Ansh FF -Terror is awakening (2nd chapter - pg 5)

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Uma

@adi2512

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Donji...

Apne yeh kya kiya...

ShYa ko best friends bana diya...😲😆

You've ended it at an eventful moment...

Pls update soon...😳

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tistaa

@tistaa

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#42

WOW yeh suspence really scaring hota jaa raha hai 👏 ekdom filmy story ki tarha hai aur yeh new officer kaun hai? really eagerly waiting for the next update aur jara jaldi update kar na next time plzzz 😳

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AryaS

@AryaS

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Don - Tu ye suspense pe suspense create kar rahi hai...body in the freezer...nice idea 👍🏼

And Shya fir se yaha ek saath...😆

Ab intezaar nahi hota Pratz, jaldi se Shiv aur Anandi ka aamna saamna kara do...their nok jhonk...both investigating together... aila I have lots of hope with this OS...so update soon. 😈

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angel

@FairyAngel12

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

suspense... Jagiya shiv friends. Plz update soon.

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Vishakha_Sakhi

@Vishakha_Sakhi

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Wow Prati, this is awesome yaar!

Very thrilling! 👏 👏

Ab jaldi new update likho sur post karo... make a new record of updating fast this time! 🤣

I can't wait for AnSh meeting!

Edited by Vedo - 12 years ago

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roberoi

@roberoi

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Evil madam is proving again and again she is evil 😈

kitni aur ladkiyon ko maregi Don???

Thought Shivjee bhi khufiya IB officer honge? Maybe hain 😉

Suspense gehra raha hai aur logon ki saasein atki hui hain...😛...kitni khush ho rahi hai Don🤣

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MercurialMedusa

@MercurialMedusa

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Oh wow.. so J is S's friend and is cheating him and the whole world by saying he's a chess player jabke he's a gunda 🤔 kya twist tha.. maine toh socha bhi nahin.. and poor Anandi lost the last clue which lead to her sister's murderer... I think now her only hope is S as he's the one who met her sister before she died.

Prati sabse pehle big hug to u for the long update 🤗 u continued weaving a gripping story.. so yeh toh bole bagair banta hain that its awesome.. I am already looking forward to the next part.. haaaye finally AnSh will meet.. can't wait jaldi se update karo 🤗

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AlmondCat

@AlmondCat

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#48

It is so nail biting!!! felt like I was reading a mystery/thriller novel...awesome Don ji!👏👏👏

thought Shiv would be a cop...hmmm interesting twists...Jagya and Shiv best of friends😕...

next part A and S meet 😳...wow looking forward for the next update!

Edited by sbadam - 12 years ago

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Manshi

@Mithi_vani

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#49

😲 Yeh...kya Donji... Jagya Shiv ka Best frd.. 😲 , aur wo ghadhesar.. chess player..(actuly Don ka rt hand) 😆 ...(if he is not actuly gadhesar in it, than its change) aur yeh... Murder mistery...ohhh... Its realy breath taking... Ek..aur murder... Omg... Pls...pls..pls...update soon...i m eager to know wt will happen next...

Edited by Manshi - 12 years ago