Virika SS:Destiny Updated last chap Pg18

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Shicksha

@romanticgurl070

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#61

nice one

but confused abt the air hostess called jeevs 'mrs jeevika viren'

then who is that guy with her on plane

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silverash

@silverash

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Viren's dead...hmmm interesting!!! thanks for the Pm and pls update the next part soon :)

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princesshelen

@princesshelen

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Juz read all...awesome...plz pm me when u continue...

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sushmakryan

@sushmakryan

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#64

nice continue soon thanks for the pm

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Jujuk

@Jujuk

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#65

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Hi Guys !I read all your comments and realized that you didn't like the story cause Viren ( Jeevika's husband ) is dead. I basically started this as a dark story but I don't know what to do now. Already the current track of the show is depressing and I don't want you people to feel more sad after reading my story.Please help me and tell me should I continue the story or not? I have written one part, in case you guys want me to continue I will post that soon.I will make my decision by reading the response to this post. I might as well change the story a bit!Thank you !

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Hajra

@-Haju-

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

Whatever u write is awesome so go ahead.

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Shruthi

@MaaNeeTLuV

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#67

I think u meant my husband is dead...is said by jeevika's in a angry way to de stranger to ignore him rite!!!! Or really is he dead?! Anyways don't stop it!! Continue

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Latika Gurung

@-Latty-

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#68

i have no problem with the storyline dear...!! or may be u can make the re-entry of viren as everyone want him to alive...as its ur story so u can do anything but please continue ur story dear...!!