AshNi OS#13: Kaise Unhe Main Pukaroon-Complete/pg1 - Page 4

Originally posted by: Libra

Ana

Sorry for the late review.

Been really busy with the diwali preps.

And i apologize that even now i will not be able to give a detailed and

long review that i always give. Am in a rush.

Just wanted to let you know, I am loving this story.

Young Ashutosh, beautiful Nidhi. Arranged marriage.👏

Already in love with it.

Then Ashutosh and her acceptance for the marriage, and Ashutosh's text to Nidhi, that

was sooo cute.😳

So no shabji is texting every night huh?😉

And also loved both the younger sisters.

Nice that they have in house match makers.😆

Loved the Chai wala scene.😃

Waiting for the next update.😃

Thanku so much anu g...
Am glad you liked the story g...
No prob with the rush...i know festive season is on...
Young ashu n beautiful nidhi...are always my dav to write on...
And arrange marriages are a dreamy state ...n my fav topis...
Yup, sahab g textin every night to make it a good nyr...n they got naught sisters...
Will update asap

Originally posted by: niniborn2rule

loving the os ana update soon...

Thanku somuch nini... 😊

Beautiful update...Ashu's messages for Nidhi was too sweet...Firstly i thought why you send Anji and Sapna with them khamkha kabab me haddi but later i loved the way this two girls tease Nidhi and give some alone time afterall its new generation hehe...Tea stall become most popular place for AshNians and i like and enjoyed the sweet moments of AshNi..:):):)

Just waiting for final part...

when is the last part Ana.

hey ana kahan ho yaar

itna enjoy karne mein aap busy hogaye ke you forget that aap

chap update baaki hai ,pls do it soon
waiting waiting

Guys...i m gonna update the next part of BTOOMH
After that i will start writing its next chap...
Sorry, wasnt feeling well from last few days so couldnt work...on anything

Take care
Ana

Yaaay

Originally posted by: saibanu

Yaaay

I was about to ask you for next chapter ofBTOOMH...Please update soon and this one too😊

Get well soon , Take care ...

Haha sai
I actually got blackmailed to write next part of btoomh, so have to do that...
And for this os's last part, i am actually blackmailing...no...emotional blackmailing others...haha...
Will write asap as i m working from mob na, n its not that convinent for me...

os completed guys...
hope u all will like this last part...

tc
ana