AshNi OS#13: Kaise Unhe Main Pukaroon-Complete/pg1

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parmarA

@parmarA

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#41

sorry cool-sk for late reply,i don't know how i missed this? but read it in one seat,my like button is not working. But love the journey of Ashutosh and nidhi.so no generation gap,only love love and love.Ashutosh's eternal love for nidhi and nidhi's desire for ashu are the hightlight's of the chap,thanks for the good os.again sorry for late reply

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Anu

@Libra

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Hi, Ana

Beautiful OS

I absolutely loved it.

She third part was to die for.

I loved the whole saari and blouse issue.

Ashutosh is so cute.😳

So they have been married 8

Months huh? And abhi bhi

The honeymoon is still going on.😉

I lved how you ended with her being pregnant.😳

Ana I wish u could have continued with this story.😳

But am waiting anxiously for ur next one.😃

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saibanu

@saibanu

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

I just loved this OS Ana

Your nidhi and ashu are very sweet , they set out first as stranger and then they got married , fell in love and now baby ...!!!

Cho cute , Loved it to the core

Thank you for this treat 😊

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Pooja

@Pooja_0910

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Final part of this OS was so Beautiful...just loved it...Ashu is so sweet and caring...i like ur little surprised in the end...

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hilarious44

@hilarious44

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

OMG...

Part-3 was just WOW..😳😳.

I loved loved loved it...☺️

It was adorable n it was HOTTT...😃.

Beautifully written..👏.

Ashni were awesome...😳

The sari part was☺️...

The love making scene n the way ashu got to know about his baby was mindblowing.👍🏼...

His emotions..👏.

ROCKING OS...👏👏

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mompy

@mompy

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

That was beautiful, Loved every bit of it. The way u ended it was 2 good. Plz bataiye na next OS kab likh rahi hai aap. Do write soon. Luv ya mompy

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Tanvi Dandime

@TANVI_SEXY

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

AWESOME UPDATE👍🏼👍🏼

Loved it❤️

and thanks for the pm😃

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Bishal

@SwastikAshNi

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Hmmm,Arrange Marriage-Interesting subject.Road-side Tea Stall to "You belong to me" to "Baby Ashutosh"-the Journey is so well-described in such a limited space.Well done Ana...

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