WelCoMe to ABHIYA OS Celebration Updated-Page-150 JULY 30th

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Mandy

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Posted: 12 years ago

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..juhi..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#312

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yay!!!!!! i m ist after so many days

firstly mandy i m so so so so sorry for replying so late😭

now coming to the update...it was just amazing fabulous👏 i m so speechless after reading it... god it was so so amazing!!!

and wat the hell is this??????😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 kitni bar kaha hai don't underestimate ur work and urself😡 ab se aisa nai bolna got it😡

Edited by -juhi-lily- - 12 years ago

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tamoha(tora)

@..tora.tangled.

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Posted: 12 years ago

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tanzieee!!wow!it was amazinggg!👏!i'm speechless...it's so beautiful..each and every line..every emotion..was so perfect..so fairytale like!!and the storyline was fantastic!!kudos to u tanz!!!love love loved it!!⭐️

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--geny--

@--geny--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#314

res mannu ...ab aayi tu...nw...revenge...ha ha ha...lets c...ur magic..

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Alicia thelwell

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Posted: 12 years ago

#315

wow great os plz update soon
thanks for the pm

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.SmokeySilence.

@.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#316

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Sorry for late unres 😳 First of all I want to get a danda and bang it on your head for worrying so much and underestimating yourself 😡 😡 😡

It was a very true creative piece of writing, passionate and real dark story with wonderful, strong characters, fabulous writing style and right amount of passion, dark attraction, supernatural elements, suspense. it only makes you eager to read. I read it until 4 am of the morning and in single go I read it thrice. I loved it. 👏 👏 I have never read a slayer slayer story so it was even more interesting for me thn it already is.

I loved Pia's feistyness, strength and courage. Abhay's character and his determination to find his brother, his attraction and control towards Pia, their growing bonding everything.

Ihave a feeling siddarth is a vampire now or is it possible he is also responsible for Arnabs dad's death which might caught rift between Pia and Abhay 😕 just a wild guess. anyways, their passion is undeniable and I cant wait to read more 😳 Augustus is interesting and please update soonish. i love the supernatural things you write. 👏

totally hats off for the concept. total unique and this is what i called creativity. 👏

Edited by Phoenix.Xeelan - 12 years ago

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bookworm-ALS--

@bookworm-ALS--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#317

Mandiiieee!!!
U better post the other part soon!
I am truly speechless by this one... This OS is electrifying. Like, seriously.

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Gals

@Cute_Gal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#318

dat was awesome..
continue soon wit d 2nd part..
thanxx for d pm.

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Prima :D

@Trouble.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#319

@Tanzie-sorry for not commenting on ur OS

it was magicalBeautifully written <3

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Mandy's OS-will comment after reading =D

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tamoha(tora)

@..tora.tangled.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#320

ress...i already know it will be awesome😊

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first and foremost don't u dare have any second doubts about posting the second part!!!its an absolute musttt!!!!😆

okay now coming to the update...see i told u even before reading that it would be awesome!!and i was so so right!!👏the concept..the way u wrote...rather painted such a realistic picture in front of my eyes..piya and abhay as slayers...Trannsylvania...the descriptions...all were fabulously written... i love a feisty piya..and i love this piya here...and abhay here is also droolworthy(of course he always is)..⭐️. ⭐️

that training session reminded me a bit about vampire academy u know..😊... but i loved to see the sparks flying there😳..both tryng to show how unaffected they are by the other😆

wonder what the mystery is surrounding sid...have the vampires really turned him into a vampire?😕 but as augustus says..the question is...why??😕

and is there more to augustus than meets the eye??eager to find out...each and every character here is interesting...

i like augustus...why was he given the mark of cain?😕

and ouch that last part..abhay was a little mean..😕

update soon yaar...i really can't wait😆

Edited by ..tora.tangled. - 12 years ago