Devil's Haunted Love (FF):Part 18,19/Blg Lk-Pg 129:1 May - Page 15

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PART 2

She was lost' lost in the Haunted love tat the devil had for her. She was surrounded by this haunted love and the more she tried to come out the more she was haunted by the devil and she was living a haunted life and today was the day when she would cry and hide herself deep in dark so tat she would not think about this day every month. It was the day when he would show his face and his haunted love for her. She was lost in her own world when her mother Rano entered her room.. a house which was not their own but a haunted house where they were forced to leave, and the moment she saw her baby daughter, the one who never wanted reason to smile and dance was now a lifeless body. Rano slowly sat on the bed caressing her hair making Geet to jerk in fear but the moment she saw her mother she hugged her hard and cried her fear out Maa' woh.. today.. I want to hide Maa.. I want to run away.. Rano was helpless and cursed herself tat she failed to keep her daughter safe from all this and with a determined voice she said get ready Geet' we need to get out from here before he comes.. Geet looked up at Rano with questions in her eyes there's no time beta.. just get ready.. I know where to go now..



Rano pushed Geet inside the washroom and hurried down to just prepare a simple breakfast for them. She knew tat she was inviting problems for her daughter but at least she would be happy tat she tried keeping her away from tat Devil. Geet was all down dressed in simple salwar suit while Rano made her to have her breakfast and at once left the house only to be stopped by the guards who were there for them. Geet looked at them with fear while Rano gave them a cheesy smile woh kya hain na' there's a small puja at the neighborhood and if you don't mind can we leave' its good tat she gets blessings before your boss takes her away. The guard looked at Rano and than at Geet and said Sorry Mam.. but we have orders tat she cant leave today anywhere. Rano yet gave them a sweet smile and said did I say tat she is going for whole day.. just for few minutes and we will be back before your boss comes to pick her.. so if you don't mind than can I take my own daughter with me for the puja Rano said this while she gestured Geet to speak as she knew if she says so than they would be able to go hmm.. we will be back before he comes.. I will just pray and come back..

Geet saw the guards moving away from her way while Rano smiled seeing them who answered her with their eyes down Yes Mam.. you can.. but we will follow you. Geet looked at Rano in fear who smiled and answered why not.. chalo.. aapko bhi tho dua chahiye.. after all you all work for a devil na.. Rano pulled Geet while two guards followed them as it was just at the next lane. Rano smiled seeing Geet looking at her and softly whispered Don't be so scared baby.. see Maa will keep you away from him today na.. kal jo hoga woh dekh lenge..Geet held Rano's hand tight while her tears said how scared she was Maa.. if he comes to know.. he will.. Papa'Rano too held her hand tight assuring her tat he wont harm Papa or her. The guards who followed them saw tat they entered inside a house and decided tat they would wait outside while Rano turned to see tat they were safe for now.

It was an hour and the guards were still waiting for them to come out unknown tat the two had fled away from the back door. Rano had planned everything and she had got the best opportunity to keep her daughter away and today for the very first day she was successful though she knows wat would happen later'but being a mother she just wanted her baby to be away from him.

Maan was at their house all happy tat today he would feel his love.. his Geet in all ways as he was meeting her face to face after 1 month. It was not tat he would not see her, he would, but from far as it was she for the very first time had asked him something and he agreed to her condition tat she would only meet him once a month and today was the day he would spent with her. However the moment he entered the house he knew it was empty and his doubts were cleared when the same guards informed him wat had happen and even after 2 hours there was no sign of Rano and Geet and his anger was lashed on the guards who were hit hard on the wall dripping with blood while his eyes still boiling with anger I had warned you Geet.. warned you tat no one will come in between me and you on this day.. now be ready to pay for it..

Rano and Geet were here sitting at the lone corner of a park hiding from everyone. Rano made Geet to keep her head in her lap while she caressed her hair. Her heart filled with fear and her body shivering with the after math consequences when suddenly Rano remembered the past, which was not less than any dreadful death for them, and here she now started fearing for it when she suddenly heard Geet say Maa.. agar unhone pir se.. if he.. Maa'Rano instantly placed her fingers on her lips forbidding her from even saying those words Kuch nahi hoga.. he wont do anything baby' just sleep for some time..sleep baby.. Though Rano assured Geet but her heart feared even to think about it. She closed her eyes and opened it in a jerk just seeing her Geet's horrible past tat she had hidden from the world and the most from the Devil..and she cocooned her baby more into her who was now asleep Why Babaji..why did you do this' wat was her mistake' just 16 years..she was just 16 aur aapne.. uski zindagi se sab khushiya.. chin li.. kya manga tha humne.. sirf do pal ki zindagi and khushi.. isliye tho hum dur gaye the.. itne dur.. ki koi nahi dhoond pata.. par nahi' aaj hum phir wahi khade hain.. save my baby Babaji.. let her live her life.. please take my life..

Rano was lost is her pain when her cell buzzed bringing her out from her thoughts. She knew who it was and instantly received the call and answered No she is with me today.. I wont let him to meet her.. nahi.. nahi.. aap please.. aisa mat kahiye.. she cant take this anymore.. kuch bhi ho jaye.. aaj Geet, Maan se nahi milegi.. I wont let Maan Singh Khuranna to see her today and if he cant meet her today he wont meet her for another 1 month.. Rano heard wat the other person said but she kept quite. She knew tat if Maan does not meet Geet today he wont meet her for next 1 month as it had happened earlier when Geet was in pain due to her monthly cramps and needed to rest and tat was just a bonus as Geet was away from the Devil for 2 whole months but she did not know tat it was Maan who would never able to control himself near her and for tat reason he had avoided meeting her tat very month and this was a very different case and to say Maan was well aware about her monthly cycles now.

