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Posted: 12 years ago
#81
Yh i love it sooo far but yh evwrypne wants viren to be alive so y dont u change that abit..
like jeevika was married for a few days her husband died and then viren entry??
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82


nice i loved it
its so awesome
ur so amazing writer
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
please continue, i am sure we will enjoy every bit of it...
please PM me,,thanks in advance :):):)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
u should cont it i m loving the story
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
plz continue dear!!
u can have re-entry of viren!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
its a nice one
but if viren himself is dead then it doesn't feel good to read
maybe u can modify the story by making it look like jeevs married to someone else n that person is dead n the man she met in plane is actually viren...


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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
I have no complains about this SS..I was just a little confused!..
But it seems interesting & I would definitely want to read further so please continue...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
please pease continue in love with this story
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
Hi Guys!Thank you for the feedback. Here is the next update. I hope you like it. I have decided on changing the story a bit. So don't feel bad I won't give it a dark ending. I need to think and so cannot promise a quick update. For Pm leave a comment stating the same and I shall add you. But to receive a Pm you need to comment on my work regularly. Thankyou once again for the great response to my work.
Chapter 2

"Destiny. Luck. Future. No one has a hold on them. You can never be sure of what they have in store for you. Viren was my world. My love, my friend, my husband, my family. my happiness. He was my universe. Our life was perfect. As in picture perfect.

" We got married three years ago. He was forty. I was twenty. Our wedding was a very simple affair, he didn't like people, lights, noise around. For him his world was his mom and me. It was just the three of us that night in the temple, when we entered in the scared bond of marriage.

"Without further talks we sat in the car and headed back to our house. The silence within me calming my mind. The sky was dark. Heavy rain poured on the wind-screen reducing visiblity. The thunder, the roar increasing with each passing second. The horizon would light up with streaks of lightening. Gusts of winds blew against our car.

"Viren was not liking that. He hated stormy nights. He liked the more calm and tranquil nights. When there was hardly any sound.

"The traffic was completely blocked. There were people. There were cars. There was sound. There was life! Viren did not like this. He loved the dull, dark desserted street where there was hardly any sign of life.

"He was different, very different. No one can ever be like Viren. Unlike all others. He had an enigmatic charm. A mysterious personality. A strange charisma.

"I loved him! We were so content, happy and satisfied of life before that one night when thinks changed completely. Life changed. I changed!

"Viren was no more. He left me all alone in this world. Forever. He never came back. Why? May be he never wanted to come back. He hated life! He hated the people! He hated this world. But he didn't hate me then why did he leave me? Why did he leave his mom?

"I have so many questions but no one answers then. Viren must know the answers but he doesn't come back to give me the answers ? Where will I find my answers? Tell me!"

"Jeevika control yourself. I am sorry I shouldn't have asked about your husband."

"Why are you sorry? But tell me do you have the answers. I have gone crazy looking for the answers, but no one has them. Mom says I should go to New York. She said Viren is waiting for me over there. That means I will get my answers over there? But how can he be there, when everyone says he is already dead?"

"Jeevika I think you should take some rest, better go to sleep. The flight will land in about three hours. I will wake you up a couple of minutes before landing."

"But my answers?"

"You will get them soon."

Jeevika nodded slightly and closing her eyes instantly dozed off to sleep.

Do leave a comment and press the like button. Thank you for the feedback. This update is for Mehwish 123. No your idea was not bad, lets see if I can incorporate it in some other story though!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90

UnRes

Idhar bhi first one to comment Yayyy

Ur concepts are very interesting

It's a treat to read ur ff

It's amazing

Loved it

Continue soon

Thanks for the pm

Edited by Virika11 - 12 years ago

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