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Posted: 11 years ago
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sorry friends for not updating this long but i've an accident n injured badly then my exams. After that wen i try to log in my net get down. this is so frustrated that all this is happened wid at that tym but now im back wid story. will update in evening or by tomorrow.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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fab news! waiting n do pm! Thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Present

Mumbai, October 2013

Award Function, Dinner Time

Maan n Mishty Table,

Maan is trying to make Mishty eat some healthy but Mishty want to eat some chatpatta n their tu -2 main -2 is going on...
Maan : Mishty... Jaan ... Pls kuch khalo dekho tumahra fav. Palak paneer aur... but cut by Mishty

Mishty : No ... mera kuch chatpatta khane ka man kar raha hai pls kuch lado na.

Maan : But Mishty doc ne kaha hai ki u hav to eat healthy warna tumahri tabiyat kharab ho jayegi.

Mishty : Par mera man nahin hai, mujhe golgappe khane , aaloo k parathe aurchat khane ka man kar raha hai n she pout cutely

Maan (sigh n self thought) : Not again phir se wahi sab aur doc aunty mujhe kehti hai ki main ise healthy food nahi khaane deta but kya karu wen she make that face I totally fogot my senses n do only onething...(to Geet ) : Ok Jaan jaisa tum chahogi waisa hi hoga ok.

Mishty give big smile to him n kiss on is cheek, forgetting about her surroundings

Bechaari Dadi is awkwardly smiling at few people who is looking her pota n his wife antics weirdly n then roll her at Maan submission to his Mishty wishes once again.
Dadi (self thought ) : Jab Maan ko haan karna hi hai to yeh nakhre kyu karte hai n mujhe dekho inki wajah se hamesha main awkward feel karti hun n then these people.

But some people not happy in the party, yes they are not other than Dev n Pari , they were shock beyond their limits. The past they had thought will not come in their future is now in front of their eyes s haapy n wife n daughter-in-law of one the most rich family of world. In their worst dream also they never thought that they will come face to face with their past.

Dev : Pari I think , we should congratulate Mr. Khurana for his achievement(n thought : mujhe pata karna hai ki yeh sach ya jo 2 saal pehle hua tha wo sach tha?).

Pari : Dev u r right (n self thought : chalo is bahane yeh bhi pata chal jayega ki Geet wapis kyun aayi hai?)
Par dono bhul gaye hai ki yeh Geet nahi Mishty hai , Maan ki Mishty , Mrs. Mishty Maan Singh Khurana.

At Maaneet Table,

Mishty is relishing her dinner n Maan is niharoing his Mishty n poor Dadi rolling her eyes at her deewana pota
Dadi (thinking) : this is too much ek toh yeh dono jabardasti har jagah mujhe apne saath lekar jaate aur phir mujhe bhul bhi jaate hai aur main poor Dadi inke romance ki eye witness banti hun aur dekho is nalayak pote ko ek baar bhi nahi poocha Dadi apne khana khaa liya ya main order karu n make baby face in her mind.
(yes friends dadi most of time talk herself coz she will be alone wen Maan n Mishty are saath saath , other wise dadi n Mishty rocks)

Her thought disturb by Dev n Pari n Maan is rudely bring to present from his Mishtyland while Mishty is all in food ignoring the world for her dear golgappe.

Dev : Hello Mr.Khurana , Congratulation for the award .
Maan ( back in MSK mode): Thank you Mr.Chopra.

Dev (taken back by his behavior) : Well Mr. Khurana meet my wife Pari.

Pari : Hello n Maan just nod his head.

Maan said meet my Dadi, Dadi said her hello to them n my wife but he is intrupt by Pari who say I know n didn't see Dev expression who is watching Maan's angry expression.

Maan (in cold voice) : Mrs.Chopra its bad manners to intrupt some one n its worst for them who interrupt Maan Singh Khurana, I hope u understand this , said last line looking at Dev. Then to Pari now meet my wife Mrs. Mishty MSK n look at Mishty lovingly who lift her head that moment only n pass him a sweet smile n again dip her head in her food.
After sometym Mishty said she is feeling tired n want to go home n completely ignore Dev n Pari presence n Dadi just muffle her laugh seeing their nautanki.

Maan then said to his asst. to make an announcement on his behalf that there is party on Khurana Palace for Navratri n take leave from the venue with his family.

Dev n Pari just seeing whole drama in front of their eyes , Pari is miffed after meeting with Khurana family n cursing Maan in her mind n thought that she will take her badla in his party for her insult.

While in Limo , Maan , Mishty n Dadi having gala tym after seeing Dev n Pari pale faces.

Precap : Maan n Misty moment n some past

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Edited by Kool_Naina - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow . Awesome
Poor dadi. Lol
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update
poor dadi maaneet k bech fas jati hai 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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POOR DADI
THEIR NAUTANKI MAKES HER EMBARRASED
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: goldenmoon

nice update
poor dadi maaneet k bech fas jati hai 😆



thnk you
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Posted: 11 years ago
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read bac to back...great story...interesting story ...curious to know what happened in the past
please tell us soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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read all the 4 parts in one go..simply a wonderful update...i sense that dev 😡and pari😡 have some in involvement in geet past..lovely maaneet moments..😳pls cont soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Just loved it read all part in one go

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