Maan smirked seeing the mother daughter sitting at a lone corner of the park. Wat they thought tat it would be very difficult for him to find where his Geet was. He walked smirking to himself and reaching closer he softly called out to her Geet and the moment his voice reached her ears she turned to see even before her mother could register his presence. Geet held her mother tight while Rano just kept looking at her with pain and at Maan with anger who was smiling seeing them It was nice to see you running Jaan' but don't you think tat you dear mother's needs better training in this.

Rano spitter her anger on him saying wat else can I accept from a devil like you? Maan though irked he smiled at Rano answering Than why do you even try doing such things.. Mujhse bhangna.. no chance. Maan pulled Geet as soon as he finished his words but Geet held on to her mother's hand tight while Rano pulled her towards herself raising his angerLeave..Tat was enough for Rano to leave Geet's hand and heard him say to his guards make sure she reaches home safe.. aur haan' clean up the house before I reach back with her.

Maan dragged a crying fearful Geet with him while the guards asked Rano to walk with them as they knew tat they had to clear the mess Maan had created at their house in anger. Though Rano walked but her thoughts only lingered on how come Maan knew tat Geet and she was here and before she could sit inside the car she heard him say once again Kya hain na.. it was not so difficult for me to find you here when you talked with Savitri devi Khuranna' so next time make sure tat you don't talk to her.Tats when Rano realized tat Maan had traced their location from the call which Savitri Devi had made her.

He sat on his rocking chair while she on bed sitting at the far end hugging her knees. His eyes holding on to her each moment and he quite enjoyed the way she was reacting to him even if it was fear but he did have an effect on her. Geet did not dare to see him but her tears did not leave her eyes even for a moment while Maan enjoyed the music which he was listening while his eyes feasted her small petite form which was meant for him.

Yeh Jism Hai Toh Kya
Yeh Rooh Ka Libhaas Hai
Yeh Dard Hai Toh Kya
Yeh Ishq Ki Talaash Hai
Fanaa Kiya Mujhe
Yeh Chahne Ki Aas Ne
Tarah Tarah
Shiqast Hi Hua

His hands and fingers ached to rip her clothes while his lips and his hardness ached to make love to her in the wildest way. His thoughts lingering and imagining a scene where she would hold him and guide him into her while he would rip her soul and body with his intensity.

Raza Hai Kya Teri
Dil-o-jahan Tabaah Kiya
Sazaa Bhi Kya Teri
Wafaa Ko Bewafa Kiya
Wah Re Zindagi
Se Yun Mujhe Judah Kiya
Kahan Kahan
Phirun Main Dhoondhta

Raza Hai Kya Teri
Dil-o-jahan Tabaah Kiya
Sazaa Bhi Kya Teri
Wafaa Ko Bewafa Kiya
Wah Re Zindagi
Se Yun Mujhe Judah Kiya
Kahan Kahan
Phirun Main Dhoondhta

His eyes moved down to her legs that were partly exposed due to the way she was hugging her knees. It created a sense of pain in him for not being able to kiss tat skin which was visible to him. His life revolved around her but she only gave him punishment for loving her.

Wahan Jahan
Tu Hi Mera Libhaas Hai
Wahan Jahan
Teri Hi Bass Talaash Hai
Wahan Jahan
Tujhi Pe Khatam Aas Hai
Wahi Shuru
Wahi Pe Dafan Jaan Hai

Wahan Jahan
Tu Hi Mera Libhaas Hai
Wahan Jahan
Teri Hi Bass Talaash Hai
Wahan Jahan
Tujhi Pe Khatam Aas Hai
Wahi Shuru
Wahi Pe Dafan Jaan Hai

His mind wondered at the moment when he learnt tat she ran away in the morning and he was madly searching her. The each second and minute without her was killing him and finally his search was over when he came to know where she was and now he wanted to calm himself in her.. take her and make her feel the pain he was in. The pain she gives him for loving her.

Yeh Jism Hai Toh Kya
Yeh Rooh Ka Libhaas Hai
Yeh Dard Hai Toh Kya
Yeh Ishq Ki Talaash Hai
Fanaa Kiya Mujhe
Yeh Chahne Ki Aas Ne
Tarah Tarah
Shiqast Hi Hua

Geet'his voice sent shivers down her spine making her fear him. He smiled seeing the way she was reacting to him and finally he said I want you..his words were not less the needles which were hurting her and next set of words from him made her to fall hitting her head on the bed post I said strip or I will rip your clothes'' ripping you apart for making me go through this.

Precap: The Devil'. And the innocence

Do like and comment.. guys let me know guys wat you think about this story.. it just the start and I need time to go with it.. it has many unknown facts which will b revealed here.. I have given many hints in this update which will slowly revealed with time.. but please I need likes the way I get for my other FF and comments..

So me waiting with my waiting look for your love..


NEXT : PART 3

Edited by sdlife19 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hmmm no words...

dont know what to comment...

ur updates makes me speechless
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Posted: 12 years ago


wow lovely lovely update.. te way rano taking geet to hide from my devil, but my devil some how find his geet, his angel.. te way my devil taking geet from rano was so lovely scenes.. te way my devil just watching his geet with out touching her was so lovely.. oh now my devil wants his geet, want to make love to her, i love wen my maan force his geet, it show how he owns her, his possession, his treasure..i love te update so so much.. now my devil ka love or geet ki fear?
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di i am really scared of the next part i hope maan doesnt force geet

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