live in London n im here for some work . Beta can I ask u some thing if u don't mind ?

Lady : no no mam its ok u can me .

SD : Beta aap yah par is bridal wear main aapki shaadi hain aur aap yaha par hamari wajah se ''''.

Lady : no mam don't feel sad for me. Meri shaadi nahi hai. Ab mujhe chalna chahiye doc ne kaha hain aapko rest ki jarurat hain. But she is thinking that where is she going to stay ?

SD sense that the young lady is hiding some thing and she is in some problem. So SD ask her if there is some problem but lady says no there is nothing but after lots of convince she told her problem to SD.

SD : Oh oh beta bus itni si baat aap humare saath London chaliye aur aap humari company main MD k PA ki post vacant hain toh aap uss post par kaam kar lijiye. Waise aapka naam kya hai?

Lady : oh sorry mam main apna naam batana bhul gayi. i'm Geet.

SD : ok Geet toh kya ap humara offer accept kar rahi hai??(in mind : plz god yeh haan kar de, meri saari problem dur ho jayegi haaye''''.. kitni soni kudi hain bilkul pari ki tarah)

Geet : yes mam main aapke saath london chal rahi hun

SD : Thnk u beta ''(in mind doing bhangdra ) ok then aap packing kar lijiye. Humari aaj evening ki flight hai

Geet : but I don't have anything with me '''

SD : oh oh don't worry hum aapke liye shopping k liye chalet hain wat say ? n yes now call me dadi maa no mam ok''''...

Geet : ok I'll call u dadi maa but aap kaise shopping par jaa sakte hai doc ne apko rest karne k liye bola hai

SD : no problem beta hum apke liye dresses order kar dete hain aap humein apni choices bata dijiye.
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Geet told her choices to SD n order dem . In evening, SD n Geet takes London flight.
They arrives London in morning, car is waiting for dem at airport. After 1 hour they reached Khurana Mansion , when dey come inside a young man is anxiously w8ng for dem as soon he see dem he run towards dem n hug SD tightly. Then that guy sudenly broke the hug n angrily says

Guy : what happened to you ? Are u alright? What r the securities doing there wen accident happened ?

SD (calmly) : Maan cool down nothing happen to me. Im perfectly fine.

Geet who is watching the whole scene n admring their bond but suddenly comes out from her thought listning to Dadi maa.

Geet : ya I know how fine u r?

SD : ohho Geet stop it now u too start it ( making baby face)

Maan just staring at Geet with mouth open n SD see it, decide to introduce both each other.

SD : Maan meet Geet, she is the one who save me from accident n now she will stay wid us n join the comapany as MD PA. Geet meet my grandson Maan n MD of Khurana Constructions.

Sorry friend im late in updating but kya karu mera PC crash ho gaya tha. So friend this 1st part hope u all like it n plz comment .For pm add "Kool_Naina"
Luv
Naina
Edited by Kool_Naina - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice start
Lovely update
Cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
Loved the first part
geet saves DM in an accident
and dadi offers her a job and takes her to London
geet meets maan
waiting for the next part
please update soon and pm me


Edited by amita5 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
So Geet is gonna be dadi secretary!!!
From which marriage & y Geet came away.
Waiting for their first fight!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
intrsting.maaneet r already married.and dev realted with geets past.nice cs,cnt sn.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
Wow
Lovely part
Really awesome
Waiting for maaneet first fight
Update soon

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