FF: Rectifying Mistakes - Ch2 on Pg2

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Nicely written ⭐️ ..

Glad to see an FF in this forum ... Keep writing

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PrateeK

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Wow..!!! Great👏 Nice FF..!! KEEP WR8ING..!!😃

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Shira

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Posted: 13 years ago

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lovely os..😊

keep writing,,😊

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Tacker_Holic

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Posted: 13 years ago

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"LET ME FINISH, MUM. YOUR MARRIAGE WITH DAD FAILED BUT WHY WERE YOU TRYING TO MAKE MINE FOLLOW YOUR. WAS IT TO PROVE TO YOU THAT IM YOUR SON BECAUSE I FAILED IN MY MARRIAGE TO. BECAUSE OF YOU, JUST BECAUSE OF YOU SHE'S IN A COMA BECAUSE OF YOUR CONDITION. THE CONDITION THY I SHOULDNT HAVE AGREED TO. WHAT WAS PANKHURI DOING THERE? SHE WAS TRYING TO PROTECT YOU AND NANU BUT I WAS THE ONE WHO WAS MEANT TO PROTECT HER. NANU AND PREETI MAASI BOTH THOUGHT PANKHURI WAS THE PERFECT DAUGHTER-IN-LAW BUT YOU ALWAY THOUGHT THE WORST. WERE YOU SO INSECURE ABOUT SHARING YOUR SON."

I love these lines out of the whole part! 👏 Chapter 2 was tense but also entertaining seeing the reaction of Adi I could picture it infront of my own eyes! it felt real! I thoroughly enjoyed it! Cant wait for Chapter 3 to be up so I can see Angry, Restless Adi again! 😃😃 Well Done! 👏

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