My first fan-fic : Meghamalhar

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Friends, I am so inspired by so many wonderful writers around. I am starting a new fan-fic. 😳 😳This is my first. Do give your comments, positive or negative😊.

Megha malhar

Introduction: The title of my fan-fic is Meghamalhar. Meghamalhar is a raaga. It is known as the music of rain. I chose this title because the background of the story is music based. Someone is waiting for that rain in her summer.

Characters: As the story goes I will introduces all the characters.

Saloni Singh: A famous classical singer who lives in Dalhousie

Manasi: (17 yr old) Saloni daughter (father's name will be revealed later😉)

Bhabho: Caretaker and Saloni's biggest support and help

Shikha: Manasi's best friend

Manasi Singh is getting ready for college. Today Manasi is a late for her Veena lessons after which she will go to college. She runs down the stairs and tries to walk out of door after waving a bye to her mom. But Saloni stops her there and asks her daughter to have breakfast before anything. Saloni tells Manasi that a good breakfast is a healthy start for the day and she can't allow her daughter to go out without having it. Manasi knows that no amount of excuses will save her so she makes faces at Saloni and sits for breakfast. Bhabho smiles at this mother-daughter nokjhonk and brings juice for her.

Bhabho: Beta! This shade of blue really suits you.

Manasi with a smile: After all Ma's selection is always best.

All three laugh. Saloni kisses Manasi's forehead.

(Manasi is wearing a dark blue salwar kameez with small white flowers and a blue duatta with white lace. Minimal make-up, long and straight hair)

Manasi decides to skip veena class today because it's already late for college. She is in the committee for college fest this year. She ties the ends of dupatta in a knot and hurries to the college in her scooty. On the way she stops at Shikha's house. Both of them praise the beauty of autumn in Dalhousie. Shikha tells Manasi that her duppatta's knot has come out. Manasi was about to tie it when a cool breeze whisks her dupatta away. Manasi runs after it but it falls on a pit of mud. She stands there with tears in her eyes. Just then a red car stops and a tall guy gets out of it and picks the dupatta. He gets a bottle of aquafina from his car and washes the mud off and starts walking towards stunned Manasi. Manasi just stands there gazing at the guy. He is wearing a dark blue turtle neck sweater and dark blue glares. He introduces himself as Abhay Rathore.

Abhay with a killer smile😳: I believe this is yours.

Manasi: Haa…………an. Yes! It's mine. (still gazing at him)

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I will continue the rest later.

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CarulinaTina thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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great job! looks like everyone is writing stories!! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hey anju good job. Way to go. 👏 👏 I am so glad. The more writers we have the better, I am so glad I won't be in pressure of handling and writing 2 oops now 3 fan fictions. This was my dream to make saat phere as active or more active than kasam se forum. We will have more visitors wow!!Glad to inspire more people to write. We won't have dead forum any more. looking forward to your fan fic.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thanks mamis & raksha for the encouragement. i am very new at this. i was contemplating on writing for sometime now.

i am really impressed by raksha, lavanya, gurprit and my friends in kasam se section. also mamis's silly stories are creative in it's own way. so thanks to all of you for inspiring me.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hey Anjali, your work is artistic and innovative👏 Do keep it up.

I am not much (at all) of a fan-fic reader/writer but Raksha has made me read hers at least once in a while😛 so I read yours. Allow the creative juices to flow in you Anjali.

Raksha you send the fanfic bug to Anjali😆

BTW how come Bhabho is still alive and serving!😉😆

Anjali Pl don't kill me for this!😳

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: realitybites

BTW how come Bhabho is still alive and serving!😉😆

Anjali Pl don't kill me for this!😳

😆oye lavs!!! bhabho is only 68. she can even dance😆

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: anjali.nair


😆oye lavs!!! bhabho is only 68. she can even dance😆



I hope its samba, wld love to watch it! 😆 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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to tell the truth i am too lazy to read a fan-fic 😳 . have never read any. actually i prefer short stories and wanted to write one but i am too lazy to type all at once so i converted it to fan-fic 😆.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: realitybites



I hope its samba, wld love to watch it! 😆 😆

samba? haila!!!😲bhabho in revealing clothes, shaking and gyrating. are you sure you want to watch that?😆

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: anjali.nair


samba? haila!!!😲bhabho in revealing clothes, shaking and gyrating. are you sure you want to watch that?😆



Yippeee! If you can get a video mix done! 😆 😆 😆 It will be only for special members! 😉

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